phewwwww finally i managed to read whole post.first of all hats off to u the way u manage to write so long thats so beautiful.thank u so much for this surprise..
well all the three parts r nice.
u express both seher n agni feelings so beautifully.. i can imagine seher n agni's pain through the words describe by u.the pain frm which they were suffering n r suffering is jus unbearable but thats destiny plans for both of dem n god will only give dem strength to fight with every odds of their life n win their love for each other n will stay together for forever..
like the way seher try her level best to provoke agni so that he can let out all his frustration n anger n her.so that wen she tell him the cruel truth then their will be no anger n negativity within agni exist for this relationship n for his love.
like the way seher spread her jadu on agni n agni became spell bounded wit that n kissed her so deeply this tie..
so seher took 'j' element way for him.thts nice.actually its always wrk especially it the man like agni..omg he actually throw that phone i' sure seher would never expect this thg not even i hehehe..
u really beautifully describe the feelings of agni n seher wen agni ask her abt her child n then he threw his all el-ligations n tantrums on seher..how painful it was for her to even stand their....but she perfectly knws that she has to be strong otherwise she will again loss her agni..
well the note was terrific..n the dinner n sweetner thg is so hillarious..like the way she told that she is not hurt atall jus for agni so that he will able to express himself in front of her atleast..
like whole breakfast scene..
love the elevator scene wen he observe her from head to toe n his dialogue after word n the way she is blushing is so wow..
hmm so she follows him everywhere he got irritated wit this is jus awesome. so ab to she got formal permission wit damini that she will always be staying wit him that's really interesting!! love the dream sequence of seher n choice of song by u for this.
love the parts where seher dream abt her future wit agni.
like the whole update
n asusual waiting for nex one..
grt going dear....
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