WITH U..FOREVER (MAYUR FF)

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Posted: 15 years ago
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HIII...I HAD BEEN A SILENT READER IN I-F TILL NOW...I AM A BIIIG FAN OF MAYUR...I HAV BEEN SO DEPRESSED WITH THE DEATH OF NUPUR...
THIS IDEA STRIKED ME LATELY...SO DECIDED TO WRITE IT HERE TO KEEP OUR MAYUR ALIVE...😊
THIS IS MY FIRST ATTEMT TO WRITE AN FF...SUGGESTIONS AND COMMENTS ARE MOST WELCOMED...
INDEX :
INTRO : PAGE 1
small promo : page 1
PART 1 : PAGE 2
PART 2 : PAGE 4
PART 3: PAGE 5
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geeth thumbnail
Posted: 15 years ago
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😊 😊
WITH YOU..
FOREVER

BHUSHAN'S n SHARMA'S together make up the biggest business tycoon of india..

BHUSHAN FAMILY

*SHASHANK BHUSHAN

  • PADMA BHUSHAN

They are the elders of the Bhushan parivar

SAMRAT BUSHAN ' The elder son of bhushan house. Doing his last year of college. He is the heartthrob, mr.supercool'Gals are fida on him..but he has a secret love towards gunjan.

NUPUR BHUSHAN - The youngest of bhushan parivar.sabki ladli he wo..doing her 2nd yr in clg.She is very smart and bubbly..loves fighting with mayank

SHARMA FAMILY

*ADITYA SHARMA

  • KAVITA SHARMA

The elders of sharma family

MAYANK SHARMA - The elder son of sharma family. Doing his last yr in clg. He and samrat are best frnds..main hobby is fighting with nupur

GUNJAN SHARMA ' The ladli if sharma family..she is doing her 2nd yr in clg wth nupur..they are best frnds..she is very quiet and understanding.. she likes samrat.

Shashank bhushan and Aditya sharma had been bestest frnds frm childhood .Now they are business partners and the owners of BHUSHAN'S n SHARMA'S ENTERPRISES'

They live in a huge mansion which consists of two matching houses'the houses are connected together by an over bridge too which is a connection btwn the rooms of our leads'mayank and nupur'this of course gives them a chance to FIGHT day and night without the notice of their parents!!!!!

Mayank and Nupur are the main leads'they don't waste a single chance to fight ' they are known as the biggest enemies in their clg..whn they start fighting, no1 in the world cn stop them!!!! Kafi serious fights hien!!!

SO will these fights eventually turn into love lyk their parents wish??? Os will they remain as biggest fighters????😉😉

SHUD I CONTINUE THIS OR STOP??
DO reply guyss ..UR COMMENTS MEAN A LOT...
Edited by geeth - 15 years ago
geeth thumbnail
Posted: 15 years ago
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whats this...18 views and not a single reply???
seems kyk no1 lyked my concept...😭
giv any suggestion yaar....
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Posted: 15 years ago
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wow gr8 starting dear
do pm me plzzzzzzzz
geeth thumbnail
Posted: 15 years ago
#5

I am posting a small promo here..

i need some replies abt it..some suggestions and comments..
its my first attempt..so forgiv for the mistakes..
promo:

D: ha gunji…par is bar princi ne decide kiya hai ki ball girls or boys milkar organize karenge.without considering the year!!! So girls ki duty hame haazil karni hai..

N: kamse kam uske bahane classes bunk kar sakthi hoo na..

D: right babes

They giv a hi-fi to each other..

Voice :: Wrong😡

N: lo aa gayi mayank sharma…lekin for ur kind info, hamne is bar aapki advice nahi mangi!!!

M: mujt patha hai nupur tumhe advice dena matlab waste of time hein…mein to bas

ye keh raha tha ki tumh iss ball ki organizer nahi banoge…

N: ye tho thumhari galath fehami hei mayank

M: hehe chalo dhekthe hein…is bar bhi ball senior boys hi organize karene…

N: itna overconfidence sehat keliye acha nahi he Mr.sadu

so hw ws it??
reply soonn...im waiting and waiting
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Posted: 15 years ago
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hi their, nice and interesting concept sounds good, luvd da promo plz continue soon

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Posted: 15 years ago
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Heyyyy geeth
Really nice concept n cs
Do continue soon
N plzzzz add me to ur pm
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Posted: 15 years ago
#8
awesome start dear..pls continue soon........
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Posted: 15 years ago
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amazing concept dear

do ocnt soon n plz pme
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Posted: 15 years ago
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hey nice start. welome here as a writer. 😊
yes, we love the mayur in this ff.... do continue soon ji

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