BroKen EndS-MayUr Part-21 , Page-148 12/aug - Page 64

hmm...

I can understand what Nupur's going through! She mustve lost her breath seeing ryan in his hands...

Repentence is good, but sometimes unforgivable. I still dont sympathise with mayank considering if i was at nupur's place, i'd wish he'd be damned. But the way you write it, makes me feel for mayank.....

Ryan is a real good name.

I wonder where you'll lead this story to. But well, you've done justice to our expectations. It was written very well, right from her feelings to his, the way she says, 'mum ye mera beta hai....' n the way mayank picks the tiny little boy in his hands from nupur's arms.....i can visualise all....

I really dont understand what i want from this story, coz i m torn apart like always. So m going to follow your lead!

One corner, n maybe the dominant one, wishes to see them together though.

Continue soon n m sorry if i pesterd you too much!

-Anisha

Awesom update....very well written

GOD!!!!!!!!!!!ruchi ur FANTASTIC yaar
mindblowing update
amazing
awesome
fabulous
ur a amazing writer.....u done a grt job dear
u describe their emotions n feelings vry well.am vry happy when nupur says "mom dis is my baby".true!!!!!being a mother is really a bless.....and i also luved the part when mayank was playing with his little champ RYAN
i can imagine each n every moments in front of my eyes
n i can feel the pain they r going through
he deserved dis heartedness from everyone bt wishes 2 see mayur together
at last!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! HATS OFF TO U DEAR
cont soon eagerly waiting fr nxt update
n tnx fr pm

U know wht ruchi

u r seriously an amazing writer

I just so love this ff

the way u hv portrayed mayur's feelings is just fabulous

loved it yaar

I don't feel pity on mayank but the way u showed his POV made me feel for him

u r just too good

do cont soon

amazing!! u r a wonderful writter...

Hey Ruchi,

Man you always do this hehe, write so impactfully that it does effect me and so bad at times man! Ruchi I loved the update and I am clueless as to the happenings ahead. I don't even know what I want, at times I feel that MN should never be together but at times I feel that they should be and now Ryan in the picture, one has to see things from his point of view too, M and N can not be thinking for themselves and they have to see what is best for the child, it could be being with his father or may be not.

Beautifully written, I am all eager to know what happens next but I know we have to wait for sometime!

Ruchi 🤗

am absolutely in love with your ff you rock gurlie

love lekha

AWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWESOME PRT