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Posted: 15 years ago
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Gosh, Mou it was seriously awesome 😃
I totally loved the line " Soch kya rahe ho sadu"
It really brought tears to my eyes.
Mou, it was a beautiful update. And please continue it soon.
It really was just too good. Loved it.😳
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Posted: 15 years ago
#52
Hey I read it all and loved it! Cont. soon!! :):)
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Hey Mou that was brilliantly written.

Each chapter has its own importance, it has so nicely prepared us for the story ahead at the carnival. Keep it up!

It was amazinggggggggggggg but mou please please honey if possible, do update soon na.

Love you loads.
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Mou, updated my comments on page 7
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Nice update

So Isha is only Nups

Liked the in dream Mayu saw that Nups toh him jane dona sadu

Mayur togther going to carvinal yipeeeeeeee make them meet yaar plzzzzzzzzzzzzz

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Posted: 15 years ago
#56
thank u sooooooooooooo much everyone for all ur lovely comment. As usual lazy me not replying to any one individually , but i love reading all ur comments & thanks a lot for encouraging me.keep the commenting plz!!!!!!!

this Update is dedicated to Nidz ....
Happy birthday My dear Nidz!!!!!!!Wish all ur dreams come true.🤗🤗🤗

& yeah also it is dedicated to all MN fans who work hard to bring back rati as nupur in mayank's life & in my life too!!!!! i love u all!!!!!!!🤗
Here it goes-

Part-4

"Oye woh dekh, bavashya bataanewali aunty ..chal chal poochte hai humura future me kya likha hai",An excited ISha pointed jia to the fortune teller stall.

Uff! Usse fortune teller bolte hai isha, kya tu bhi jab dekho kissiko bhi bhaiya ya aunty bulane lagti hai…..Jia shake her head.

By god Jia! Tu bhi na!tu chal rahi hai ya nehi?isha asked. Acha baba chal….jia smiled.

Both the gal enter into the stall where some lady was sitting with crystal ball in front of her.She welcome the gals…aiye, bataiye kya janna hai appko? She aksed

Umm ye jia hai, meri dost, iske shadi kab hogi? Isha asked excitedly ignoring Jia's glare.

Okk hmmmmm ye crystal ballkeh rehe hai apki dost ki shadi 3manhine hojayegi…….The lady said looking at the ball.

Teen manihe me.BY GOD! Isah exclaimed.arre ladka kaha milega intni jaldi? Ladka kya doctor hoga? Bataye na …isha aksed .

Ladka dotor nehi hoga..per amir hoga the lady said.

Jia mummered into isha's ear.'ye sab jhoot hote hai.mujhse koi rich ladka shadi kiu karega? '

Kiuki tu bohot pyari hai.usse tujhse pyar hojayega.isha giggled. & the she again asked the lady.'acha ye bataiye kya mai kabhi apni familyse mil paungi?"

Hmmmmm, the lady look keenly to the ball for a moment & then said.ha ha, apse koi milnewala hai…….

Kya? Kab? An excited isha asked

ajhi the lady answered.

Isha mumrmrd into jia's ear."teen saalme koi nehi mila, aj miljayega.aisehi.ab toh mujhe bhi issper shaq hone laga hai.per paise diye hai, chal ek last sawal pooch letehai'

Then she look to the lady & asked her…umm..meri zindemie raj kab ayega?

Raj? Ye kaun hai? The lady ask

Arre jia cuts in…iska kenheka matlab hai ddlj fimke raj ki tarah iske zindegime koi aisa pyar kernewala kab ayega?

Oh! The lady smiled & look into the ball & then with a confusing look she replied..per apki zindegime to woh achuka hai…….

Kaun?

Wohi jo apse bohot pyar kerta hai……….aur uska naam raj to nehi hai….

Isha burst out into the lady.aisa koi meri zindegime abhi tak aya nehi.saf sabit hogeya ap jhhoot bol rahi hai..mujhe apse aur kuch nehi janna.chal jia

Both the gals run out from the stall without listening to the lady who was saying arre!!!!apki zindegime woh achuka hai aur uska nam ma se shuru hote hai …..

