FF ll*~ High On You ~*ll Part 4 09/07

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fiza

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Posted: 15 years ago

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Wow Omg ! I am sooooooooo living it plzzzzz add me to ur pm list it was just rocking n joyed 🤗 👍🏼 👏

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amazing story... add me to ut pm list pls

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Sana Quraishi

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Posted: 15 years ago

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awesomest part

but lolz maan haracter seems intersting

hhahaha,.,,,,,,,,

anyways do continue soon

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Rabsy

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Posted: 15 years ago

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WOW Chand... ur updateeee was seriously awesomee but too short.. I won't complain because I know how it is to write an update but wahhh u had me fooled at the beginning.. I thought it was Geet but then im like nahh that would be tooo easy 😆 it will be interesting to see how their love blossoms 😊 anyhow Loveeee the update and ur a fab writer

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Hinna

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Posted: 15 years ago

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Hi chandni!
You got another name to add to ur PM list 😃
Love the intro it sounds to different to other FFs i've read (this is the first maneet ff im reading btw) recommended to me by Salma 😛
The first part is just WOW! Ur writing style is really passionate which i love! ⭐️
Hmm so Maan's not the 'i hate girls' type here but he still sounds HOT and hmm lucky girls yaz and Asma who got to be with Maan 😆
Great start! Look forward to reading more! 😃

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Chandni

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Posted: 15 years ago

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Hey Guys I'm back with Part 2, because I have been getting dhamkis, but i wont say names *cough cough salma, afsha cough cough*. Well I read all your guy's comments thank so much for them. Everyone well most recieved a shocker reading Asma and Faz's name and then said they want a cat fight between them. 😆 Thats funny, I'll have to think about that, anyways most of you guys were shocked to see the difference in the characters well FF's are meant to be different form the show it self and as u can tell it is. Hope you guys like it this way. Anyways enough of my Bak bak here is Part 2.

Part 2

Recap: M.K. is introduced and we see what kind of guy he is. He tells Asma his secretary to organize a party for the incoming clients. Party starts and Mr. Shah tells Maan that he will not be handling the project but Geet will, and Geet introduces herself to Maan.

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"Good evening everyone, dinner will be served shortly, so please everyone what are you doing standing around time to hit the dance floor" Sasha leaves the stage after announcing this. "Please gentleman let's dance" Maan told the clients as too not bore them. "May I have this dance" Asma turned around and was shocked out of her wits "wait is he asking me, no way Ahhhhhhhhhhh" she thought to herself and took a hold of Maan's hand. He led her to the center of the dance floor. "May I have this dance" some random guy asked, "Why sure" Geet gave her hand in his and he led her to the center of the dance floor. Everyone started to dance to the rhythm of the song.

Pal mein hi mujh ko mila pal naya
Kuch mila haan kuch magar kho gaya
Kya kahoon kya nahi
Labz hai kum kahin
Hosh mein dil nahi
Tere aa jaane se, tere aa jaane se, tere aa jaane se hoo
Pal mein hi mujh ko mila pal naya
Kuch mila haan, haan kuch magar kho gaya

Maan slips his hands around Asma's waist and pulls her close. "Mujhe kya ho rahi hai" she thought as she felt his hands heating her up. Maan turned his head to see in hers and smiled when all he saw was nothing, she was lost in him. Maan turned to the side and saw Geet being held tight by someone.

Haan na jaane kya hai dil ka iraada
Thoda sa kum hai, thoda sa zada
Kuch na hai paapi, chahe ga kya dil
Dil ko mili hai manzil
Tere aa jaane se, tere aa jaane se, tere aa jaane se hoo
Pal mein hi mujh ko mila pal naya
Kuch mila haan, haan kuch magar kho gaya

