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Posted: 15 years ago
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Ah! debo.....i came online early morning, its raining heavily at my place( u know it is the habit of HOL ppl to think abt two special ppl whenever it rains.😆)& the first thing i read is ur update.......heaven is here only!!!!!!!!!😍 btw, u took very long ti,e to update...don't do that , update frequently na plz!!!!!!!
This update was a walk throughout he memory lane of all their interviews.special dialogues....i simply loved it debo..donno why u feel it is not good...i felt it was superb ..😍

Both of the POV was just described perfectly by u.....her remembering their moments together, & his trying to move on keeping those memories as motivation.....😍 the rain , the traffic,the kahi to hogi woh song...........it was all perfect debo.....thanks..a lot for this ...ah! what a start of my morning..in fanaa anniversary!!!!!!!!.Loved it.

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Posted: 15 years ago
#42
hey Debooooooo,

I can't even tell you how beautifully that was written and anything on these two is so close to our hearts that any writeup on them certainly feels special.

It had me in tears thinking that they both won't be together here at least onscreen. Life is cruel and harsh, at times I hate this term move on with life. How when you have lost a part of you or yourself, how to move on without being who we are.

Do update soon Debo, it was mindblowing and heartfelt!
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Posted: 15 years ago
#43
oh Debo..!
You're making me miss them as much as they're missing each other..!
Its all seems so realistic when i read it....wow
Love the way you write them..!!
plzzz continue sooooonnn.....

xoxo
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Posted: 15 years ago
#44
debo....dis is just PERFECT!!!!!!!!!i really mean it...man,i wish smething like dis only should hav hppend...seriously-my heart goes out 2 this ArTi n i hope d true arti hav smething like dis only.....simply grt!!!!!!!!
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Posted: 15 years ago
#45
loved the part plss pm me wen u upd8
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Posted: 15 years ago
#46
Debziee ☺️ what was that? okay I'm already in my dreamland mode! You write so beautifully yaar, why do u think u can't write? *runs behind u with ur trademark belan* 😡

but then I also wanna hug u for writing this 🤗 😆 It was raining here heavily yesterday....*sigh* ArTi and rain...the perfect combo ever 😍 You know what I always imagine these two on this "kahin toh hogi woh" song 🤣 I know I'm a nut case.

They won't be together *onscreen* now 😔 This is so heartbreaking! But ah you have described their POVs so wonderfully! It seems so realistic.

Plus their world famous quotes 😍 *sigh* Enough for me to lose my senses 😳

My life, my wife. Spoke one corner

Cold ko cold kat ti hai. Mein socha tum hot ho---hot toh tum ho. Spoke the other as I smiled walking down the memory lane.

U get the loves of the world.


The poking thing he does to me.

Describe her in 5 words hot, sexy, sweet, adorable, passionate

The thing I don't like about him when he irritates me a lot

When I USED to irritate u a lot

Used to no, u are used to irritating me.

Say one good thing abt me.

Caring!


And debz ji, update soon ji...pretty please! I can't wait for much long. I was comparatively saner today but after reading this update do u expect me to be S-A-N-E? Hehe I'm grinning like a fool.



Edited by -PrincessAvu- - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
#47
debo it was amazing!! seriously!! I mean awesome!! aww I loved it.
continue soon.
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Posted: 15 years ago
#48
Oh my freaking god!

That was beautiful!!

Loved the confused souls!

the pain the confusion and most of all the un-confessed love!!

Ha!!! this was wonderful!

Thank you so much for writing this!!

Please continue soon.....

Akansha
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Debo you left me speechless..Ohhhhh God it was AMAZING...Don't you ever say that again you can't write...
The way you have written it....The emotions..the feelings...It seems so realistic..Ahhhhh that raining and song part was just awesome...
I am in ARTI deamland...
Continue soon...
Edited by awsumgirl - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
#50
Debo.......Gosh!!.....this update was sooo beautiful and those rati thoughts😍😍....u r such fine writer and what did u say this is ur first😲.........i am loving this.... in Arti heaven again☺️
About jutas bye for urself u wont get any from us🤣

update soon😃

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