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Mayank look at the crowd & heaved a sigh, he just can't enjoy this things anymore. His students were lost in that crowd now. Actually The gals ria & ash were excited to go for the merry go round & the boys were.umm okk they were just excited to be with the gals, he guessed. He felt the vibe that they r not comfortable with him being around with them all time. They came here to enjoy so what's the point of spoiling their fun? So he asked them to go ahead while he found a bench for himself in one corner of the carnival ground. Sitting there alone he look upto the sky, its getting darker..gonna be rain soon! Then he looked at the carnival crowd.One kid is there who is crying coz her mom is not letting him to go to the toy stall, then his father cane with toys for him& the kid jump into happiness. A group of gals r buying bangles, nupur used to love bangles, he thought. Another gal is scolding her boyfriend for some reason. The guy is making a cute puppy face. He smiled, when Nupur used to be angry with him, he use these trick so many times. Just make a sweet face & say dil se sorry & her anger would melt down within a moment & she would hug him tight. I miss u nupur…he murmured. Then he saw an old couple. they r having fun he can say from the look of their face .Mayank can imagine they had a wonderful life together , the love can be seen from their eyes. 50years from now he would look the same with Nupur beside him or may be happier than this couple, the thought came & left mayank a bit sad. But then his thoughts r always occupied by Nupur, he always cherished the moments he shared with her & the moments that he would love to share with her but will never get a chance in this life!!with another sigh mayank open his yes again .the old couple has moved far from him now.. heading towards the fortuneteller stall….umm nope bavashya bataanewali aunty as nupur called them.mayank shake his head remembering that. His gazes then shifted to another stall, gola stall,Beside the fortuneteller stall. Some ppl r having gola there. Two gals, a guy, two kid.he can't c their face though as their back were facing him. Mayank closed his eyes again, Nupur used to love Gola…she used to hv 5 different golas at one time, & her lips used to get colored. She used to look like kiddo, but a very beautiful one that mayank just never let his eyes off from her.At last Mayank thought, this whole place is made for Nupur's kind of things, the things nupur love to do or love to hv. Why he came here alone? he has no right to be here without nupur.

He was all lost in his thought, then he stand up from the bench & decided to leave this place as soon as possible & then it happened, one of the two gal form the gola stall turn her face towards him, she was giggling with some different color golas in her hand, their eyes met for some seconds & then she turned her face again to another direction.

But by that time Mayank had already seen her. The world around Mayank froze then & there. Or it was him who froze? No he was not,coz within a second he found himself running towards the direction of that gal.yeah he ran, he ran as if his life depends on it, he ran as if someone is taking away his most precious thing form his life & he need to get it back, but to his bad luck just then it started raining heavily & the whole carnival crowd also start running to various directions for shelter making the place a complete mess. Ppl were bumping to etch other, pushing eachother to get some place to stand, heavy rain was making it hedgy to even c the things ahead of ppl clearly. Mayank couldn't careless abt all these. He was getting completely drenched in the rain,but he didn't even noticed that. Someone pushed him hard & he fall down once, but he got up & ran again. He didn't stop until he reached to that gola stall, but he was late. That stall was no more there & neither any gal.

She was here, I saw her, I can't be wrong I can recognize that smile even with my eyes closed, I can never ever go wrong with those hazel brown eyes, I saw her , she was here….He murmured. Then he start looking for her again, he searched at each & every stall, looked every possible corner of the carnival, ppl thought he is mad, he didn't care, someone shouted at him , he didn't bother, someone give him advice to go home coz he will never find what he is searching for in this heavy rain, he didn't listen, & then finally he reached to where he started from, near the bench. It is dark now, still raining, he was tired & wet, breathing heavily, shivering in cold. He looked around, the whole ground is almost empty now. Except a few ppl here & there The empty stalls r standing in dark, the merry go round has stopped running & standing like huge monster in the dark, who will say this place was full of life just half an hour ago? The place looks like a bare field just like his life has become after nupur was gone.& then his mind speak up…what happened?

I saw her, his heart answered.

No , u didn't. u know she can't be here, Mind said.

Nope, I can't be wrong when it comes to her, she was here. He nodded her head in disagreement like a stubborn kid.

It was ur illusion Maaynk, this place was reminding u too much abt her .so u imagined her, His mind was talking logic.

No no no…I saw her ,In my imagination she always talk to me, sit beside me , talk to me….but here I saw her with my open eyes & she was looking at me, she was there, his heart try to win this battle for one last time.

Acha! If it was nupur then why didn't she come to u. talk to u? the logical mind mocked at his heart. Accept it maaynk, nupur can't be here, she can't come anywhere now except ur imagination, she is no more mayank, his mind said in a winning tone.

Plz don't say that, stop it .I beg u stop plz ….Finally mayank broke down completely after loosing the battle between his heart & mind. He kneeled down on the muddy ground as if he lost her one more time. Tears were flowing from his eyes, but rain was washing it away. He looked up at the sky & screamed Why ? why her? Why did u take her away from me ? why? Answer me.

