WITH U..FOREVER (MAYUR FF) - Page 4

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Posted: 15 years ago
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thank you all for ur very valuable comments...
i am updating the third part here..
i am afraid this ff will turn into a ss...i am not very good at elaborating things...

PART 3

N: dekho mayank mein thumhara naukrani nahin hun..

M: thum ithna chilla kyon rahi ho? Maine thumse kuch bura tho nahi kaha..

N: tho kya maine bura kaha?

M: nupur mein fight karne ki mood mein nahi hun ?

N: main hoon na!!1

M: nupur pls…mujhe jana hein..

N: haan haan tho jao na…kisne roka hain

Mayank was getting irritated with her talks…she was shouting at him even though he had

not done anything.. he was not able to contol himself..and in an instint

he grabbed nupur by her waist and pressed his lips over hers. Starting from a hard one. It turned into a hot passionate one… nupur was responding to it with equal passion. They broke off when they needed air.. nupur's eyes were closed..

she hugged mayank suddenly.

Tears were flowing from her eyes. Mayank too hugged her tightly and patted her back consoling her.

Nupur was sobbing.

M: kya nupur.. aise bachon ki tharah kyon ro rahi ho??

N: kuch nahi..

M: nupur..mein bas do hafthon keliye jaa raha hoon.. jaldi vapas aa jaungi .

N: hmmm..

M: nupur..ab bas bhi karo!!!

N: haa teek hain..mein ro nahi rahi thi...

And she leaves mayank.

M: wah..tho Jhansi ki rani blush kar rahi hain!!

N: mein ?? mein kaha blush kar rahi hun?? Acha thumhe packing nahi karni hai kya?

Chalo ye lo thumhara shirt.

And she starts her blah-blah to keep herself distracted from the fact that mayank was going today.

Mayank knew this very well.

He again grabbed her by waist such that her back was pressed against his chest. He rested his chin on her shoulders.

M: nupur…mujhe patha hein thum mere bina ek pal bhi nahi reh saktha.. lekin ye workshop bahut useful hein..

N: uffo mayank..mein janthi hun.. 2 hafthe ki thoo baath hein.. main adjust kar doongi..

Vo kya hein na jabse paida hui hu, thabse thumhare ye chehra dekhe bina soyi nahi

Hun..isiliye

M: I love you nupur

N: I luv you too monkey!!

Mayank started kissing her shoulders and nupur closed her eyes feeling him.. just then they heard samrat's bike and got away..

N: mein apne kamre mein jaa rahi hun..varne bhai ko shak ho jayega

Mayank nodded and kissed her forehead.

N: byee mayank.. aona khayal rakhna.. aur mujhe phone bhi karna.. bye

M: hmm..thu bhi apna khayal rakhna..

And with this nupur went to her room through the balcone and closed the door b4 samrat and gunjan entered

S: tho packing ho gaya kya?

M: haan..

G: nupur kahan hain?

M: mujhe kya patha..apne kamre mein hoge..

S: lagtha hein phir se ladai hui..

M: aur nahi tho kya??

Mayank's dad called and informed that they had to leave in half an hr.

Samrat went to his house and met nupur..

S: nups..mere jaane ka time ho gaya..

N: haa bhayya.. apna khayal rekhna.. call karma ok

S: haan behna.. take care..

Finally mayank and samrat bid goodbye to all and heads to the airport to board their flight.

Nupur and gunjan had college from the next day.. nupur was finding it extremely difficult to spend time without fighting with mayank.. there was not much entertainment in the clg for others too without mayur fights..

It had been one week that they had gone and mayank had not called nupur till now!! Nupur was missing him very much..

She was thinking of their everyday fights in the college.. she was sure that no one knew that mayank and nupur were so madly in luv, except they themselves.. no one could ever imagine such things even in their dreams..

Nupur smiled at this imagining what will be the reaction of their family and friends when they cum to know that mayank and nupur were in love!!

