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Posted: 15 years ago


ruchi meri maa
jaldi update kar de.................
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cmon ruchi update soon mujhe sone bhi jaha hai iam a silent reader of your ff next time pls pm me to😃
Edited by mausam020 - 15 years ago
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Originally posted by: fariaa70


jhootiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiii

asa maat kaho use bura lagega
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Heyy Guyz !!..here is the next part ,. i m really nervous..hope u like it
PART-12
I could say nothing but cry . I fell on my knees ..i broke down . I wanted them so badly in my life ..so badly .
But my eyes fell on the baby in front of me ..I looked up in shock . It was Nupur's Dad holding my baby ..and nodded his head in assurance .
I took him in my trembling hands ..I was nervous,afraid ..i was The Happiest person !
But soon i was brought back to face reality when Nurse told that Nupur wanted to have her baby
Nupur's Dad nodded and took the baby from my hands .
I extended my hand ..' I handed over the baby to u because evn i am a father but being a father , i cant never forgive you '' He said and went away and i felt the void again . I missed his little fingers , his hands..his small body rolled comfortably in my arms.. tears made way .
I stood outside and watched Nupur with my baby from window
Nupur's POV
I got up...maybe coz of anasthesia , i felt my head banging ! But nothing bothered me...i was only concerned with my baby . I looked around but no one was there except for a nurse . I asked her for my baby and she nodded and went out .
Just then , papa came holding my bundle of joy..
I had smile spread on my face ..Papa giving me the baby carefully .
I took him in my arms ..his little body curled up in my arms ..close to my bossom . I looked at him ..his closed eyes..thin lips pressed together and hand closed in a fist . My happiness had no bounds ...Tears kept rolling down my cheeks and i gently kissed on his forehead and my lil angel shifted in his position .
Mom kept hand on my shoulders , tears glistening in her eyes.. she wiped my tears ..but no avail . It was maybe after soo long that i cried but i was compelled .
I hugged my baby closer while mom kept her arm around me .
''Mom..this is my baby ! Mom my baby '' i kepy saying and mom nodded
''Yeh mera beta hai...'' my words trailed as lump didnt allow me to speak .. Mom hugged me .
Later , after i calmed down a bit , samrat-dia-shilpa mom came to me
''Madam..we are also standin here '' Samrat said and i smiled admist tears . I nodded and handed my love to him
''Be careful '' i said in an impulse
''By god !!..Nupur ..'' he glared at me ..and i smiled at my motherly feelings , it felt strange but magical. No woman is complete without being a mother ..and i realised how true that line is. A part of u being in ur arms..part of your love....
Soon i stopped thinking .. Love ?..My son was not symbol of love but lust !! But he is not gonna suffer coz of it .
I was snapped out of my thoughts , when Dia called out for me
''Nupur ''
''hmm..'' i said ..totally lost
''i am gonna call ur son CHAMP !''
''what ?'' i said totally shocked while mom-dad laughed
''No ways..i am gonna call him Ryan'' Shilpa mom said as she took him from Dia's arm '' u know what Nupur..Mayank loved this name '' as soon she said those words..everything fell numb .
'i am sorry ..beta..woh ' she tried to reason out
''Its ok maa..i can understand '' i said and she handed my baby to me , giving him sweet kiss on his forehead . Maybe he was feeling yuck this time..but when he grows up !..he is gonna love the kiss shower i mentally chuckled at this thought .. !!
Mayank's POV
I looked at Nupur .. and her words made me cry . I could actualy feel the importance of our baby in her liife . Dia was right , it was only and only our baby which kept her alive..
'it was the first time she cried after that incident '' Samrat spoke ..
I looked at him and he nodded ..
''i want to talk to her ..please samrat ''
''sorry ..but i cant ruin her happiness ! Its her time ..please let her live that''
''i want to make it ''our'' time . Please ..i want to make it work''
''Do u think Nupur wil forgive you ?'' wel , it never seemd a question to me but a statement. And it was something i couldnt answer .
Two days passed on ...I watched Nupur and my baby from window only.. Nupur loved him more than anyone else ..Not even for a single secong he was away from her eyes . I wanted to be with them ..badly wanted to be with them !..Nupur was asked to stay at hospital for sometime more because she was internally weak ..and needed constant check-ups .
It was the fourth day , as always i was standing out ..Nupur's parents didnt evn give me a look .. her mom hated me . Samrat-Dia used to talk to me but hardly any affection .
For a change , i was alone during afternoon ...
I wanted to go in but thinking of the consequences , i stopped .
Nupur was stoking my son's head , making him go to sleep ..but instead herself dozed off ..and my naughty champ was ahving fun time touching his mother's hairs. I tip-toed to her room , i couldnt control anymore ..and maybe this is the only time i can meet my son !!
He was so sweet ..and he did grow in these four days . I went and touched his cheeks and he smiled . It waas the most attractive smile ..a tear escaped from my eyes ..and landed on his cheeks . As soon he felt something wet..his little hands rushed to that place, leaving Nupur's hair . I played with his fingers but they were again inter-mingled with nupur's hairs . Unknowingly , he pulled her strands forcefully and she placed her hand on his , still half-slept . As his mother was not allowing to play anymore with her strands..his lower lip started to tremble. Before my ryan start to cry aloud , i took him in my arms . It was so good ...i felt evn better than the first day . He continously poked his lil finger in my cheeks ..I took his hand and kissed it lightly
''Leave my son ''
Nupur's POV
I kept my hand on the lil hands which played with my hairs . But felt them missing after a moment . Medicine had such strong effect that it took me ages to open my eyes , but when i did ..I faced the horrible sight in front of me . That b**t**d carrying my son in his arms . Al fears took over me ..he cant take my son ! He is my and only MY SON !! He doesnt have any right over him !!..
''Leave my son'' i literally shouted . He looked at me in shock and my lil baby started crying. I left my bed in a stride and took my son back
''Ehat the hel are u doing here ?''
''Nupur..just listen''
'I wont !!..Mr.Sharma i am not that weak lady now !..''I said as i stroked my son against my bossom so that he could calm down ...and lately , he did
''Nupur..i am sorry ..i am really sorry.'' he said
''But i am not sorry for what i am doing now !''
''Please.. forgive me !..please..''
''orgive you for whta ???..so that u can harm me again !..I am not a bloody doll whom u can use and throw '' i shouted back and god knows why ..tears filled my eyes
''Nupur..give me a chance..'' he came and sat next to me, while i shifted from my place
''U know what Mayank !..i hate you ..no matter what but this can never change''
''But ryan is my son !'' he shouted out , maybe frustrated . But that moment shook me throughout !
''Ur son?..son u got after u raped me ! sorry Mr.Sharma you dont have any right over my son and he is not ur god-damit Ryan !..he only Nupur Bhushan's Son !'' Finally unleasing the last words . I could see tears in his eyes..but my pain was far ahead to affect me with such tears.
''Leave me mayank..just leave me '' I said calmly and he moved out .
I looked at my baby ..
'mumma loves you darlin ..mumma cant live without you !' i gentle kissed him ''please dont leave your mmma ever !.''
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Posted: 15 years ago


