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Posted: 15 years ago
#71

Originally posted by: Hannah.

Neeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeetz!!!!

HAANNNAAAHHHHHHH! 😃

This was (don't want to swear) but it was effing AWESOME!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! (Tell me if you want me to edit that hehe 😆)
No way I want you to edit that! 😉 😆 Let the true feelings out babe :P

It was like the reader was swimming in this cocktail of emotions..... and then we FINALLY........ got a snippet of an Armaan who we can see WILL be able to move on. And his moving on MAKES SENSE and is LOGICAL!!!!!!!!!!!!
Thankyou so much! Yep, his moving on seems logical and justified. He realizes the fact that Ridhima is not his anymore, and it's not her that's holding him back, it's her memories. He just has to let go of those 😊

Maybe this would be a turning point in his life.....Armaan broke away from his gaze, suddenly finding the last step very interesting, 'I will', he said after a long pause.

Yes... hopefully Armaan will be able to find happiness...

Tbh Neetz, I am sick of Riddhimas character... she gave AR some very nice memories... but she very callously (I feel), tore those same memories apart... she broke away from him without thinking how the consequences would play on him... Such a life.... As much as I love AR, I don't like the current Riddhima.
I agree! I hate the current Ridhima. She's self centered, insensitive, hypocritical and basically just repulsive. I cannot stand her at all! She dumped armaan like a sack of potatoes, and the worse part is, that she doesnt regret it.

I have always taken liking to SidMaan, and you are right in your FF, it is high time that the fact AR once shared a relationship was not ignored, and not hidden under rocks as if it never existed. I think for them to move on they actually need to work through it and not just give roses which actually meant de nada :| And yee Sid deserves the truth...
Yep. Giving roses or singing songs does not help a relationship as much as a simple cofrontational conversation does. that's what Sidhima need. Not sid fumbling around like a teenage kid and ridhima giving him the angry looks. Working on their relationship? I don't think so. they're going round and round in circles (which is also frustrating the audience 😆)

ArSh scene was beautifully penned. It was like they neednt speak they just understood one another. I am glad that Shilpa is aware that AR shared a relationship, hopefully this way there will be no secrets in their relationship.
I hope not, because ArSh in my fic are not going be the insecure couple that AR were. they're going to be stronger and steadier 😃

I am very excited to read about Shilpa's character!!! Lets see how this breast cancer storyline shapes out... I am guessing we will probably find out some secrets about Shilpa... but my last prediction was incorrect... I was guessing that Sid would see ArSh on the terrace hehe... I was WRONG hehe...
yep, the breast cancer story is very important to my fic, it'll shed light on alot of hidden aspects of shilpa's character 😃 well, I'm quite unpredictable you know 😉

The inspiration song was tressss bonitaaaaaaa <3 I think ima put it on my iPOD. DO IT NOW! it's beautiful 😳

1Qs- Are SR gonna play a part in this FF? Or are they BG characters? Just bg characters, but well developed nonetheless :)

Beautiful update as ALWAYS :)

Ly LOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOADS
Hannah Banana 🤗

Thankyou for commenting hannah banana! 🤗
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Posted: 15 years ago
#72
sorry!!!! neetz
*clap* *hugs* *clap* *hugs*
i know i didnt commented on the last two parts but they were superb....!!!!
really loved it
soo he told her abt his past...wow
and i m soo happy that even armaan told sid that he had an argument with ridhima
hidding thing related to ridhima could have been trouble for them in future...
and well i love dthe way they stayed hugging each other...and omg she felt something wow
love is on the way??? i guess *curious*lolz
neetz...loved it really and thank for the pm
want an update please
love maleeha😃
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Posted: 15 years ago
#73
haayyye CZ that was wonderfull i hope
they CV just read that follow that story
line of urs
it is amazing
loved it to core
that finaaly Armaan told her about the past
and sid about the argument love it yeahhhhhhhhhh
tjat was lovelly
waiting for the next part
please update soon
Love Heaven
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Posted: 15 years ago
#74

Since you had thought I may not be interested on reading this, now I am here to pester you to update soon. 😃

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Posted: 15 years ago
#75
Update banta hai bhai..;)...kithe ho jii??
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Posted: 15 years ago
#76

Originally posted by: Pokemon12!

