New Mayur FF: Love Undefined (NOTE on pg17) - Page 11

Originally posted by: adi_gupta

hi varshu .... hi adi...

yaar now i think jenni will take revenge by bugging you for updates how we bug her..... ya even i think so... but i guess she's busy these days... so i'll try to update before she can do that...😆

and the update was not boring understand buddy .... thanx dear... i'm glad if u think so...😊
lovely update ..... thanx a lot dear.....😳
and well i will wait for the next update ..... thanx a lot.....😳
and i love the bonding of shilpa aunti and maynk ......
which i miss in the show .... aww.. even i miss it badly.... but i'll try to cover it up here....
lovley update
and sammy's lovely dialouge ..... thanx a lot dear.... i'm so sooo happy u liked it...😃

Originally posted by: ..pebo..

hey varshu!!!!!!!!! hey.. hi my bubblypie...😳

wonderful 1st part !!! it was so cute . shilpa aunty , mayu , nups , sam and gun. perfect yaar !!'our famous cat fight and junglee billi are back!! thanx a lot dear.... i'm so glad yaar.... u liked it...😳😳...
ya... our monkey n jungli billi r back !! 😆

yhey are just to adowable!!! ya.... they are... i loved them too...😛

update soo...... oh ill have to wait for 1 week ..... mm... i guess u have to... sorry....😊

try to update soon! .... yup... i'll try my best jaan...😉

pebbzz ..

So sorry for the late reply!

I told u that i was out of station!

But i just loved the beginning....

Yaar samrat kitna romantic hai!

I really loved his line.....

You wrote that line perfectly!

And even i was blushing!

And bechara mayank only i can say!

Wow......just loved the DM and Mayank scene....

I mean isse yeh toh hai ki mayur ki lovestory mein koi problem nahi hogi.......

Yaar what a mind-blowing description of Nupur's beauty!

Really loving those lines.......simply beautiful.......

Lol….mere naam ka yeh use?

Thank you so much for using my name in this beautiful ff….

And by the way, Mahak toh hamesha hi achi hoti hai……especially khaane ki..

Yaar Mayank kitna acha hai! Love him for loving DM….

Monkey? Yahan par bhi Mayank monkey hai?

Jungle billi….i love this name due to someone…..tujhe pm mein bataoongi…

Lol….mayur started fighting and sajan lost in their own world….

Both love shilpa so much….

Mayank ne apna breakfast kyun nahi kiya?

Shut up! Dare you say it boring again….

It was so enjoyable…..beautiful……awesome……loving….

Simply perfect…..

Tum bahut bahut bahut acha likhti ho….

Do update as soon as possible…..but padhai I can understand!

P.S.- mera reply chaar se zyada baar delete ho chukka hai and I had typed it up all again….so sorry for such a poor comment on such a beautiful part….

Love,

Mahak

Originally posted by: rkmnsg

Varsha sachi mein

I just loved this whole part

with Sayank knocking at their door in the morning n

Gunjan getting the door!
n then

wow Sammy's compliment 😆

" I know chashmish but jab saamne itna khoobsurat chaand ho toh suraj ki roshni kaise dikhai degi !!"

n Shilpa like Mayu's mommy

n Mayu chooo sweet na !

just love his character !😍

n how u describe Nupur

uffff uff ufff I could picture her perfectly !!

u'r amazing writer u know sis !

n as usual Mayur fight's

he calling her "Jungli billi" n she calling him "Monkey"😆

n Sajan in their own little dream world😆

do cont ASAP na !!
n dunn ever say it's boring !!!

warna.....

this is the best FF ever !!
me in luvv with it !!
now plezz plezz plezz

I can't wait

do cont na !!
luvvv u 🤗

-Lina-

Originally posted by: koolwaters_poo

ur writin very nicely sooo plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz update soon as u've made me very excited n i've sent u a frns req soo plzzzzzzzzzzzz accept it n send me a pm once u update :D

Originally posted by: achoose

awesome start dear...loved it to the core..this mayank and nupur remind me of my best friend rohit, me and our fights.........

Originally posted by: fariaa70

thanx a lot for this beautiful comment jaan....😳

will cont. soon...😉

keep commenting....😉

love u...🤗
varshu

Originally posted by: Jiah.Angel

Hi! 🤗

Nice start . .

You have committed your share of mistakes but with every part you'd improve, I'm sure. You are really good at this.

And as for the update, it was cute! Ekdam Hindi TV soaps ke jaisa! 😆 I liked it a lot on the whole. Keep up the good work. 👍🏼

-Kanky

Originally posted by: surbhi123

awesome work .................. hey... thanx a lot dear...😳
really a very fantastic start............... i'm so glad u liked it...😊
terrific one.................. thanx a lot....😊
you are such a nice writer............ thanx a lot for such lovely comment jaan...😍
loved the concept and everything...............thank u...😊
loved the friendship................. thank u....😊
loved the ch........... its my pleasure....😳
sorry for replying late yaar............. plz... no sorry in our friendship yaar... u came here.. read it n gave such a sweet comment... its lot more than enough for me...😍

you know even my inspiration was mahak...................😉 yup... i know...n same here....😉
you rocked dear.........hugs....😛 thanx a lot dear.... hugs to u too... 🤗