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Niyu-

@Niyu-

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 15 years ago

#31

Hii HW

howz u??

OMG did nt talk to u today :(

hope to talk to u soon..!!

Chal i guess tunme kaha e u wont be o n frm tmr right? will miss u :(

lolz as u knw mera bakwaas beech beech mein chaalo ho jaata hai 😆 radz ke FF mein to dekhti hoi hodi 🤣

Lolz now bak to OS.. Hmmm u knw never read a OS like this where u can imagine any character but yeah must tell u r an awesome writer.. so keep writing more and more.. loved it seriously.!!

Ok now well there is an utter confusion🤣 u knw like i had to imagine 2 couples🤣 u knw i guess SaJan and AR..(KaJen or KaSh😳😳😳)!! 🤣 i love them❤️❤️

🤣 i loved it till in confusion hmmmm AR or SG????🤣 i guess both 🤣🤣🤣

Loved it awesome job do write more

Love Ya

Pari urff bhootni (bhoot bhagoo)🤣🤣🤣

Edited by ..NiyaPari.. - 15 years ago

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princess52

@princess52

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 15 years ago

#32

hey ada

i didntknew ur a writr as well

amaizng yaar

i just loved the OS

it was simple ..u didnt draged it n amaizng

plzz do write some more

love ya habs

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Nikki

@nikki18

Inactive

Posted: 15 years ago

#33

it's wonderful Adya!!👏

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Avinash

@lucario

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 15 years ago

#34

i imagined it on sajan as i imagine on tht only....secondly it was really a very nice try...loved all the descriptions...and povs...specially the girls pov whn she said truth in dare....but abt party na....i felt tht confession got hurried.....thoda aur delay hota to aur acha ho sakata tha...like spotlight falls on her...and another on him...others all r dark...thn he say those words...and says will u like to be my soulmate....my partner....she says yes,,,tear falls and she runs to him..he takes out a diamond ring and puts in her hand and thy kiss and some dance sequnce...awesome ho jata....magar still i liked the last lines...very well matched the title....god going...keep it up