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Posted: 15 years ago
#61
Neeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeetz!!!!

This was (don't want to swear) but it was effing AWESOME!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! (Tell me if you want me to edit that hehe 😆)

It was like the reader was swimming in this cocktail of emotions..... and then we FINALLY........ got a snippet of an Armaan who we can see WILL be able to move on. And his moving on MAKES SENSE and is LOGICAL!!!!!!!!!!!!

Maybe this would be a turning point in his life.....Armaan broke away from his gaze, suddenly finding the last step very interesting, 'I will', he said after a long pause.

Yes... hopefully Armaan will be able to find happiness...

Tbh Neetz, I am sick of Riddhimas character... she gave AR some very nice memories... but she very callously (I feel), tore those same memories apart... she broke away from him without thinking how the consequences would play on him... Such a life.... As much as I love AR, I don't like the current Riddhima.

I have always taken liking to SidMaan, and you are right in your FF, it is high time that the fact AR once shared a relationship was not ignored, and not hidden under rocks as if it never existed. I think for them to move on they actually need to work through it and not just give roses which actually meant de nada :| And yee Sid deserves the truth...

ArSh scene was beautifully penned. It was like they neednt speak they just understood one another. I am glad that Shilpa is aware that AR shared a relationship, hopefully this way there will be no secrets in their relationship.

I am very excited to read about Shilpa's character!!! Lets see how this breast cancer storyline shapes out... I am guessing we will probably find out some secrets about Shilpa... but my last prediction was incorrect... I was guessing that Sid would see ArSh on the terrace hehe... I was WRONG hehe...

The inspiration song was tressss bonitaaaaaaa <3 I think ima put it on my iPOD.

1Qs- Are SR gonna play a part in this FF? Or are they BG characters?

Beautiful update as ALWAYS :)

Ly LOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOADS
Hannah Banana 🤗
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Posted: 15 years ago
#62

Originally posted by: Zaynoo2320

Loved the update Neetz! Love the interaction between Armaan and Shilpa. And i'm really looking forward to see Shilpa handling Mrs. Varshney's case!

Update soon!

Thankyou so much! Yep, it's going to be an important part of my story 😊
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Posted: 15 years ago
#63
LOVED IT!!!
CONTINUE SOON!!
i will be waiting... hehehe
love
prachiee
xx
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Posted: 15 years ago
#64

Originally posted by: shinseen

Your writing leaves me speechless
i loved your ff............
the show !
It's amazing!!
Please do continue and thanks for pm me
with love take care

Thankyou so much! 😃
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Posted: 15 years ago
#65
hey awesome update. love the relationship between armaan and shilpa.
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Posted: 15 years ago
#66
Hey Neetz, I'm really sorry about the tardiness but well first it was my busy schedule and then my procrastiantion that held me back from commenting. I did read your updates before but I was just too lazy to post comments.
Okay the first thing that strikes me in your past 2 updates is how immature and selfish SR are behaving in comparsion to ArSh. I get that Riddhima's moved on and chosen to be with Sid but why doesn't Sid understand that Armaan was a huge part of Riddhima's life, and well Riddhima's just being extremely insensitive. I've always thought that she was very indecisive, confused and had serious trust issues. However you paint a somewhat different picture of her. I mean you show her as non-confrontational and one who avoids conflicts. Somehow I never thought she possessed those characteristics, but I guess we all have different perspectives.
Coming back to ArSh, well finally we see this very vulnerable side to Armaan which he had pretty much shielded from the rest of the world. However with Shilpa he is finally opening up. Shilpa, on the other hand, is a bit of a mystery. Obviously she has a past, but the last bit with the cancer patient is what really intrigued me. I love how she deals with situations...her perspective on everything is so refreshing and I think that is probably what attracts Armaan to her, and alienates her from the rest of Sanjeevani.
Oh and I forgot to add that even though SR have been acting ignorant about AR, it was good to see that at least Sid is a bit more mature than Riddhima about the whole AR issue. He realizes that both of them need to talk about this, but Riddhima of your FF is obviously going to shy away from such talks.
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Posted: 15 years ago
#67
Hi CZ. Thanks for the PM. Loved the update. Very heart felt emotions. Armaan needed this breakdown. Glad Shilpa provided just the right support and did not get into the details.

Wow, she seems to be developing feelings beyond friend for Armaan. Am liking the track loads.
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Posted: 15 years ago
#68
@armaanakakaran: Thanks! :)
@Nahida - where's the comment gal? :P
@desire_20 - thankies! yep, he needs to be more vocal and quit being the prince charming ;)
@Pranz di - Heloooo! sorry di for not informing you, I didn't think you'd be interested :( sorry!
yep, ArSh share this weird comfort level, it's like their togertherness or comfort is not dependant on words, it's beyond them! thanks for commenting di! :D
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Posted: 15 years ago
#69

Originally posted by: Pebblez

:D yayyyy neetz, you updated! God, WHAT wouldn't I give to have Armaan in the show exactly as he is here...sadness is powerful, and karan would have pulled it off SO well, i can almost see it *sighs* the terrace scene was yet again, so bravely put and so outright, it was almost as if you took it out of everyone's subconscious imagination/....somewhere, all of us have wanted things to be this way, but never been able to express is as fully as u have :D so hats off lady, um proud of youu! :) great going, update jaldi ker na!

And No, please dont add me to the PM list, i will check for myself :) pms really annoy me :P

Great work again Neetz!

Kiran

Heloz kiran! 😃
I swear! I want armaan to be exactly like this. but the CVs are hell bent on potraying him as the ultimate 'qurbaani' hero who smiles through his problems. it's like DMG is not a youth show anymore, it's a newer version of our 90's and 80's ki romantic films 🤔 - where everything is so visibly (and painfully) cliched.
Thankyou so much! 🤗 you see, I'm an expert mind reader and a psychic. 😛
Okies, no pms for you! :D
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Posted: 15 years ago
#70
@JAZZ_ACUA - Thankyou! :)
@Vaish - yep, sid needs to come out of the hiding and have a look at a brutal fact. his relationship with ridhima would be better off if he's aware of her past.
mods locked my thread in the dmg section! :(
@nidha - thankyou so much!
@twilightmystery - thanks :D
@ruky786 - yep, madno is a beautiful song! I've had it on repeat for the past 2 days :P

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