Aziyat...Sujal&Kashish FF...Last Part...10/06 - Page 4

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Part-1

Half an hour later......Sinha house...

The house was a perfect building from the outside..set on a beachy ground...they got out of the car whilst Kashish admired her home which she had seen for the very first time...they walked inside whilst the servants came and took the luggage from the car..Kashish walked in the house feeling a sense of warmth and cosyness..she was happy to be home...with her loved ones...Maahi smiled at her and then walked into the kitchen..heating the food...when she brought it out...setting the table...she called them all for lunch as they sat down at the table...Kashish sat across Sujal staring at him..still amazed with his personality...when Maahi brought her back to reality...

Maahi: Kashish ek baat tho batao...tumne hume pehchana kaise?..i mean hum 10 saal baad mil rahe hain...

Kashish: aap dono ki itni sari pictures hai mere pass jitni aap dono ke pass nahi hogi...

Abhinav: kya?humari tasveerain tumhare paas...par kaise beta?

Kashish: maahi ki PA ....

Maahi: kya!meri PA...par usne to kabhi mujse is baat ka na to zikr kiya hai aur na hi kabhi kuch bataya hai..

Kashish: I am sorry ...lekin woh PA tumhari hoke kaam mera karti hai...maine hi use chup ke se tum sab ki pictures muje bhejne ko kaha tha....taki main her pal aapke kareeb reh saku...

Abhinav just smiles at her...

Abhinav: muje nahin pata tha ke tumhe apni family me itna interest tha...

Kashish: dad....10 saal family se durr rehne ke bad family ki kya value hai woh main jan gayi...lekin lagta hai aap dono muje bhul gaye..

Abhinav: beta aisa bilkul bhi nahin hai...aise ek din bhi nahin hoga jab humne tumhe yaad na kiya ho..haan woh alag baat hai ke humne in 10 saalon me kabhi tumhe dekha nahin...tum to phir bhi Maahi ki PA se tasveerain le leti..par hum kisse maangte..

Kashish: magna hi hota to mere best friends Sia aur Rohan se.....

Maahi: shayad humne kabhi is baare me socha hi nahin..hum to humesha se tumhare aane ka intezaar karte rahe...par us intezaar me 10 saal beet gaye...par humne tumhe bohat miss kiya..

Kashish: its ok....is bar maine tumhe maff kar diya.....kyunki tum dono ne bhi muje bahot miss kiya....

Sujal: main iska saboot de sakta hoon ki in dono ne tumhe kitna miss kiya.....aakhir kar mujse jyada aur kaun jan sakta hai ki parivar khona kya hota hai......

Kashish looked towards Sujal as he seemed so down...Abhinav who was sat beside Sujal gently tapped his back...

Abhinav: beta..main jaanta hoon ke tumne apne pariwar ko kho diya hai..par hum bhi to tumhare pariwar ki tarah hain..isliye kabhi khud ko akele math samajana..

Kashish: dad is right.....do log to the...aaj se main bhi hoon ab...

Sujal just looks up at her and smiles..

Sujal: thanks for that..aur uncle..aapke hote maine kabhi apne aap ko akela nahin samja hai..12 saal pehle mere Mom aur Dad ki plane crash me jab death huyi to main bilkul akele pad gaya tha...par jab main do saal baad aapse milla to muje yun lagga ke muje mere Dad waapis milgaye...aapne humesha muje apna samja..uske liye main humesha aapka ehsaan mand rahunga..

Abhinav: pita ki tarah mante ho aur ehsaan bhi chukate ho....agar aisa hai to jab bhi tum yaha khana khao to yaha pe bhi bill de dena...kyun Maahi..

Maahi: bilkul theek kaha aapne Dad...hum to ghair haina iske liye...

Sujal: mera woh matlab to nahin tha...ok fine...aisa dubara nahin kahunga...anyway forget all this...Kashish...tum batao..what are your future plans...ab tum kya karne ki soch rahi ho?

