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Posted: 15 years ago
#31
awesum yr
so touchng part
cont soooon with bigger update
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Posted: 15 years ago
#32
thanks a lot for the positive response guys....i still think i can't write 😆...anyways one more lame attempt....not satisfied....pls bear with me 😆

Part 2


Her POV

I saw him walk away glibly. I wanted him to turn. To just look at me once...... Assure me that yes we would be together. I wanted something like the silly palat-palat game he once played with me once onscreen to happen. Onscreen. The word sank my heart. We are no more on the screen.together. Tears swelled up in my eyes as that thought haunted me. I was frozen to the ground. He was affected right? Or do I expect too much? Maybe we are just friends. But don't I even deserve a decent good-bye? Atleast from him? Was it too much to ask for?

Expectations! They always haunt you don't they? I never expected that one moment would change everything. That one moment took me away from my show, my fans and him.

PACKUP! I heard someone say not bothering to know who.

So this is it I guess. I guess no one will plead me to stay on for some more time today or ask me to come early tomorrow or threaten to take the sets on his head if I don't come on time. I natural smile and chuckle came on my face as I thought about his childishness'and his naughty smile. But as soon as I thought these are not meant to happen I was brought back to ground. How long can I allow my heart to flutter in unknown directions?

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I made my way to my make-up room. I stood near the entrance. Each and every corner of it had memories.

My life, my wife. Spoke one corner

Cold ko cold kat ti hai. Mein socha tum hot ho---hot toh tum ho. Spoke the other as I smiled walking down the memory lane.

U get the loves of the world.


The poking thing he does to me.

Describe her in 5 words hot, sexy, sweet, adorable, passionate

The thing I don't like about him when he irritates me a lot

When I USED to irritate u a lot

Used to no, u are used to irritating me.

Say one good thing abt me.

Caring!

Ahh! how I sighed at his blush. I slight grin came on my face, a smile of affection, a smile of adoration, a smile seeing his childishness, cuteness, irritating behavior, that naughtiness and loads more in his eyes. I could humm a teri nadani pe fida for him.

I saw two figures, one in blue shirt, other wearing a maroon salwar suit, eye in eye, waltzing together amongst falling red balloons. Both of them hitting the balloon upwards brushing their hands in the process and again getting lost in each other's waltz while dancing.

And then the figures disappeared. The smile vanished. Back to reality are we? It can't go this way. I have no idea whats between us? Is it onsides? Oh is there anything at all?

The cell phone ringed. Could it be him? Said the hopeful side in me. I rushed to grab the cell phone only to find some journalist trying to find my views on the season two. I felt a gush of anger and anxiety in my mind. It wasn't him? Oh how could it be he? If he had to say anything, he would have said it on your face. Don't you get it still? He is not bothered about you as you are. I cut the call and did not care about the consequence. Oh common I am already defamed. Could anything worse happen?

And with tat thought I picked up my stuff, my car keys. Without a second thought I made it outside the room. I looked back the last time at the room, as if to say good bye to memories. And with that I made my way to the car and drove amongst the rain.

His POV

"Meine kahana meri tabiyat kharab hai!" I almst yelled at the person on the other side of the phone. "Is liye meine shoot cancel ki. Anything else?" I asked honking madly at the traffic ahead, annoyed at the fact of being questioned? Why am I answerable to everyone on earth? I have life don't I? "I'll be fine." I lied. I cannot be fine. It like a dagger stabbed on to me cruelly. The phone buzzed again. I did not have the energy or the mood to answer any questions by anybody.

I rested my head on head rest. It rained heavily and a huge traffic stretched ahead of me. So even the whether was in rocking mood, I rolled my eyes.

Kahin toh hogi who

Duniya jaha tu merey paas hai

I wanted to turn off the radio. But I could not. I did not feel like doing anything. I felt a part of me was snatched away from me deliberately. The thing that irked me more was she being cool about it? Why is it always me who suffers? Can't she be a bit more transparent? I am sure I did not read wrong. I would have had a doubt if it was for once. But how can I be wrong always? I and she'.we had something.

Kahin toh, kahin toh

Hai nasha, teri meri har mulaqat mein

"Exactly." I mumbled out of a blue. Some unsaid feelings between us. Else why do I feel a void within me when she's not there? Why am I totally worn out when she is away for me. I had tough times during the times she went on a date. What will I do now? I am so used to her. It will be tough. But I have to go on with my work. It won't be easy without her. But I have no other options. And I know the following few days is going to be very tough for me. But I guess I have to make the memories of the time spent with her a motivation and strength to get me going.

*crash*

It thundered. It rained more heavily now. The rains---- It had beautiful memories. I smiled. I should have talked to her. But am I wrong in hoping she would understand me?

I watched the rains again. I don't know why but I feel she somewhere near to me. I can sense her. I shrugged that thought and hit myself and went back to honking the traffice

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Adjacent to a honking car stood a calm car. She sat on the seat with seatbelts on. Her hands on the steering wheel. She seemed lost in deep thoughts.

Manzilon se raahein doodhti chali,
Kho gayi hai manzil kahin rahon mein.......


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OK i have no idea wat the above was 😕

joothas pls 😆

and pls send me friend request for update of the updates 😆


OH one more important thing....the "I and she....we have something".....the dialogue lifted shamelessly from Vampire diaries 🤣....forgive me for that 🤣

Edited by debolinaroy08 - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
#33
Debo 🤗
It was such an amazing update. Wow, both are distressed over it. Yet they aren't voicing their feelings. All the memories. ☺️😍
It was beautiful . I loved it to bits. You are an amazing writer Debz. Too good. Gosh, it was just *Fabulous*. 😍
Continue soon.
Love ya.
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Posted: 15 years ago
#34
BULLY 🤗
OMG this is simply brilliant ☺️
You write SO DAMN WELL dude 😲 🤣
No shocker there LOL

Update soon
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Posted: 15 years ago
#35
*throws jootas and chappals* for saying that it was bad 😡 *crosses arms* it was not bad.....it was very bad....so bad that it actually left me sigh and wish this was true....so ridiculously bad that I couldn't help but love it! I could so imagine this 😍

Detailed comment tomorrow......I need to have ArTi dreams now 🤣 *shakes head at self* 😆
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Posted: 15 years ago
#36
kahin to kahin to hai nasha,
haan unki har ek mulakat mein............

kahin to kahin to hogi wo
duniya jahan ye dono saath hain.........

LOL, thats all i pray...............i loved ur update, and i guess it happened this way only..............

my heart goes out to them, plz update soon
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Posted: 15 years ago
#37
beautiful .... you portrayed everything so well .... awesome!!!!! loved the song used .... totally suited!!!
Edited by sonam961986 - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
#38
fantastic update debo....wonderful piece of writing!!i didnt know u possess this talent as well..multi diamensional phenomenon!!🤗🤗love u.
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Posted: 15 years ago
#39
Fabuloua Debz.....
Amazing!!!!
Continue jaldi.....
Love ya loads...
Missing ya...
Mina
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Posted: 15 years ago
#40
dil ka aalam mein kya bataoon tujhe?
Debo :) u know what I LOVE about u? U write so many things that are on my mind ..lying around but sometimes I dont put around coherently...
Its like the lyrics of the song I so love and think of on Arti 😍
just know it was A M A Z I N G

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