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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: --Doyel--

awesomeeeeeeeeee!!!!!!! m extremely sorry for replying soooo late!!! had been keeping really busy!!

but the update is superb!!!!!!! lovely yaar! 🤗 OMGGG i hope samrat and gunjan gets back together as soon as possible!!! i almost had tear in my eyes after reading this!!!!!!!!! simply outstanding!!!!👏

thanks doyel for reading the os.
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Posted: 15 years ago

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edited =)

eloo avi !!
how are you ??
hope so good !!
main bhali changi hoon !!😃
uff..
finaaly i'm editing my comment..
lol u noe why i have been commenting so late..
first net..n den hols..
lol..!!😆
okay..aaj zaydad bakwaas nahi subah 4:30 ki utthi hoon..
n train mein bhi nahi so paayei..
songs jo baja rahe the voh log..o dhnno o dhanno..😆
uff..
oh sorry..phir se bakwaas..😆
kya hai mera aur bakwaas ka jnmo ka naata hai,...
hum dono toh janmo ke saathi hain...😆
lol..bakwaas band..
sachi..
lol..
okay now the part...
baba re..
mujhe inte bade bade part padhne ki bilkul aadat nahi hai re..
thoda chota likh..😆
3 posts mein..??
but i must say u used diiferent colours..
lol..
iss pata chalta hai ki..
ofcourse..you like colours very much..
lol..
tujhe kya laga ki main kya kisi ke nature ke baarein mein bataungi..
tu bhi na..😆
*shut up radz..teri bakwwas phir se chalu ho gayi*
yeh main nahi tu bol raha hoga..
lol..
okay now the part..seriously
sam..
goons se pit kar..
bechare ki kya haalat hui..
taras aata hai..😆😭
n upar se gunjan bhi..jaakr pehle se hi baithna chaiye tha uske paas..
bahar baithe ro rahi hai..
paagal !!😡
chalo..sam mom toh seedhi nikli..
not that chudail typos !!😆
n gaana..
mora piya moh se bolat nahi..
n aage jo bhi jo bhi..
lol..i dunno the lyrics !!😆
but it suited the situation completely !!
n den all the bakwaas..
omg samrat ka haath hila..omg..
lol..aisa hota hai kya asli mein..
i dunno..!!😆
n den finnaly the last part..
sajan union..
finaaly !!
mjht mein yeh kab hoga..😕
i hate that funky monkey rohan n his sis riya so much..
waise riya se yaad aaya..
do u watch splitsvilla..
agar dekhte hoge..
toh i noticed ki season 3 mein ria was dere..
uska naam kriti hai na..??
i thnk she only..
main riya ka chehra pehli baar monday ko dekha lol..
usse pehle dekha hi nahi..😆
copycats !!😡
achcha abhi main apne bakwaas band kar rahi hoon !!
see a long comment..
so long rply too..
warna..😈
*evil smile*
pc ki screen se nikal kar do lagaungi..
lozl..!!😆
cont ur ss teenage luvstory soon !!
--radz--
Edited by xxiheartmexx - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: xxiheartmexx

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will edit on thurs..

pakka plomish..


b/w i will give a long comment and i want a long rply 2 !!

k..!!😳

if i m thr ol thn i will reply big.
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Posted: 15 years ago
AWESOME OS
NICE WORK

Originally posted by: lucario

Samrat was not thr in the room'his bed is empty.

G: whr is samrat''she is hell shocked'he just woke up from a big injury from yesterday thn where he gone.

Gunjan runs to the outside corridor'looking for sam'..she goes to docs cabin asking him whr is sam.????

Doc is also shocked to hear tht ssam is not in his room'.he is not in good condition to go out'thn where he is.?????

Doc calls all ward boys and asked thm whr is samrat'but no body knows'.all r shocked'gunjan is crying very badly now'she is scared to the hell'whr sam gone now.

All the wardboys' start looking for samrat here and thr'gunjan also starts looking for sam here and there''she became mad not finding samrat'. many bad thoughts started coming in her mind now.

She asks one of the nurses.

G: tumne abhi kisi patient ko yaha se kahi bhi jate hua dekha hai'.jisse pet pe ghav ho?

N: hmmmm'.are ha..aisa ek patient maine to dekha tha'wo stair pe chad ke upar jar aha tha'lagata hai terrace pe jar aha tha.

G: WHAT?????????

N: ha maine roka bhi tha'magar usne kaha ki khuli hawa lene terrace jar aha hu.

Gunjan is now very scared'..she remembers sams mom words tht samrat tried to kill himself'many times'.did he is trying again??????

G: nahiiiiiiiiiii.

And with tht she starts walking the stairs.

Here on the terrace'someone is walking towards the edge of the terrace'..with ring and locket in his hand.

Its samrat'..he is walking slowly towards the edge.