Maahi: off course...businee me hamare saath....

Kashish: i will eventually..par abhi nahin Maahi...pehle main mauratitus ko dekhna chahti ho..yaha ki hawa ko mehsus karna chahti hoon....yaha ki khubsurati ko dekhna chahti hoo......taki main apni boring si hostel life ko bhula saku........

Maahi: aur career ka kya hoga..

Kashish: career ke liye to poori zindagi padi hai Maahi...main pehle kuch waqt khud ko bhi dena chahti hoon..i want to get used to this place...

Abhinav: Kashish bilkul theek kehrahi hai Maahi...aur ab yeh zimmedaari main Sujal aur tumhe saumpta hoon..meri Kashish ko Mauritius dikhana ab tum dono ka kaam hai

Sujal: Maahi.....business ke liye puri life hai.....per Kashish aaj se hamari first priority hai......Kashish ke liye hum waqt nikal lenge..

Kashish looks towards Sujal getting lost in his voice again...his voice seemed to have a huge impact on her...and she was falling more and more for him everytime he spoke...

Maahi: kaha kho gayi....ab lunch nahi karna.....

Kashish: haan..

She comes back to her senses and looks towards Maahi...she then looks down and starts to eat whilst giving constant glances to Sujal as they all continued to eat and talk further...

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Evening...

Sujal left from Sinha house and reached home'he got out of the car as he parked up in his drive way and walked to the door ringing the door bell'when the maid opened the door'she was an average aged female..around 52 years of age..and worked with the Garewals for the last 20 years..after Sujal's parents passed away she was the one who looked after him and never let him feel the dearth of a mother'Sujal smiled at her as she let him in'

Sujal: Kaise ho daima...pata hai aaj late ho gaya...woh uncle ke ghar gaya tha to..

Daima: main theek hoon beta'aur muje yaad hai..tune kal raat ko muje bataya tha iske bare me'shayad unki choti beti aane waali thin a aaj..kya naam hai uska?

Sujal: Kashish...Kashish Sinha..

Daima: Kashish..naam to bohat pyaara hai uska..uska sawbhav kaisa hai

Sujal: sirf badi ho gayi hai umar me....lekin abhi bhi bachi hi hai....pata nahi lekin woh Maahi se bilkul alag hai...hamesha apni duniya me jinewali...

Daima: sabse choti haina..aur itne saal akeli bhi rahi woh'isliye shayad uska sawbhav itna alag hai..

Sujal: shayad....use uncle aur Maahi nahi samaj sakte to hum kya samaj payenge....pata nahi her baat pe koi na koi surprise rehta hai uske pass....pata nahi aage kitne surprise degi woh...

Daima: ab who to aage pata chalega na beta'tum itna kyun soch rahe ho..

Sujal: pata nahi....bas use milke ajeeb lag raha hai...main jo parivar na hote hamesha parivar chahta hoon....aur woh apne parivar ko chodke itne saal unse durr rahi....na kabhi milne aayi...na kisi ko milne diya...na kabhi koi tasveer ...kuch nahi....sirf phone pe hi baatein....aapne kabhi dekhi hai aisi ladki...nahi na....to phir main bhi bas hairan hoon..

Daima: hmmm'ajeeb baat to hai beta..10 saal tak khud ko apne parivaar se door rakhna sach me hairaani ki baat hai..par kaun jaane uske peeche wajah kya hogi'who to wahin jaane ke usne khud ko kyun apnon se durr rakha'baaiton se lagta hai ke who bohat alag hai'milna padega usse..beta ek kaam kyun nahin karte tum'unhe dinner pe bulalo'

Sujal: main bhi wahi soch raha tha....waise bhi kitne dino se Uncle aur Maahi nahi aaye...shayad isi waje se woh bhi aajayenge......thik hai main is weekend pe baat karke aapko bata dunga...

Daima: theek hai beta..muje batadena..baaki intezaam main khud karlungi

Sujal: thik hai daima....aur please us waqt khane me indian hi banana...use hindustani sab kuch bahot pasand hai...

