An ArTi SS part 3 pg 8

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ok this is my first time. i am trying to write a short story on ArTi. do tell me how is it. should i continue. Again. watever i write is pure fiction 😉 😉 😉

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HER POV


I was draped in a red chiffon sari. Sindoor, mangalsutra, everything which I never ever got in my long tenure, I got it today.

I went towards him with a heavy heart. My feet did not seem to move. These were the last moments. I wanted the time to stop'to freeze. I wanted to live this time and yet not. But nothing of the sort happened. I had to carry on'move ahead. I approached him'.maybe for the last time. He was looking straight, away from me'it was the scene or did he not want to look at me. I closed the distance between us. I wanted to touch him, wipe his tears; I wanted to look into his eyes'the most expressive eyes on this earth. But no! I couldn't. How much ever I yearned to I couldn't. I felt like bird that has been caged. I moved away. Is this it? Will I never be this close to him? Will I never get chance to get irritated anymore? Will he never tease me, pull my legs, show off, and crack stupid jokes,call me his wife? Did he ever care for me, don't we have anything between us'does he love me? Do I love him?

I moved away. My last steps and away from him. I looked back and smiled. May its not like I thought. Maybe there's nothing'no sparks. No feelings. Nothing at all. I turned back and completed my exit.

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HIS POV


Kya hua'yeh? Kab hua yeh? Why can't the wretched song stop for once? I hated to relate my situation to this song. No this can't happen. I thought no one was supposed to leave. Then how did the decision change overnight? This is unacceptable. This is not done. No this isn't.

My thoughts or rather anger was interrupted by a familiar aura. I could feel her near me. She was near me. Its always hard to explain how I feel when she is close to me. Its awesome. It sweet. It beautiful. Its'..Tears brimmed up my eyes. Mayank was crying right? But my heart was crying. It was bleeding and paining. Nupur was going away. She was going away. I could not even watch her moving away. My job didn't allow me to. She is going. She is going. She'is gone. Would I ever be able to tell her? Will shes not accept. Does she even feel the same? No she doesn't. Maybe she never did. And maybe she will never. I and her can never be us.

CUT!!

As soon as those words came out of the director's mouth. I got up and made my way out! I rushed I out. I turned deaf ears to call of the crew, did not even look at her while walking past her. Let it get stalled, I don't care! Why should i? Do they care? Or does she care.

I banged the vanity door behind me. I need silence. I need peace. I need someone to lean on to. I need someone to open my heart to. I need her.


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do leave your comments 😆 😆

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Posted: 15 years ago
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reserved.............

I cant believe u actually wrote.................

ok, i read it and re read it.............and now tell me where u get inspiration to write this from..........😆

Did u visit MJHT sets...............😉

It was amazing, i loved the way u put forth the feelings and emotions..............from both sides..............

plz do update soon................and plz for god's sake keep sme unwanted elements out of this story..................😆

Love ya for this...............😊
Edited by annie07 - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
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awesome start dear...loved it to th core...........
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Posted: 15 years ago
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You write 😲
Woh bhi so beautifully 😆

OMG Bully 🤗

This is so beautiful ❤️

Madam update ASAP! I will trouble you till you do 🤣
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Ahh....Debo ..you are a rockstar....

since morning I was going insane about Arti you added fuel to the fire...

wat an amazing start....do continue super soon yaar ...I really want to know wat happend after she left......

this is a fiction really ??? I dont think so.....🤣




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Posted: 15 years ago
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It was beautiful Debo. 😍☺️
Very well written.
Continue soon. 😃
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Posted: 15 years ago
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OMG.......is this for real??

i....hold on...i'll comment tomorrow in detail...lemme just get out of the shock and delight on seeing this! 😲

reserved !!
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Posted: 15 years ago
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By god debo.........u wrote an actual ARTI SS? 😲i can' t believe u wrote it & that too it is ur first time.........it was outstanding.......................it was so clearly ARTI ( i donno if that mean anything , i hope u will get what i wanna say!😆)
Superb dear..just what i imagine things would be .u know from whatever we heard...........superb...u wrote both their POVs , their emotions, the feeling of that barsi scene.....so well!!!!!!!!!!!👍🏼


Keep it up debo👍🏼.u r a real rock star (mayank ne jo nupur o kaha wohwala!)😆......
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Posted: 15 years ago
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omg....debo u write too?????????tht ws d 1st shock to me......n d 2nd shock ws its on Arti....woahh..........two things i nevr xpectd to happen.....

bt gal....u rock yaar...wht a start...👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼..u shud hv gt into this writin field long time....nevr mind...der aaye durust aaye...

i am really lookin 4wd......plzzzz........try to update regularly....😊
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Posted: 15 years ago
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baap rey itna shocked mat ho 🤣

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