New Mayur FF: Love Undefined (NOTE on pg17) - Page 13

Originally posted by: jeniluvmayur

*edited*

u know am little busy packing up and more over alwaz shopping all as if am shifting my whole house to the college😆😆😆 .... yup i know jaanu... thats why i give u so much time...😊.

i couldnt still hold on making u wait pricks me up so am editing honey..! thats good...😉

sammy flirting with gunjan and mayu disturbing was cute scene..!😛 .... glad u liked it...😃

gunjan giving reason to mayu 😆😆😆wow...! .... thanxxxx 😊

one doubt dey all stay together huh? u will get your answer dear.... just read carefully...😆

shipa and mayu wasso adorable huny..! yup... their bond is really something to watch here.... oops..!!. read here...😆😆

nupz saying mayu monkey😆😉... hmm... gr8 nah...😆

mayu saying her jungli billi😆😆😆very cute....! thanx a lot....😳

great imagination darling...! all inspired from u darling....😉

okay i got my answer here ...u doent leave me to ask a question too 😳😉u gave the answer..i like it...! thanks.... afterall dost kiski hoon.... hun..😆

mayur was so lovely yaar....arey wt s gng on buddy...dey too go on fight i simply enjoy reading more...! thanx.... there r lot more such cute fights to come jaanu....😉

poor all sajan couldnt stop mayur...😉 gets tired soon ...instead shilpa... ya....😆😆😆

i loved this part...absolutely enjoyable buddy...! aww... thanx a lot yaar... for such a sweet comment ..... love u.... *hugs* 🤗

u no what i forgot everything and enjoyed the moments reading and imagining ur ff...! aww... u r so sweet to say that darling..... love u....😍

go on...rock on my sweety...! thanksssss

😆😆😆what s dat joke yaar you made last? it was not a joke .... ok !!

dont be joking here afterwards okay...i simply enjoyed ur update...! yaar... it was not a joke....

am drooling over update sooner...dont take longer daz to update...plz.

and i'm drooling over ur comment.....😳😳


yup.,... dear... if u say... i have to update it soon nah....

loves ...love u too

jeni! ...varshu

Originally posted by: mahaklovesmayur

So sorry for the late reply! no sorry jaanu... u know na... i dont like ''sorry's''.....

I told u that i was out of station! i know jaanu....😉

But i just loved the beginning...... thanks dear... i'm glad u liked it !! 😳

Yaar samrat kitna romantic hai! hmm woh toh hai...😳

I really loved his line..... i too...😆

You wrote that line perfectly!thanks a lot dear...😊

And even i was blushing!really... it means i succeeded....yipee !!

And bechara mayank only i can say! hmm.. bechara...😆

Wow......just loved the DM and Mayank scene....thankssss sweetheart...😳

I mean isse yeh toh hai ki mayur ki lovestory mein koi problem nahi hogi....... hmm... well that u have to see darling...😉

Yaar what a mind-blowing description of Nupur's beauty!

Really loving those lines.......simply beautiful....... aww... thanx sweety for so many lovely comments..🤗..... i'm just loving reading ur comment.... 😳😳

Lol'.mere naam ka yeh use? hmm... nice nah....😳

Thank you so much for using my name in this beautiful ff'. ur most welcome jaanu... it was my pleasure....😉😉.. afterall u r my lucky charm sweetheart....😉

And by the way, Mahak toh hamesha hi achi hoti hai''especially khaane ki.. hmm... wo toh hai...😛

Yaar Mayank kitna acha hai! Love him for loving DM. I love him too yaar....😍

Monkey? Yahan par bhi Mayank monkey hai? hehe....😆😆

Jungle billi'.i love this name due to someone'..tujhe pm mein bataoongi' well... i'll wait for it.... do tell me soon... ok !! 😉

Lol'.mayur started fighting and sajan lost in their own world'.

Both love shilpa so much'. yup....😃

Mayank ne apna breakfast kyun nahi kiya? u'll get to knowthat in the next part sweetheart.....😉

Shut up! Dare you say it boring again'. r u sure.... it was not boring....??😕

It was so enjoyable'..beautiful''awesome''loving'.

thanx a lot dear for so many sweetest compliments..😳😳..u r such a sweetheart....muahh...🤗🤗

Simply perfect'.. thankssss 😃

Tum bahut bahut bahut acha likhti ho'. really... thanx dear... u really boosted up my confidence....😉

Do update as soon as possible'..but padhai I can understand! hmm... still i'll try my best...😊

P.S.- mera reply chaar se zyada baar delete ho chukka hai and I had typed it up all again'.so sorry for such a poor comment on such a beautiful part'.

Ohh... still u typed it so many times... aww.. u r such a cute sweety jaanu...🤗.

and don't dare u say...it a poor comment.....

its the most sweetest... lovely.... n a very special for me.....😳😍

and no ''sorry'' again n again..😡.. now u better get this... ok !! 😊

Love, love u lots...n lots...🤗

Mahak... varshu

Originally posted by: -krazyriya-

Originally posted by: -krazyriya-

aww... thank u so much dear... for this lovely comment.... 😳

do u really think... that i write well.....??

well if u think so.... then i'm so glad yaar ....😳

i'm so happy u liked it...😳....

though i really doubt.... does it really deserve so much praise...😆

but thanks a lot for commenting... it really means a lot to me....😳

loved ur coloured text.... its really very cute....😍.... thanks !! 😛

love u....
varshu

Originally posted by: AngelArTi1988

varsha yaar.. m so sorry ...4 late commenting.. i think u hv noticed dat i hd reserved a place 4 dis ff wen u had introduced ur ff..but due 2 my chok-a-bloc schedule couldnt edit it!!😭 😔 m sorry re..n now u hv finished upating d 1st part.. its realy so so late 4 me...🤢

but better late than never..🤔aj padh liya finally.. n girl..u hv got going...luvd d CS,d concept n d 1st part.. 👏⭐️so smile n update soon...ok?? god bless u re...👍🏼

luv mayur always!!!🤗