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Oh GOD Ruchi

Tere ye FF ka Comment karna mere liye itna easy nehi hai''..

Yaar bahut sochna paerta hai'.

Hmmmmm kaha se start karu-------

Okk Hmm let's start with nupurs feelings''.

Her happiness had no bounds when she was hugging her baby..

She had tears in her eyes- the tears of joy n happiness.

I can easily imagine how much happy she was- She said repeatedly ''Mom..this is my baby ! Mom my baby '''

Awwww Ruchi the way u describe her mother love ' I m just loving with it

When she handed the baby to Samrat , she said-"Be careful" with so much concern that I can easily feel her motherly love for this little angel.

Maa aise he hote hi ' right .apni baccho ko dekh kar sab dard bhul jati hai.

But when she was thinking that her son was not a symbol of love but lust then I feel sad for her. How could she forgt the most awful incident of her life? sigh'''''.

Oh so maynk wants to named the bay Ryan- wah very nice name

U knw what my nephew name is ryan and I gave this name

Ryan is the name of one of the door of heaven''''

Then the most heart wrenching part''

Mayu wanted to touch him , to play with him but he cant.

He just watched Nupur and their baby from window only

Oh I can easily feel mayanks pain

But what can we do. Myank deserve it for what he did with Nupur'

So finally he got a chance to meet with ryan.

He was playing with his little champ

Here I can understand nups condition. The way she react it's obvious.

I can realize what Nupur's going through. She was damn angry seeing ryan in his hands...

But I can also feel maynks pain.

U made me confused re- main kisko support karu maynk ya Nupur.

I know its impossible for Nupur to forgive maynk so easily.

But but when I think abt maynk '''''.. chod mujhe khud he nehi samjah arahi hai' main kya kahu'.

Ruchi again a fab updte.

U r an amazing writer my jaan

I don't know what will be its ending but I know u will do justice with both of them

And I m with u .

I just want a proper ending.

Thank u so much for ur awesome updte

Love u loads

muahhhhhhhhh
Edited by fariaa70 - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago

Okay I am absolutely in love with your ff. You are an amazing writer. You made the emotions come out. So amazing job dear. Continue writing more and more

Edited by dmgmjht4ever - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
Res
edited
omg awesome
mindblowing
fantastic
update
u have made me speechles.thats y it took long to edit the comment.
I really loved this ff
write more
Edited by .rumki. - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
nice updt
hope nupur forgive mayank
thanks for the pm

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mindblwoing update dear...can imagine the pain mayur going r through..but mayank needed this........
awesome...................
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Edited on page 85

Edited by dmgmjht4ever - 15 years ago

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