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..Naina.. thumbnail
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Posted: 14 years ago
congrats to everyone who wonn and even participated :) I had an awesome time reading all the writing pieces and totally loved writing Bairi Piya also :)

Thanks a lot for the siggys...hehe they're quite awesome, and hmm the next challenge sounds greeeat!

But I'll probably end up passing on that one, we shall see hehe.... but I'm looking forward to reading the amazing entries that everyone will eventually come up with!

Cheers!
~Naina
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Posted: 14 years ago
CONGRATES TO ALL THE WINNER U ALL WERE SUPERB ALL FF ,SHORT SCENES, N POEM U ALL WERE GOOD
CONGRATES TO:
Annie
shale
honey
nj
naina n aish
khush
richa
lahari
for giving such a wonderful ff, short scene, poem
waiting for next challenge {ABHI KA PAST}sounds interesting
👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼🥳time ha
Edited by muni-loveAN - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
Congratzz eveyone! Looking forward to reading each and every one of the FF - they look awesome.


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Posted: 14 years ago
My like button isn't working 😭
Well anyway, I've said this many times...but again, a HUGE congratulations to each and everyone who wrote, voted, read, and spammed...😃
Need to discuss stuff about the next Challenge with Marausha, but there's one thing for sure...it isn't in November. We'll decide the date and other details and post it soon...😳
Looking forward to many beautiful entries from our beloved AN fans, and hopefully some more new writers as well 😉 Coz it's the idea that matters, as you could see from this challenge. We'll read everything you come up with, so there's no reason to be shy. 😉
*jhapiz*

~Khush!
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Posted: 14 years ago
Hi everyone ........
Well ..... this is going to be a long list of thank yous ........
First of all, thanks a lot, Khushi .... and Marausha .... 👍🏼 for this brilliant idea ..... this brought back our AN🤗 ..... and revived AN FC and AN FFs. It also encouraged AN fans like me to attempt to write ..... and discover a new talent within us. (atleast after receiving 3 awards, I sure hope I am not wrong in thinking that it is a talent! 🤣)
Secondly, thanks to all the fabulous readers .... without you guys .... I would have never written .... your comments and 'likes' encouraged me to write more and more. And I really thank u guys for putting up with my long long long updates ....... and having the patience to read 26 parts and still ask for an epilogue ...... 😆
And Sheenu ..... you and Khushi were the best ... I loved your spamming .... and your crazy comments .... they made me laugh so much ... and kept us all come back here just to read your conversation. 🤣
And last but not the least ..... thanks to all the writers ...... for giving me company in writing .... especially Shale .... in our over enthusiasium of writing for the first time ......we both kept each other company.
And congratulations to all the winners! You guys were fabulous 👏..... love u all ...... hope that you will keep on writing AN scenes, FF and short stories .... you donot need to wait for another challenge ... do u?
And Honiieeeeee .... u better finish your FF .... else I am going to kill you .... and then you will have to come back as 'bhoot' and still complete the FF. 😆
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Posted: 14 years ago
@Rucha...It is so nice to finally hear from u....thanks a ton for ur kind words and it makes me happy to hear that u enjoy my FF's as much as I enjoy writing them!! Sorry for the delay was outta the country....now i promise I will update it fast!!

@Shale.....thank u sweets....the wedding was excellent and I had a fun time but missed u all!! First up I have to apologize that I haven't made headway into ur Ff but its a promise that I soon will and then def comment upon it....considering the comments I have read about it its gonna be excellent!!
glad u enjoyed the update and its great to be back!!

@NJ....thank u for the wishes....well the Ff is pretty much headed that way or is it?😉...glad u like Sid Modi....he is my fav too n that is the reason I guess i sketched him in much detail...I always thought they could put his character to good use but of well the CVs had another idea which pretty much is diff than mine!!....will def update faster!!

@Annie.....missed u tons too sweets!!!Everyone loves Sid even those whose life he makes hell....but its good to be back n read ur comment!!!

@Khush.....I love u too.....I love u too.....I love u three n four too ....LOL....glad u enjoyed this update girl!!

@ Jyothi...thank u dear!!

@ Muni-loveAN....thank u dear....glad u r enjoying the FF and like u...dairy wala part is my fav too!!

I am sorry to be replying late gals but please know that each of ur comments mean the world to me...I have just been sucked back into the abyss called WORK ......and I will def complete this FF soon!!


Now a special Thank u too Khushi n Marusha for the wonderful challenge they created, reviving our AN spirit!!

Thank u to all the participants.....n those i haven't read or commented for...I promise I will!!

Also a heartfelt gratitude who voted for me and made me win so many awards.....in spite of the FF being incomplete.....love u all and thank u.....which can never be enough to u all!!


HONEY
Edited by hapinezz13 - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
You know what guys? We should have a crazy commentor and crazy spammer award.......lmao....any guesses for the tied winners?
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Posted: 14 years ago
LOVE WAGER

PART14

A happy Nikki walked on clouds to the hospital. It was a beautiful morning, the sky looked bluer than ever, the slight wind, which otherwise irritated Nikki actually felt soft against her skin and she closed her eyes and let the sun touch her everywhere. She was even humming today and smiling to herself…..a thing which she had scoffed at and called filmy when she had seen her friends do it or even read about it. She felt like breaking into a dance or give a passerby a hug…..coz she felt like it.