S: chashmish'tum meri nahi ho saki'.kal maine jab tumse yeh suna kitum mayank ke sath khush ho'to mai bohot khush ho gaya'kyuki muzhe laga'kimai to marne vala hu ab'mere baad mayank to uske sath hai'magar mai bach gaya'..pata nahi kaise'kal maine to harek feelings ko muzhse dur kar diya'magar I felt tht my chashmish was thr with me'.she came back to me'..but whn I woke up I seen nothing'again tht killing loneliness'which is hounting me from last 3 years..

I cant stand with this now'.i cant see my chashmish going with someone'without chashmish in my life thr is no meaning to my life'.I thought tht yesterday I will die but I lived but now I m gonna make sure tht I die'..i wanna be free from this feeling of hurt'.guilt'and being away from my chashmish..

And he is moving to the edge slowly.

Gunjan is moving quickly to the terrace her heart has skipped many beats just thinking tht sam can be in danger'.if he goes again to kill himself'no she not want to loose samrat now'she seen sam on tht position whr he was battling with death'not again.

Now sam is at the edge'looking down to all the people'and thn looks at the locket and rings'.he remembers his all memories with gunjan'.pool party'talent parade'drama'their confession'.valentine party'.and finally that blissful night which made thm one soul...true soulmates'.a tear fall from his eyes'.

S: sorry chashmish'magar mai ab aur nahi seh sakata iss guilt ko'tumse dur bhi nahi reh sakta aur tumhe dusre ke sath bhi nahi dekh sakta'aur tum muzhe nafrat karti ho'.wo gunjan jisse mai pyar karta hu'wo kahi gum ho gayi hai'..shayad mai usse fir kabhi na deh pau'.mai jar aha hu chashmish'hosake to muzhe maaf kar dena.

And he is abt to jump whem someone pulls him and slaps him

Sam is shocked'.sees whose this and he is double shocked'.its gunjan'crying like hell.

Sam looks at him and gunjan not looking anything just hugs him.

Sam is not able to believe whts happening'is his chashmish here'for real?????

Gunjan breaks hug and says sam

G: marne se kuch nahi hoga samrat'..agar marne se hi sab thik ho jata to muzhe bhi marna hai tumhare sath.

S: ye kya keh rahi ho tum gunjan.

G: kon gunjan???????'mai sirf chashmish hu'samrat ki chashmish'aur tum mar jaoge to mai kaise zinda rahugi'mai bhi marti hu tumhare sath

S: nahi gunjan'nahi.

G: firse gunjan'.maine kaha na ki mai chashmish hu'tum khudko samzate kya ho'jab man aya galati kar li'khud ko saza de di'aurab marne ja rahe ho'tumne mere bare mai bilkul nahi socha?????? Mera kya hoga tumhare bagair'.pehale hi maine apni di ko kho diya hai'..ab tum muzhse mera pyar bhi chinana chahate ho????

S: nahi nahi chashmish'wo muzhe laga kitum mayank se shaadi kar rahi ho'aur muzhse ab tum koi bhi rishta nahi rakhna chahati ho'tum mere lia sab kuch ho chashmish'.tum kisi dusre ki hote hua mai nahi dekh sakta'.usse acha mai marna pasand karunga.

G: (keeps hand on his mouth)firse kabhi bhi marne ki baat mat karna'.aur mai tumhe chodke kahi nahi ja rahi'samzhe'.ye dekho'.mayank ne sagai kab ki tod di'usne ye sab sirf muzhe tumse milane k lia kiya tha'.muzhe tumhari halat dikhane ke lia kiya tha'yahi dikhane ki aaj bhi tum muzhse bohot pyar karte ho'..bhale hi mai tumse kitni bhi mafrat karti thi'.magar tumhara pyar akhir mai jeet hi gaya'aur aaj uss nafrat ko pyar mai badal diya.

S: to tumne muzhe maaf kar diya?????

G: haa samrat'wo ek accident tha'.aur usme tumhare sath humari galati bhi thi'aur tumne apne lia bohot saza pali hai'ab aur nahi'aur tumhe saza deke di wapis nahi ane vali'.ab yahi thik hoga ki hum past ko piche chod apne present pe concentrate kare.

S: (first time after 3 years sam smiled)sacchi chashmish tumne muzhe maaf kar diya??

G: ha samrat maine tumhe maaf kar diya'.ab pls tum muzhe bhi maaf kar do..tumse aise rudely behave karne ke lia'tumhe akela chod ke ane ke lia'.mai bohot guilty feel kar rahi hu'jab muzhe tumhare sath dukh share karna tha'.to maine tumhe chod diya'.mai bohot buri hu.