Daima just smiles'

Daima: lagta hai usse apne desh se bohat lagav hai..tum fikar mat karo beta..khaane me sab Indian hi hoga'ab tum jaa ke araam karo..main tumhari coffee kamre me bhijwati hoon

Sujal: thank you Daima......

Daima: your welcome beta'

Sujal smiles at her and heads off to his room whilst Daima stood there watching him leave..she then heads off towards the kitchen to make his coffee'

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It was around 11.45pm and Kashish was settling in the new surroundings...she was putting away her clothes in the closet and all her belongings away in the drawers...when she saw a picture frame and smile...it was a picture of Kashish,Sia and Rohan...she placed the picture on her bedside table when she heard a knock at the door...she turned around to see Maahi stood at the door..

Kashish: hey....tum itni raat to yaha...abhi tak soyi nahi..

Maahi: main bas apne kamre ki taraf hi jaa rahi thi..dekha ke tumhari light on hai to yahan pe aagayi...sone se pehle tumse baat karne ki aadat jo hai muje...

Kashish: hmm...shayad ab mobile company ko nuksan hoga.....

Maahi just smiles at her..

Maahi: haan woh to hai..par doosri taraf humara faida hoga...

Kashish: haa woh to hai....waise tum itni raat ko bahar kya kar rahi thi..

Maahi: woh main Dad ko dood ka glass dene gayi thi..tum to jaanti ho ke unhe roz raat ko dood peene ki aadat hai...

Kashish: ofcourse muje pata hai....tum in 10 saal me bilkul nahi badli....aaj bhi khud se jyada dusro ka khayal rakhti ho..

Maahi: aur tum bhi to nahin badli..aaj bhi tumhe sabse pehle apni khushi ki parwah hai...waise agar main galat nahin hoon to kya us tasveer me tumhare saath Sia aur Rohan hain?

Kashish: mere best friends.....pata hai...uske bina to mera hostel me rehna mumkin hi nahi tha....dono ne bahot support kiya...her bure achche kaam me..

Maahi: jaanti hoon ke woh dono tumhare liye kitne special hain..tum har roz phone par ek baar to zaroor unka zikr karti thi

Kashish: pata hai jab woh dono airport muje drop karne aaye to mujse bhi jyada woh dono ro rahe the.....per tum pareshan mat ho...maine unki setting kara di hai...

Maahi: lagta hai tum sab ke beech bohat pyar hai...aur setting matlab?

Kashish: setting matlab...un dono ke beech pyaar...

Maahi: oh..yaani woh dono ek doosre se pyar karte hain...thats great..kamsekam tumhare yahan rehte woh ek doosre ka sahara ban sakte hain

Kashish: haa maine to unko uska sahara mila diya...lekin un dono ne mere liye abhi kaha kuch kiya hai..

Maahi just smiles at her..

Maahi: shayad woh jaante hain ke kabhi iski zaroorat hi nahin paregi...tum to waise bhi humesha wahin karti ho jo tumhe pasand ho..apna jeevan saathi bhi to tum khud hi dhundna chahogi na..

Kashish: ofcourse....ab shaadi muje karni hai...rehna muje saath hai....to phir use pasand bhi main hi karungi.....after all love marrige me jo yakeen rakhti hoon..

Maahi: aur main arranged..jahan dad ki marzi hogi main wahin se shaadi karungi..

Kashish: pata nahi dad ke saath rehke tum bhi uski tarah old fashion ho gayi ho.....tum kya janogi love marrige ka maza....kya khus naseeb log hote hai.....main bhi kisi ki laila....kisi ki heer....kisi ki juliet banna chahti hoon....kaha hoga mera.....majnu...mera ranja..mera romeo...

