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Posted: 14 years ago


the next will be posted soon...😊


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Posted: 14 years ago


will surely continue soon dear...😊

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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: ronojoy_ria

hi 😊

so this time u have up the fic on time and thank u for that👏
ok now without much adu lets talk about the up😊😉
so seher tells agni to take her for a dinner date😉
agni who had mixed feeling in his heart was finding really hard to face and take this invitation
he was going through a tough situation 😭while seher had a great expectation from this dinner date 😳
she wanted to make this date a perfect one by removing all the misunderstanding all the worries from agani's heart 😊
so they finally goes to their much awaited dinner date😳
agni took sher to his farmhouse which really beautifully decorated 😊
seher was really surprised and pleased with the atmosphere there😊
agni had arranged and ordered all the fav food of seher from a restuarent 😳
he made the date perfect 😊
the song was really perfect for the duo😳
now with the excentry of the situation and atmosphere they finally became one removing all the worries and all the bitterness from their heart and mind 😳
it was really a perfect date 😊
but yaar the next morning why agni is regretting for his action 😡
he should have thought about sher's feeling😭
anyways plz cont soon and pm me



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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: Iqbal Neha1

mindblowing part

i really liked the way u showed how agni and seher were in their own little world once they went on their date.The date was beautifully potrayed each moment between agni and seher was amazingly described.The songs used within the part were really good they really went with the scenes.I hope seher is able to overcome the shock when agni tells her about the divorce papers,even though agni enjoyed all his moments with seher i feel he only said to her that everything was a mistake because he feels that she doesnt love him.The starting of the part was intresting i liked the way u showed agni and seher lost in their thoughts.The scene were seher irratates agni by asking him to open the door 4 her and biting his ear was really good.I liked the reaction of prachi,milind,prithvi, and damani after seeing agni and seher together.i hope seher shares her past with the four of them so that they can help her get agni back.cant wait 2 read da next part.
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: dazzling_glory

Update was very good.

Both Seher and Agni are lost in their thoughts. Seher is trying to irritate Agni by asking him to open the car door for him. Where as Prithvi, Milind, Prachi and damini are shocked to see Adil and Seher so close. They want Adil and Seher to spend more time with each other and so they paln the weekend trip. Adil had no choice but to invite seher even though he wanted to spend some time alone.
Seher wants to make their date special...she wants to give Adil all her love and take away all his pains. While Adil plans to give Seher their divorce papers. Hope that Seher will bear this shock and still stick to her plan to win back Adil's love.
their date was indeed very romantic. Adil made sure that sab kuch Seher ki pasand ka ho.
Both of them give into their desires and share each others love. Par adil ne subah hote hi sab kharab kar diya. When will he understand that this is what Seher wants.
waiting eagerly for the next part...continue soon



will edit soon...😊
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: -purnima-

firstly 😛😛...congrats on completing 100 pages of this FF 🥳 🥳hope u have many moe to go 😃😃 ... & we see new thread for this FF soon 😃😃😃

secondly thanx 4 long part 😳😳... how long it was ... IF proved it by not letting u post it in single post 😆

beginning of part was gud 👏👏👏... sehar's way of bringing out from agni from his thots was nice 😉😉😉... poor guy 😆 😆... doesn't know what he has got into 😆 😆... & sehar is quite smart & intelligent in blackmailing 😆😆😆...she knows. how to make agni do what she wants him to do 😆😆😆...

awww agni's frnds hope their wish turns true sooner 😛😛😛... must say agni got a perfect smarty friends 😃😃😃

🤣... sehar lietrally gave heart attack to agni with her reason of not picking calls in the car 😆

coffee idea was gud 1 sehar 👏👏👏... but not liking agni's date gift 😭😭 sehar was too excited during Breakfast ... but agni is seriously working for the gift 😒...

seems Mr. Agni loved first look of his bful date 😉😉... & his date found his farm house awesome... 😆😆😆...

so "vashu" doesn't mind sehar calling him vashu 😆😆😆...& seroiusly... the dishes & date was tempting 4 me too 😆😆😆... i also want 1 date with agni 😆

lovely song by agni 😍... thank god it was not a lullaby 😆😆😆... waise i thot u wud make him sing pyaar ki kahani suno 😉😉😉

date progressed wondefully ☺️ ☺️,...initially i thot it was a dream sequence 😆 but the shocking end 😲 😲...confirmed it was not a dream 😳😳 ... awww agni thinks it was a mistake 😭😭...