But no one was there to answer him.

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"savan barse tarse dil.kiu na nikle gharse dil." Isha was humming the song while jia glared at her.'tu gaana ga rahi hai?" "yeah! I love this song & I love rain" Isha giggled. "Mai yaha peresahn ho rahi hu, raat hogeye, na to koi bus milraha hai, na taxi, hum ghar kaise pauchenge? Aur tujhe gana gane ki pari hai? Kita filmy hai tu isha?"jia exclaimed. "aur tu kitna boring hai jia.chal na dono bheegte hai.mausam ki pehele barish me bheegne ka alag hi maza hai" Isha smiled. "ji nehi mujhe nehi bheegna. ek kaam ker tu bus stop pe rukh,bus aye to mujhe bulalena, mai age jake dekhti hu koi taxi mil jaye shayed" saying this jia move ahead. Isha was standing alone in the bus stop when suddenly a strong wind blew away her umbrella from her had. She didn't mind it though. She always enjoys rain. She donno why she always felt that rain has a strong connection with her past, some real good memories may be. She came out from the bus stand & start enjoying the rain in the road. She was singing her fav song & was totally lost in her happiness when it all happened. It happened almost like the dream she is seeing since the past three years now, someone came from behind ,tapped in her shoulder & she turn around to c his face………..

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Mayank didn't even realize how long he was sitting on the ground like that. The sound of his cell phone ring brings him back to reality. A msg came from Rohan, they all reached safely to the hotel & waiting for him there. Mayank stand up & cursed himself for being so irresponsible. He was supposed to watch over his students & he completely forgot abt them. What happened to u mayank Sharma? Ahmedabad is making u too much nostalgic, u need to go back as soon as possible, he thought. He was back in to his full sense now. He came out from the carnival ground & start walking through the road looking for a taxi to go back to the hotel. The road is almost empty now, ppl hv gone back to their homes, anyways who wants to get soaked in this heavy rain? he thought. Suddenly an umbrella came beside him, floating on the road. A surprised mayank took the umbrella on hand & look for the owner of it. & found her a bit far away near the busstop .A gal wearing a sky blue color salwar suit, was standing nope dancing, under the lamp post, spreading away her hands, enjoying the rain. He couldn't c her face due to heavy rain but that gesture was too familiar for him. NO not again .u r hallucinating again mayank …..he murmured. But he couldn't help but to walk towards that gal ( he hv to return the umbrella right!!!)The yellow ray of the street light was making the whole picture in front of him more supernatural & he was drawn by it like a magnet...it was like mystery he needed to solve ,...these sky blue color dress, this rainfall, this lonely street, this bus stop & the gal dancing in the rain , he saw this all before, this is all so so so familiar. He knew it he was not dreaming this time….still when he reached near to the gal...his heart was thumping hard …he was badly wishing for the un real thing to happen, he was badly praying that the gal turn around & he saw that familiar face, he was badly hoping he was not imagining all these. Gathering all the courage of the world he finally tapped the shoulder of the gal so that she turns around. & she did turn around.

The umbrella dropped from his hand, His world came to a halt, the moments stopped passing & his heart stopped beating for sometime………& he found himself murmuring in a shaky voice, "Nupur"!!!!!????!!!!!!

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So , thats it guys...i m abit obsessed with post confession rain scene & khuda jaane so mixed it allhere.& yeah this is my idea , i thought of it even before I start writing this FF, MJHT cvs chorified it....😆 😆 😆 & yeah ...my inspiration of writtng this FF is no more there coz She is back, she is back ,she is back ( okk i love typing this😆 ) They finally met here & my job is done.Now keep watching MJHT at 9 for upcoming story!!!!!!!😆


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Posted: 15 years ago
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Res!

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Mou di......tight jhapphi for you first!
That was one amazing part! Amazingly amazing part!

Everything from the past came back to me. Tch..it never was past actually!

Roller coaster of emotions...

N i love the way it ended! Sigh!

Please please continue this one! Keep writing di.. We all would love to have your version of mayur comeback! Please! *begs* *pouts*

Love,
Akki!

P.s. @Miffy! 32-31! it is! 🤣
Love you!
Edited by ak12 - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
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mou 🤗
I already told u how fab it was..
my heart just stopped at the entire gamut of emotions u created
it was like excitement ..wonderful !
I absolutely adore the way u write!!
keep writing :D
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Hey mou beautiful upd8

do cont soon
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heyy !! itz amazin '...seriously ! too good a concept and AMAZIN !!! plz pm me nxt time ::)

-Ruchi-

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