Maahi: Kashish apna drama bandh kar ....yeh sab sirf kahanion me hota hai..haqeeqat me to yeh sab kuch bhi nahin hai Kashish..mera maan na hai ke do logo ke beech pyar shaadi ke baad hota hai..but i really hope tumhara har sapna..har khwaish poori hojaye

Kashish: ek kaam karte hai.....tu arrange kar main love marrige karti hoon...phir dekhte hai kiske sapne jyada pure hote hai....chal lagati hai shart...

Maahi: theek hai..laggi shart...

Kashish: agar main jiti to zindagi bhar tere sare adhure kaam karungi....

Maahi: aur agar main jiti to main tab tak bhagwan se prathna karungi...jab tak tuje teri khushian nahin mil jaati...

Kashish: ple ple ple...is shart ke bare me dad ko mat batana.....

Maahi: don't worry...yeh baat humesha sirf aur sirf humare beech me rahegi...ab chal raat bohat hogayi hai aur tum flight ki wajah se tak bhi gayi hogi..tum so jaao..hum subah baat karenge..

Kashish: thik hai....Good Night Maahi...Sweet Dreams.....

Maahi: wish you the same Kashish...

She smiles at Kashish and then leaves from there..closing the door behind her...Kashish just looks towards the door as she watches Maahi leave and then climbs in her bed...she lies down..with her eyes wide open...when Sujal's thoughts came to her mind again..she just smiled and tapped her head lightly...she closed her eyes whilst her hands reached out to close the lamp..she fell asleep within minutes being tired from her journey...

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It was 11am the next morning..Kashish was still sleeping..a moment later she opened her eyes and looked around the place'when she realized where she was'she sat up in bed whilst yawning and stretched..running her fingers through her hair'she moved the bed covers and got out of bed..wearing her gown'as she walked out of her room'she looked around but it was very quiet..all she could hear was the maids who were cleaning up the lounge..she walked to Maahi's room and knocked but no response..she opened the door and saw her bed was neatly done up'.she then walked towards Abhinav's room and saw the maid cleaning the room'

Kashish: Maria'dad aur Maahi kahan hai?

Maria; Mam woh sab to office chale gaye....aur Maahi mam ne kaha hai ki driver aur car aapke liye taiyaar hai...aap jaha jana chahe ja sakte hai breakfast karke..

Kashish: hmmm'theek hai'

Kashish just looks at her for a moment and then leaves for her room'she walks to her closet taking out some clothes and then leaves for the washroom..she takes a shower and gets changed'and then walks out to see the driver stood there'

Driver: Mam..kahan jaana hai aapko'

Kashish: Sinha Office....

Driver: Ji Mam'

Kashish sits inside the car as the driver opens the back door for her'he closes the door and then sits in the front..driving off from their towards the office'20 minutes later the driver parked the car and got out..opening the door for her'she got out and looked around the building'she then headed off towards the bulding'as she walked in every person was staring at her'they all stood up to greet her and were talking amongst themselves'knowing well who she was'she enquired about Abhinav's cabin and then left for the office once a worker directed her'she walked to the cabin opening the door'when she saw Sujal and Maahi sat in Abhinav's office..discussing the next project..they turned around towards her as the door opened'

Abhinav: arre Kashish beta..tum yahan..

Kashish: haa main yaha.....pehle Maahi tum utho...

Maahi looks at her confused'

Maahi: main?..par kyun

Kashish: pehle utho to sahi...

Maahi just looks at her confused and gets up from the chair'

Maahi: lo..uth gayi..

Kashish smiles at her and than sits on her chair....Maahi just looks at her and shakes her head..whilst Sujal just watches her sit beside him..

Kashish: aap dono me koi tamiz hi nahi ...India se kya chale aaye sab kuch bhul gaye...koi kal dus saal aaye bad ke mehman ko aise hi chod ke chala aata hai..

Maahi: Kashish yeh sab kya hai..hum kaam me busy hain aur tum mazaak kar rahi ho..aur tum so rahi thi subah..hum tumhe disturb nahin karna chahte the

Kashish: agar main tumhe aadhi raat ko phone karke bore kar sakti hoon to tum muje jaga nahi sakti....tumhara bhi hakk banta hai muje pareshan karne me..

