An ArTi SS part 3 pg 8

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_ArTi4ever_

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Posted: 15 years ago

#11

debo its not fair yaar.why did u end tis part so abruptly?its sooo not fair.eagerly waiting 4 the next part..do continue asap..i cant wait..and last but not the least amazing update..to be very honest🤗love u.

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Swati Shukla

@swati05

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Posted: 15 years ago

#12

awesome SS debo.........i am high on ArTi since morning........after AB's blog UD and the interview........and now this...........its absolutely perfect

loved the way u described their emotions

plz do continue soon :)

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Faria Ferdousi

@Faria.

Stunner

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Posted: 15 years ago

#13

Wow
what an OS debo
Truly amazing
its ur first OS- i cant believe it.
it was very beautiful OS dear
excellent
awesome job
plz do write more

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Mrina's PM ID

@Mrina-PMs

Dazzler

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Posted: 15 years ago

#14

Oye Debzzz..... Meri jaan...

Kya fiction likha hai...

Lagta hai ke aisa sach mein hua tha...

First attempt???? are u sure!!! Its marvellous...

Isi khushi mein tujhe Pav Bhaji, Dosa aur Pani Puri khilati hu!!! Kya bolti tu?

Missing u yaara...

Pls next part jaldi update karna...

Love u loads...

Mina

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Aneesha Kaushal

@theaneesha1992

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Posted: 15 years ago

#15

Debo ....what this is ur first one.😲.....really!!!......i cant believe it
I loved it, amazing rocking .......didnt seem friction to me .......u projected Arti emotions soo beautifully.......my eyes were teary reading it😒.......

Update soon i am waiting😍

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Senny

@Senny

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Posted: 15 years ago

#16

hey Debo,

I always knew from your posts, that you can write beautifully. I would certainly love to read something so wonderful as this. It was heart wrenching Debo. It made me cry and made me crying maate hehe.

Keep it up Debo!

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MrsJaimeFraser

@MrsJaimeFraser

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Posted: 15 years ago

#17

OMG...debo-itz wonderful..just hope ArTi really feel it n just get together!!!!!!!continue plzz n fast!!!!eagerly waiting fr an arti ss.

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..pebo..

@..pebo..

Dazzler

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Posted: 15 years ago

#18

awesome debo
wonderful start

continue soon

i wanna know what happens next

pebzz

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princess_dj

@princess_dj

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Posted: 15 years ago

#19

Debo you wrote an Arti SS ..............

IT was wow........... really good................ please continue soon...........

I loved the " when will this wretched song end wala part".............. also the way you wrote about his feelings.......... really good

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iHeartMoi

@iHeartMoi

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Posted: 15 years ago

#20

OMG Debo! You write beautifully... Ah! Me in ArTi dreamland!

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