It was a good day.

Nikki entered her cubicle humming "aaj main upar…..aasman neeche" softly under her breath and sat down on her chair and started going around in circles on her chair. She hugged herself and let out a contented breath.

Switching on her computer, she logged into her email and found an email from Abhi amongst the many other she had received and a grin lit her beautiful face. She decided to read it last saving it to be read at leisure. Nikki went through her other mails like a tornado trying to get to Abhi's mail but in a few seconds gave up the futile effort and clicked his mail.

Hey Nikki,

Oops ….hey sweetheart…..missing you already…..can't wait to see you when I get to office.

Love,

Abhi

Nikki touched the screen lovingly, her hands stilling on his name and closed her eyes to remember the morning.

"Excuse me" a voice interrupted her beautiful thoughts and she looked up to find a delivery boy standing with a bouquet of soft pink Calla Lillies, waiting for her to sign for them.

"For me?" Nikki looked up confused and he looked into his notebook, "Dr. Nikita Malhotra?" he inquired and Nikki nods.

"Then these are for you" he hands them to her and she signs for them. Once the delivery boy leaves, she looks for a card and finds a small card with Abhimanyu Modi's name in his writing and smiles. She places them at the corner of her desk and touches them reverently. The flowers were breathtakingly beautiful, the softest pink she had ever seen. She bent to inhale their soft fragrance and breathed a "Thank you Abhi". She took out her phone and dialed his number but after a few rings it went to voicemail.

She assumed that he must be driving so she decides to wait but then messages him instead.

"Where are you?"

No reply.

She sits down irritated and then waits tapping her feet, muttering to herself. After a full minute of tapping her feet, as she goes to pick her phone, it rings and she excitedly picks it up.

"Hello" she breathes into it and hears her best friend's voice on the other end.

"Oye Nikki….you seem to have forgotten us dude" Armaan's baritone rings in her ear. Nikki though irritated that it wasn't Abhi returning her call, pastes a smile on her face and starts talking to her friend. They catch up and he gets her up to date on all what was going on in their life. In the midst of the conversation, she hears the beep of another call and reads Abhi's name and decides to make him stew.

"I heard that Modi dude is in Chicago….same hospital?" Armaan asks and Nikki smiles at the way he chose to interrogate her.

"Yes Armaan……he is….actually he and I are working together too" and hears Armaan curse.

"Armaan" she chides and he starts about Modi when she tells him that he isn't bad after all.

"Dude….you better be kidding" Armaan jokes.

"No…really I mean" when she hears another call coming in, "Look I have to go…..will call you soon" they exchange goodbyes and Nikki picks up the phone.

"What took you so long to call back Abhi" Nikki greets Abhimanyu's call.

"Where are you Nikita?" Sid's voice asks her and she checks the number. It was Abhi's. What was Sid doing answering that.

"In the office……Sid where is Abhi?" she asks.

"I'll be right there" he cuts the call and Nikki looks at the phone astonished. Sid…..he was a piece alright….now what was he upto she wonders smilingly and looks back at the flowers lovingly.

In five minutes, Sid stops by and she sees his red rimmed eyes.

"What's wrong Sid?" she inquires and he attempts to smile.

"Let's go Nikki" he orders in a choked voice.

"W…where?" she asks, her eyes scanning his face and her heart beating hard. Sidhhant Modi was scaring her.

"You'll see" he says walking out and Nikki follows him, running to match his strides.

"Sid…..what ?" she tugs at his sleeve and asks but he keeps walking.

"Sid…please….you are scaring me…..what's wrong?" she asks and looks around to see where they were going to.

"ICU…..Sid what….why are we….Sid?" she steps in front of him, trying to block his path.

"I don't have time to waste Nikki….lets go" he pushes her and strides towards the ICU, where Aarti Modi is pacing.

"Mam" Nikki reaches near her and Sid exchanges a look of pain with his mother.

"What?" Nikki looks from one to the other, "Why are we here?" she asks and sees both of them look towards the ICU window and Nikki follows their gaze and watches doctors trying to resuscitate someone.

"Who?" she asks her mouth drying up and her heart beating as it would rip out of her heart.

"Who S…Sid?" she asks clutching his hand refusing to think on her own.

"Bhai" he replies softly and Nikki gasps at his answer, refusing to believe what she had heard.

"Abhi…..no….no …..no" she wails and sits down in shock.

This wasn't happening to her…..it couldn't …..her Abhi couldn't be the one with the team of doctors inside the ICU…..struggling for his life.


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Posted: 14 years ago
Honiiieeeeee .........
I am going to really kill u for this. It better be a prank! Abhi in ICU? 😭
No way, girl! But I hate u for this one ......😡
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: ANfan_1810

Honiiieeeeee .........

I am going to really kill u for this. It better be a prank! Abhi in ICU? 😭
No way, girl! But I hate u for this one ......😡



🤣 🤣 😈

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