He saw that Geet was uncomfortable. The guys spinned the girls out and released their hands as Geet landed in Maan's arms. Geet slowly looked up into his eyes and he tightened his grip on her. She felt him pull her closer and she bumped into his chest. Asma turned and saw this she started to boil red. "So this is Mr. Maan, hmm kothe, duffer, mujhe haat lagatha hai, mein, Geet, abhi use diktha hoon kay mein kaun hoon" Maan turned her out and then turned her back in. On her way she stepped on his toe. Maan was about to scream, but stopped when he realized a lot of people were here. He looked at Geet and she gave him a sarcastic smile. He pulled her closer, and leaned near her ear. He slowly moved her hair from her neck, "What is he doing, Geet chill, don't do anything stupid or your done" she thought to herself as she felt his breath on her neck. "Did I" he paused an continued "Tell you how beautiful you look tonight" he moved back and saw that her eyes were closed. She slowly opened them, "Thank You".

Ik khwab tera, ik khwab mera
Ban sa gaya hai ik khwab apna
Hoo aankhon se aankhein, baaton se baatein
Raahon se mil gayi raahein
Tere aa jaane se, tere aa jaane se, tere aa jaane se hoo
Pal mein hi mujh ko mila pal naya
Kuch mila haan, haan kuch magar kho gaya
Kya kahoon kya nahi
Labz hai kum kahin
Hosh mein dil nahi
Tere aa jaane se, tere aa jaane se, tere aa jaane se hoo
Ho ho pal mein hi mujh ko mila pal naya
Kuch mila haan, haan kuch magar kho gaya

As the dance finished Sasha Announced that the food was ready. Geet took her chance and pulled apart from Maan and walked towards the food.

"What the hell does he think of himself" she looked at the time oh shoot only half an hour till show time. She quickly got her food and sat at a table. "May I join you" she looked up from her plate. "You, Stupid, how dare you touch me" she gets up from her seat and walks up to him. –SLAP- "This should teach you a lesson" she went back to her chair and sat down.

"Hello excuse me, may I sit here" she broke out of her dreams seeing hands waving in front of her, "Sure" she said pointing the seat in front of her. Son more people joined Maan and Geet.

"I really need to talk to her, she is the only one that hasn't paid attention to me all night, every other girl did why not her, she is different I need to talk to her" He looked up and saw that she was gone. He turned to see her walking out the door. He quickly got up from his seat and ran to catch up with her.

She was waiting there for her car to come, "Hey" she turned. "Oh tum" he laughed "Yeah me, any problems," she turned towards the street, " No". "What do you want" still waiting for her car, "looks like by the time it comes ill be late, maybe I could ask this duffer for a ride" she thought to herself. "Um nothing, just came to say see you tomorrow at the airport" he turned to go. "Excuse" he stopped in his tracks and turned around to see her proceeding towards him. "Yes?" he said, as she approached closer and closer. He started step back as she came closer. "Um can..can I…help you..with something" he stammered hitting the wall. She was just an inch away from him. She went on her tiptoes and leaned near his ear, "Um". He started to raise his up to put them around her feeling her breath on his skin, made him go crazy. "Um, can I get a ride home" she broke away and stayed a few inches back. He looked at her shocked. She saw this and chuckled, she snapped her fingers to get him back to the world, "Hello?". Breaking out, "Um.. Yea.. sure" He led the way to the car. He opened the door for her and she sat down. He went to the driver's side and sat down, started the car and they were off.

They were off to start their story.

Thanks for reading and all the lovely comments i hope everyone likes the first part if u do press the like button and well let me know if you want to be added to the PM List and hope to get more readers. Afsha and Salma hope you guys are ahpyp and have put away all the daggers. Love ya guys, Chandni

Edited by Chandni- - 15 years ago

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Harpreet

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Posted: 15 years ago

#47

lol i loved itt! can u add me to the pm list?

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Zahra

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Posted: 15 years ago

#48

🤪 You made me crazy!!! Geet teasing Maan!!! HAHAHA 👏

Asma little part was....funny!!! 🤣

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Antares

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Posted: 15 years ago

#49

Lolz........this was one funny and quite romantic part.......Maan did not like Geet dancing with someone else.......lolz......and the way they went closer to each other to speak something......lolz......and Geet's asking for a lift.....lolz.......way to go, girl! It's too good.....do continue soon!