wishing evrything gets well soon 😛😛... & as u said showdown in next part hope it doesnot turn too serious ... expecting both agni sehar to sort out everything at the getway weekend trip 😉 😉
😉
seems a very long comment to me 🥱🥱... u must be sleepy 😆😆😆... so...as agni said 😛😛😛 main bhi kat leti hoon 😆... oh yes continue soon 😃😃😃 like this time 😛😛😛



😆😆😆



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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: Sumi_162710

This was truly a beautiful and well...unexpected part for me!! But hey...I dont still hate Agni...Agni ko mujhse hate karwane ke liye aapko bahut mehnat karni hogi Dii...this was nothing that he did...from my point of view...hehe.😆😉😳 I mean...he is in a vulnerable state of mind...where Seher is constantly attracting him to her...and of course he wants her in his lyf...but at the same tym he has his inhibitions which dont let him think that way!! He wants to give her those divorce papers...becoz he thinks she is gonna move on...so I wud say he is very much ryt on his part!!😉😆

Ab rahi baat ye sochne ki...that why wud Seher give herself away if she didnt love him back...umm...I'll give that much consideration to Agni...bechara kitna sochega!! Waise bhi he is already very much occupied wid many confusions...so its ok!!😳

But I truly hope things go better for them in the coming parts...and well this part was wonderfully written. Unn chaaro ka dimag bhi zoro shoro se chal raha hai...gud!! And well...the romantic scene were very very nicely written...just the perfect amount of romance and privacy...hehe. 😉😆😳 And yes the pictures are very beautiful...and the bar area is perfeccct...!!!😳

Hope to get the next part soon...and well Dii...my boards start from 5th April...so my comments are gonna be delayed!! However will surely reply whenever I can...pls bear wid that!! Take care and thanks for such a lovely part...I take it as a progress in the story!!😳



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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: Sweet-Lioness

sorry yaar...3 papers baki the...isiliye late ho gayi...

sab se pahle ek baat bata...tu is ud me sabit kya karna chahti thi ke...main Raj ko kuch alag hi samjhun na...??? toh maine samajh liya...yaar yeh sach me lakhon me ek hai...ha ha ha...!!! tu chahe kitni bhi koshish kar le suri...raj ko kabhi bhi nafrat nahi kar sakti main...ooppsss...i mean to say agani...
tune hi us ka dimag kharab kiya hua hai...tabhi divorce paper ki baat aayi...!!! varna dono me toh kabhi kabhi achhe achhe scenes bhi hote the...!!! main kaise bhul sakti hun ke kuch hi ud pahle tune dono me kitne romantic scenes rakhe the...aur ab divorce...yeh sab teri hi karashthani hai...Agni ka is me koi bhi dosh nahi hai...
bichare ke dimag me tune itne sare confusions dal rakhe hain ke...us ka mind block ho gaya hai...isiliye sab kuch ulta soch raha hai...!!! toh is me Agni ka kya kasoor...sare kasoor toh tere hain na...
okkk...okk...baht ho gayi tujhe galiyan...ab thoda sa tarif kar deti hun...!!! baht hi khubshurti ke sath tune sab kuch likha hai...!!! matlab...Agni ka state of mind...us ka confusion...voh sare romantic scene...sab kuch baht badhiya tha...love it...!!! dekh Seher ke bare me kuch mat puch...!!! kyoun ke mera toh main attraction AGNI par hai na...aur vaise bhi main ladkiyon par jyada dhayan nahi deti...jab samne Raj ho toh...ha ha ha
ab main yeh hope karti hun ke...aage tu aur kuch jyada bura nahi karegi...kyoun ke yeh fic 100 pages par pahunch chuka hai...toh tera bhi toh kuch farz banta hai na is ke liye ...ha ha ha...
chal ab jaldi se next part post kar...


reserved..😊

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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: prachimishra85

Awww Precap was interesting...

waiting for update
❤️ Prachi


i'am glad you liked the precap...will update soon.😊
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: spvd

just precap se kaam nahi chalegi...will read and then comment...


hehe...i know sirf precap se kaam nahii chalega..will update soon..😊

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