S: (cupping her face) nahi chashmish'tum bohot achi ho'mai hi bura hu'maine jo galati ki uski muzhe saza mili'maine kabhi bhi kisi ko meri halat ka zimmeddar nahi teharaya'.tumne aur mayank ne jobhi kiya'wo sahi tha'maine tumhe bohot dukh diya hai chashmish'mai bura hu'bohot bura hu'..

Meri vajah se nupur aaj zinda nahi'and sam again starts crying.

G:( has tears in her eyes also whn sam mentions abt nupur)nahi samrat'..aaj di humare sath nahi magar wo humare dil mai to hai'aur unhe bhi acha nahi lagega ki hum ek dusre se dur rahe'.aur pls samrat kabhi bhi tum apne aap ko iska zimmeddae mat samazana'..pls.

S: ok chashmish'..i m happy now'after ages I got to see my chashmish'whom I loved so much.

And with tht he hugs gunjan and she also responds.

After some time

sajan r sitting on terrace with their hand in hand'.gunjan watches the locket and ring in sams hand.

G: samrat tumne aaj tak uss locket aur ring ko sambhal ke rakha hai.

S: ha chashmish..tum nahi thi to yahi tha mere paas tumhe yaad karne ke lia'.hamesha socha ki kabhi to tum wapis aaogi'aur muzhe maaf karogi'to tumhe ye wapis de dunga.

G: to der kyu kar rahe ho??????

Sam takes the locket and gunjan wears it and thn sam falls on his knees

and ask gunjan

S: can u marry me chashmish?????

G: (with tears in her eyes) yes.

And sam inserts the engagememnt ring in her fingers'.both again hug each other'.thy r very happy.

Sam looks at the tiffin box in gunjans hand.

S: chashmish'.tumne mere lia tiffin laya hai?????

G: are ha..mai to bhul gayi'maine tumhare lia subah uth keg ajar ka halwa banaya tha'magar tumhari inn shetaniyo ki vajah se mai ye dena bhul hi gayi.

S: kya??????? Gajar ka halwa?????

S: chashmish tum janati ho'maine tumhare hath ka halwa kitna misss kiya tha'pichle 3 saal se maine gajar ka halwa nahi khaya'abhi ke abhi do'and he snatches the tiffin box from her.

Gunjan is smiling seeing kiddish behaivior of sam'..how she loves this fun loving samrat'.her samrat'who loves to make others happy'eventhough he made a big mistakes'but he endured a lot of punishment for it and he deserved to be given a chance to start life again.

Samrat eating the halwa and gunjan is watching him'whn he takes some halwa and tells her to eat it.

G: nahi samrat tum khao'ye maine tumhare lia khaya hai'maine ate waqt kha ke aai thi.

S: zhoot mat bolo chashmish'..mai janata hu..tumne kuch khaya nahi hai'tumhara chehara dekh ke hi mai samaz gaya ki tumhe bhi bohot bhuk lagi hai'ab mai kuch nahi sunuga'tum chalo'khao'

And sam feeds her'gunjan also takes some halwa and feeds samrat'and this way thy enjoyed their meet after long time'..after long time two soul who r both hurt'.r now together'and feeling very happy.


i hope all like it....if not thn i m really very sorry for disturbing all of u...and wasting ur times.

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Posted: 15 years ago
hey awesome superb fab os dear...i luv reading all ur ffs...n dis one really touched me....i was in tears reading sajans pain...i really wish somthing lyk dis happens in d serial also....
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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: SM_317

hey awesome superb fab os dear...i luv reading all ur ffs...n dis one really touched me....i was in tears reading sajans pain...i really wish somthing lyk dis happens in d serial also....

thanks dear for reading my os....but can i kno ur name????
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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: Anu_sajan4ever

wow wow so long update so awesome n it was so so not boring it was speechless update lol seriosly m like speechless after reading dis update damn man so so emotional n den so sweet ending man all da dialogue said by Sam mom was so so sad how much pain Sammy went through in last 3 yrs omg da way u wrote I could feel all his pains man wow hats off to u avi u did a fantastic job in dis update man n omg omg nups dialogue awww n den Mayu he is so understanding man n Sammy how can someone love someone dat much man kaash it happens in real life also anyway hey did u pm dis update to cvs u should man hopeee all dis happen n hopeee sajan will be together again anyways superb job yaar u r jst too good in dialogues n all u should be a writer seriosly anyways loveeeeeee it to core yaar

love u so much for awesome reply yaar.
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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: lucario

thanks dear for reading my os....but can i kno ur name????

hey my name is shreya
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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: SM_317

hey my name is shreya

shreya...thanks for reading my OS...hope u get many FFs to read on sajan..:)
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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: lucario

shreya...thanks for reading my OS...hope u get many FFs to read on sajan..:)

yaa thr r gr88 sajan ff writrs in d forum...n u laso keep writing ff n os...u r truly n amzing writer.......

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