She went back to the time in school,…

FLASHBACK…

Mayank, Nupur, Samrat and gunjan used to study in the same school.. it was the last year for Mayank and Samrat in the school . Nupur and Gunjan were in 11th std.. They were enjoying their final days in the school.. Mayank had finally noticed that there have been a change in Nupur's behaviour towards him.. Yeah that was right too.

Nupur's POV

Kya nupur..thu ithni upset kyon ho rahi hein? Mayank there hi ghar mein he.. har din use dekh sakthe heina?? Phir kya?. Dekh Mayank sirf thera dosth he.. y cant I behave like that?

Mayank's POV

What happened to her? Teek se bath bhi nahi kar rahi he.. why does she hav to be so secf conscious around me??

Dude!! Why are u thinking so much about her? Dekh..vo sirf ek dosth he… control dude!!

Hmm.. so that was the condition of both of them.. even though they would fight everytime, none of them could survive without the other..

Nupur smiled remembering those times..

She went back to her last year in school. Mayank and Samrat had joined Excel college ..

It was the farewell day for nupur and gunan's batch.

N: ye kya gunjan..agar thum nahi jaa rahi ho tho mein bhi nahi jaunga..

G: thu samajthe kyon nahi nupur.. meri thabbeyath bilkul teek nahi hein..

Thu ja

N: are you sure?

G: haa meri ma..ab chupchap thayyar ho jaa

N: teek he

Nupur wore a peach color sari that day.. with matching yet simple jewellery.. light make-up

She was looking like a princess..

Mayank had come to her room to take a book but stopped mesmerized by her beauty.. he could not take her eyes from her.. She was truly an angel.His angel..

Nupur got ready and went to her dad

N: papa bhayya kahan he? Mujhe school jana he

Da: padma dekho hamari beti ko.. bilkul pari lag rahi he..

P: haa sachme.. kisike nazar na lage

N: papa…bas bas.aur nahi…bhayya kahan he?

D: vo kisi dosth ke ghar gaye he

N: kya.. ab mein kaise jaungi?

Just then mayank came there. Shashank asked mayank to leave nupur at the school

M: teek he uncle.. mein abhi athi hoon

He goes outside and make a sudden phonecall and give some instructions .

N: chale

M: haan … by the way.. u r looking beautiful today..

N: (blushing) thanks

He takes his bike.

N: bike pe challenge kya?

M: haa.. koi problem hein mere saath chalne pe?

N: (thiking) ye ithna sweet sa kyun baath kar rahi he?

N: nahi..chalthi hun na

She sits behind him and mayank accelerates the bike that nupur had no other option than to hold him tight.. both of them were enjoying this feeling of togetherness..

Mayank gazed at her through the mirror and smiled.. he felt that it was the right time to tell her

N: mayank thum kaha jaa rahi ho? The school is on the other side!!

M: I know..

N: then wer r u going?

M: surprise he

N; mayank aaj farewell he

M:this is more important nupur..

And he rides the bike in a high speed..after 10 minutes..he reaches an empty spot and stops the bike. As soon as nupur gets dow from the bike, he blindfolds her.

N: mayank ye sab kya he?

M: meina kaha na nupur.. surprise he. Ab chupchap chalo..

He began walking holding her hands..she was having a tingling sensation.after 5 minutes they stopped..she was feeling cold breeze ..

Mayank came just behind her and whispered in her ears

M: ab aankhen khol sakthe ho

Nupur froze there..she had butterflies in her stmach due to this closeness..

She was going weak on her knees but she was enjoying it

Mayank removed her blindfold..

She slowly opened her eyes and gasped at the sight

They were standing on the top of a small hill..candles were lighted..there was a table for two arranged..

She felt something soft under her feet..she found rose petals over the ground.