Thatt part was very good too. I liked the Armaan-Sid interaction. There are times where Sid can't see beyond his own problems, and doesn't understand others. THANK YOU for starting the PM list. Like seriouslly, while waiting for an update, I'd have to chek this page so many times. A PM list will make things soooooooo much easier.

I really wanna read more on Armaan Shilpa, like more of thier scenes. I like how you incorportaed the cancer patient and Shilpa's feelings too. Are Armaan-shilpa gonna fall in love any time soon? I think Shilpa might fall for him first, but you never know I guess.
Madiha

Hey madiha! 😃
Haha, well, I guessed if I didn't, I might end up losing readers 🤔 😆 - that's why the PM list is here!
Um, actually I don't have the answer to the question myself. I don't usually plan my stories, I just write anything and everything along the way 😛 - let's see though! one thing I can tell you though - Shilpa will fall for armaan first :P
Thanks for commenting! 😃
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Posted: 15 years ago
#77
Planning to update it today & plz PM me ur FF's name with link
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Posted: 15 years ago
#78
@AR_LOVER : Thanks!
@BABY-GIRL7 - Thankyou so much :)
@prachiee - Thanks! I'll try not to keep you waiting :P
@Riddss - Thankyou!
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Posted: 15 years ago
#79

Originally posted by: seert

Hey Neetz, I'm really sorry about the tardiness but well first it was my busy schedule and then my procrastiantion that held me back from commenting. I did read your updates before but I was just too lazy to post comments.


Okay the first thing that strikes me in your past 2 updates is how immature and selfish SR are behaving in comparsion to ArSh. I get that Riddhima's moved on and chosen to be with Sid but why doesn't Sid understand that Armaan was a huge part of Riddhima's life, and well Riddhima's just being extremely insensitive. I've always thought that she was very indecisive, confused and had serious trust issues. However you paint a somewhat different picture of her. I mean you show her as non-confrontational and one who avoids conflicts. Somehow I never thought she possessed those characteristics, but I guess we all have different perspectives.

Coming back to ArSh, well finally we see this very vulnerable side to Armaan which he had pretty much shielded from the rest of the world. However with Shilpa he is finally opening up. Shilpa, on the other hand, is a bit of a mystery. Obviously she has a past, but the last bit with the cancer patient is what really intrigued me. I love how she deals with situations...her perspective on everything is so refreshing and I think that is probably what attracts Armaan to her, and alienates her from the rest of Sanjeevani.

Oh and I forgot to add that even though SR have been acting ignorant about AR, it was good to see that at least Sid is a bit more mature than Riddhima about the whole AR issue. He realizes that both of them need to talk about this, but Riddhima of your FF is obviously going to shy away from such talks.

I think Sid is defenitely trying to cope, if not Ridhima. I mean, atleast he's not acting like the ignorant and posessive husband who has a closed mind about Ridhima's past. He's trying to be a good husband, till whatever extent possible.
About Ridhima, well, actually I've always felt that she's never been confrontational - running away from Armaan all the time, avoiding a face-to-face conversation etc. I guess you could call it confused and immature but that's the way I see it.
Your opinion about Shilpa is bang on. She's a thorough professional and never lets her personal feelings come in middle of her work. For her, each patient is just like another case - perhaps that's a flaw, not having a human touch, but that's how she is. I guess what really attracts armaan to her is her unwavering honesty and her blunt attitude towards everyone, which assures armaan that if Shilpa likes him, then it must be genuine because she's not the one to fake.
Thanks for commenting! 😃
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Posted: 15 years ago
#80

Originally posted by: funkybratz

sorry!!!! neetz
*clap* *hugs* *clap* *hugs*
i know i didnt commented on the last two parts but they were superb....!!!!
really loved it
soo he told her abt his past...wow
and i m soo happy that even armaan told sid that he had an argument with ridhima
hidding thing related to ridhima could have been trouble for them in future...
and well i love dthe way they stayed hugging each other...and omg she felt something wow
love is on the way??? i guess *curious*lolz
neetz...loved it really and thank for the pm
want an update please
love maleeha😃

Hey maleeha! *hugs back*
Thankyou so much! yep, armaan finally took that huge step and confronted sid about his relationship with ridhima. Like you said, it could have meant trouble for SR in the future otherwise.
Haha, me not revealing anything! 😉 😛 Thanks for commenting! =S

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