Maahi: Kashish who baat nahin hai'par muje yeh theek nahin lagga'tum flight se thak chuki thi aur phir kal raat ko dair se bhi soyi..isliye maine tumhe disturb karna theek nahin samja..aur waise bhi maine driver ko wahan chod diya tha..taki tum jab bhi uttho who tumhe Mauritius dikha sake

Kashish: agar muje driver ke saath dekhna hota to main yaha nahi aati....woh driver mera bhai nahi lekin tum meri behen ho....Mauratitus dekhungi to tumhare saath...Maahi: Kashish..zidd mat karo..muje bohat kaam hai'main weekend pe tumhe lejaungi..promise

Kashish: 10 saal ke bad main aayi aur tum sabko mujse jyada kaam important lag raha hai....dad aap kuch kehna pasand karenge..

Abhinav: Maahi beta'baaki kaam baad main hojaenge'kaam karne ke liye puri zindagi hai....lekin meri itni sweet si beti ke liye tumhare pass ek din bhi nahi.....Kashish theek hi kehrahi hai..usse ghumane ke liye tum leke jaaogi'aur Sujal beta..tum bhi saath me chale jaao..baaki sab main sambhal lunga

Sujal: thik hai main chala jata hoon.....

Kashish: dekha Maahi...Sujal ke saath dus saath rehne ke bad abhi tak kuch nahi sikhi......i hope tumhe bura na lage agar main tumhe Sujal kahoon..

Sujal: no not at all..infact I would be more happy..formalities ki zaroorat nahin hai..

Kashish: thik hai to chale....ki Maahi ko special invitation dena padega...

Maahi: nahin uski koi zaroorat nahin hai'mein aarahi hoon..chalo'

Abhinav:: aaj kaha jana pasand karogi tum....

Kashish: aaj to sirf main car me beth ke pure mauratitus ko durr se dekhna chahti hoon......

Abhinav: thik hai....Sujal yeh lo meri car ki keys....Kashish ko jyada pasand aayegi....

Sujal: thanks Uncle...

Sujal takes keys and walks towards door......

Kashish: bye dad...shaam ko milte hai....aur aap sirf apna hi kaam karna...baki ka Maahi kal kar degi...

Abhinav just smiles at her'

Abhinav: tum meri fikr mat karo beta'you just go and enjoy'bye beta..Maahi Sujal..Kashish ko har jagah ghumana ok

Maahi: ok dad...chale madam..

Kashish: ofcourse'lets leave'

Kashish gets up with a smile and Sujal follows'all three of them leave from there whilst Abhinav rests back on his chair'smiling..he felt so happy to have his daughter back....

Edited by goodkashish - 14 years ago
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I am sorry guys for not uploading as i just moved to another city so taking my time to adjust in it and find internet.....but now its good and will start my fashion school soon...so ple pray for me tht i do well...thanks

Edited by goodkashish - 15 years ago
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Hey nice update.... do continue soon..
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Lovely part !!
Cant wait for the story to unfold !!
P.S. - All the Best for your Fashion School !!
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hey dears nice part...................kashish and maahi are complete opposites...................and kashish is falling for sujal's voice more............wonder who wins the bet................cont soon dears.....................

and All the Best for ur Fashion School dear............take care...........
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amazing part

i really liked the way u potrayed kashish's charachter she seems reallly intresting and her views are completely the opposite of mahi.the scene were she was keep on looking at sujal was good it seems kashish has a soft spot 4 sujal.The relationship between kashish and her family was beautifully potrayed and i really liked the way u described how sujal felt about kashish when he was talking to daimaa.

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awesome part kashu&summi cont soon
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Hi Awesome part now cant wait for next part great start thx for pm
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Awesome update !
Loved it !
I just loved Kashish's attitude !
Sujal's relation with his Daima was great !
Waiting for next !
Update soon !
Thnx for pm !

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