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Mansi bhatia

@-Mansi-

Inactive

+ 4

Posted: 14 years ago

#761

Oh wow! This part was awesome! I loved Samrat. He cares about her so much! And OMG. Loved the last MN scene. It was superbb. I know he did wrong...but I hope he realizes his fault.

Continue soon! =D

-Mansi

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Escapist

@Escapist

Voyager

+ 3

Posted: 14 years ago

#762

res 😊

*Edited*

See Ruchi I finally commented after aeons 😉

Awesome girl ! The update was lovely touched my heart !!
and this time....for the very first time...Mayank took my heart away !
The way he spent time with Ryan was beautiful...must say you've depicted the father-son bond beautifully !! :)

Coming to nupur and sam ...oki I knew from the very beginning that sam harbored feelings for his friend..nothing wrong in that....but if he really loved her, he should have aked her hand before mayank could do so...so all this wudnt have happened rite....

And now seeing the way the story is progressing...I feel you nupur should forgive mayank; as it is when he raped her he was not in his senses....but yeah I'm not defending him but seeing the way he is repenting I feel she shud frgive him...not everyone does this....in reality !!

Anyways Ruchi it's your story and your take on it...how you take it forward...and I wud love it in any form !!

Take care,
Fatima

Edited by -shabnoor- - 14 years ago

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crazymayurian

@crazymayurian

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 14 years ago

#763

aw loved it.i want them to be together plz

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fiza ahmed

@drfizaahmed

Stunner

+ 4

Posted: 14 years ago

#764

lovely update

mixed feelings

mayank pov makes u smile n sad bth at a time

sami...i so knew tht..felt too sorry for him..but lovd the way he is always thr for her

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maria

@Maria.

Sparkler

+ 7

Posted: 14 years ago

#765

Awesom update as usual

i loved last Mayur scene.....

waiting for next part

do continue soon

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zarfishanzahid

@zarfishanzahid

Rocker

Posted: 14 years ago

#766

awesome update plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz cont sson plzzzzzzzzzzzzzz

thx alot for the pm

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Prachi

@preitygal99

Navigator

+ 2

Posted: 14 years ago

#767

Hey Ruchi,

The story is progressing.

Thanx for making clear the issue of Six Monyhs.

I was wondering that hw a rape victim was set free in such a small punishment.

I always liked Shilpa's character in this story but sorry to say i m not able to digest that she is trying to bring back mayank in nupur's life.

I dont knw that hw the story will progress but if nupur doesnt allow mayank to re-enter in THEIR (Nupur's and Ryan's) life then i wont consider her as being stubborn or cruel.

Frankly i want her to do that i.e live her life her way without paying heed to wat others want her to do.

But this is in no way to influence your ideas abt the further story.

Waiting for ur next update.

Prachi

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aswathy

@sreevijayan

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 14 years ago

#768

great update dear...so sam loved nupur...........hmm..interesting............pls continue soon dear....................

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.SilentPrincess

@.SilentPrincess

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 14 years ago

#769

omg! what a awesome update... Just loved the bondign between father and son...

I had feeling samrat was in love with her... I feel bad for him... i hope he can move on in life even though it's hard...

Adn the last was just uff... hope it''s a typical fall-catch-eye lock fall... and i hope it dosen't tunr out t be a disaster where nupur's gonna yell at him...

Anyways AMAZING update... one of the ebst updates till now in ur ff...

Doo continue soon... can't wait for next chapter... 😳

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sariska sujaini

@sariska_mnarti

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 14 years ago

#770

Wow ruchi

excellent

I love samrat yaar

he cares a lot for her

loved mayank-agastya part

really sweet

n the last MN part was awesum

y did u stop here???

N e wayz now I really want mayur to be together

mayank has changed

hope nupur forgives him

and hope all three have a happy life

cont soooooonnnnn