She was overjoyed with this and turned

Mayank was on his knees holding a bunch of red roses

N: mayank ..ye sab

M: sab thumhare liye he

Nupur took the roses from his hand and smiled and blushed

He got up

M: acha laga?/

N: bahut.. I loved it

M: I LOVE YOU NUPUR

Nupur didn't know how to respond.. she had been wishing to hear these 3 words from him for so many years..

N: mayank mein

M: mujhe nahi patha kit hum mujse pyar karthe ho ki nahin.. lekin nupur, mein thumse bahut pyar katha hoon.. ham hamesha ladthe rahthe he.. lekin me thumhare bina nahi jee saktha nupur,,.

N: uffo mayank..kithna bholthe ho thum mujhe bhi kuch kehne dhoge?

M: ohh sorry nupur.. its ok if u don't love me..we r still friends na

N: bas mayank ..bahuth ho gaya.. mujhe bholne dethe hi nahin..

Mayank was feeling dejected..he was so sad when nupur came close to him and said

N: I LOVE YOU TOO MAYANK

M; kya/ I mean sach me?

N; haan mayank.. mein bhi thumse pyaar karthi hun..hamesha se karthi aayi hu

Mayank immediately hugged nupur..nupur too responded to him.. they were so happy to finally admit that they were in love..

M: nupur..thumhare farewell mein chod deti hu

N: what?? U know what ..u r thw world's most unromantic boyfriend!!

M: kyon??

N: abhi abhi apne pyaar ko confess kiya..aur ab jaana chahthe ho?

M:acha tho thum chahthe ho ki ham poori rath yaha baite romance karun? (teasingly)

N: maine kya kaha? (blushing)

M: ok then.. ham dinner kathe hein

N: ok

That night, they had confessed their feelings to each other..they talked a lot..and returned later at the night..

so thats it...

hw was it gysss???

do reply...

i am waiting!!!

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Posted: 15 years ago
#32
i kenw it😃 he kissed her wat a guess
ok m done withmy dace sooo
awesum update yaar m soooooooooooooooooooooooo happy to nw they r a couple
plzzzz update soon n thanx for the pm


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Posted: 15 years ago
#33
WOW fablous update love loved it thnx 4 d pm update soon plz n noooooo ss plzz cont ff ok
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Posted: 15 years ago
#34
It was fab
Loved it
Mayu's confession for Nups was jus fab
So simple yet so beautiful
2 weeks witout eachother
1 week went still a week to go
Pata nahi kaise jayega
Update soon
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Posted: 15 years ago
#35

Hi geeth

Wah wah what an update.

Totally surprising

Hahahaaha ye tou pata he nehi chala ki mayur already confess kar chukka hai

I thought they will confess later.

Heheeheehe but I was wrong.

But our guess about kiss was right.

Haye I loved mayur a lot- loved their confession.

Hmm mayu has gone for workshop and nups miss him a lot.

Hope mayu will return soon.

Lovely updae.

Awesome

Wonderful

Keep it up

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Posted: 15 years ago
#36
awesome update dear...pls continue soon
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Posted: 15 years ago
#37
Heyyyy geeth
Amazing update yaar
Good to know that they r couple
Kinda guessed abt the kiss thingy
N heyyy it came true
Do continue soon
N thanx for pm
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Posted: 15 years ago
#38
awesome update!!!
the confession was very cute
do continue soon
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Posted: 15 years ago
#39
hey geeth i knw ki bahut zadya time nahi hua since my last req bt i wating very eagerly for ur update .plzzzzzzz jaldi jaldi update
Edited by koolwaters_poo - 15 years ago
geeth thumbnail
Posted: 15 years ago
#40

HIII EVERY1...

I am so happy to know that u liked my FF..
But i am sorry to tell u that i am forced to wind up this ff in 2 or 3 parts
my college will reopen in 2 weeks and i will have to go back to my hostel..
so i wont be able to update this for months..i think its better to finish this ff in a positive way sooner than be late...
please bear with this..

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