Sajan and Mayur ff(Pyaar Ki Rahe), updt pg95 - Page 48

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Thanks a lot guys for all your sweet comments, I'm extremely sorry I couldn't reply to each one of you this time cause I was a little busy but trust me I read all your comments and I deeply thank you for the constant encouragement, I also apolagize for the late update, the reason being the same I was a little busy!

Part 12

The five days that they had left prior to the engagement was completely spent in the arragements and decoration and as you all are aware organizing an engagement and marriage is not really an easy task, so every minute detail had to be taken care of to leave the guests awestruck!

On the day of engagement

(morning)

Bui: Gunjan woh phool ki taili kahaan hai, maine tujhe puja ke ghar ke paas rakhne ko kaha tha na?

Gunjan(from the kitchen): Bui maine wahi rakha tha kal raat ko!

Bui: Haan teek hai, mil gaya! NUPUR!

Nupur(comes running from the hall): Arre beta mera chasma kahaan hai, jaldi dondke lao, mujhe phool ka mala banana hai!

Nupur(laughs): Bui aapke haath mein hai!

Bui: Arre haan! Shaadi ke gharoo mein na bahut tension hota hai! Tumhari, Chinki aur Gunjan ki shaadi se pehle bhi mera yahi haal tha!

Nupur: Arre jab hum sab hai toh aap chinta kyun kar rahe hai! Hum sab kaam karlaigay!

Bui: Arre Chinki, jaldi aa.........(Nupur chuckles and resumes her work)

Chinki: Ji Bui!

Bui: Wahan dekho sidiyoon ke rail main jo phool humne kal raat lapeta wo uss conay main thoda nikal raha hai.....

Chinki: Kahan Bui......

Bui: Arre wahan, tum sab bhi na itne chote umar main bhi nahi dekh sakte isliye main kehthi hoon rooz karela ka juice pio.....Nupur laughs

Bui: Tu kyun has rahi hai, arre wahan Chinki!

Chinki: Bui woh toh itna sa hi nikhla hai kaun dekheyga?

Bui: Aisa math kaho, mehmaan sab dekhaigay, jaisa mujhe dikha kisse aur ko bhi dikhega, aur unhe sirf ek mauka chahiye kamiyaan dodne ka!

Nupur: Haan Chinki Bui teek keh rahi hai! Humare sare guests detectives hai joh magnifying glass lekay ayaingay!

Chinki and Nupur laugh as a result of which Bui walks away angryly and sets the deco right herself..........

Dia(comes out of her room): Guys aap main se kisse ne meri pink earing dekhi, mujhe palor jaana hai aur mujhe mera pink earing nahi mil raha

Nupur: Dia hum sab bahut busy hai kudh doondlo na, please!

Dia: Par maine pura kamra chan mara nahi mila!

Chinki: Kuch aur pehanlo na Dia!

Dia: Nahi woh meri fav pink earing hai!

Nupur: By God Dia kya faraq padtha hai, waise bhi tum palor hi ja rahi ho na!

Bui: Palor?! Palor jaane ki kya zaroorat hai Dia? Main abhi chandan haldi doodh aur gulab pani ka ek paste banati hoon chehra kil jayega bilkul chaand ki tarah dikhogi tum!

Dia: Bui mujhe chaand ki tarah nahi insaan ki tarah dikhna hai isliye main palor ja rahi hoon! Aap topic change math kijiye mera pink earing kahaan hai?

Bui: Aaj kal ki ladkiyaan bhi na bado ki baat bilkul nahi sunthe! Ab mera chehra dekho kitna kil raha hai(:D) Sab woh natural paste ka asar hai! Itne budape main bhi mere chehre par woh kya kethe hai aap log rinky nahi hai!

Dia: Rinky nahi, wrinkles! Mera pink earing!

Bui: Gunjan se poocho usne kal tumhara kamra saaf kiya tha.......

Dia: Ufff tho phir aapne pehle kyun nahi kaha.....(she walks towards the kitchen)

Bui: Dia woh paste main aur bhi khubhiyaan hain, jaise......

Dia: Please Bui later......

Bui: Iss ghar main koi bhi mera baat nahi sunta, kaliyug!

Dia: Gunjan dear!

Gunjan: Oh hey Dia, kuch chahiye tumhe?

Dia: Haan woh mera pink earing nahi mil raha!

Gunjan: Tumne woh earing apne pillow kay neeche rakha tha tho maine usse tumhare drawer main jo ek chota sa dibba hai, ussme rakha!

Dia: Thanks doll! Main palor ja rahi hoon! Raaste main kuch lao?

Gunjan: Nahi nahi kuch nahi, you go ahead, bye!

Dia: Bye!

Nupur comes into the kitchen.........

Gunjan: Arre di kya hua.....

Nupur: Kuch nahi bas pani peenay aye thi! Waise tu kya kar rahi hai?

Gunjan: Badam kheer!

Nupur: Badam kheer?!

Gunjan: Haan Bui chahte hai ki yeh mehmaan ka welcome drink ho!

Nupur: Par humne toh catering se sab mangvaya hai na!

Gunjan: Haan di par Bui chahte hai ke mehmaan ka svagat hum ghar ke banaye huye kheer se kare........

Nupur: Hmmmmm......yeh bui bhi na! Oh god mujhe Chinki ke saath bazar se kuch lana tha, main chalthi hoon!

Mayank: Nupur!

Bui: Nupuuuuuuuuur!

Chinki: Nupur kahaan ho tum!

Nupur: By God ab main kahaan jao main mar jaogi Gunjan!(Gunjan smiles)

Samrat: Gunjaaaaaan!

DD: Gunjan beta yahaan aao!

Gunjan: Main kahaan jao? Chachaji ke paas!

Nupur: Aur main? God I think Bui!(she runs towards Bui)

Nupur: Kya hai Bui?

Bui: Itne dair laga di! Jab hum chote thay tho bado ki ek avaz main daude chalay aathe thay.....aur aaj ki pede

Nupur: Please Bui Phir se shuru math kijiye, kaam kya hai?

Bui: Ab dekho bado ke baat pura bhi nahi karnay day rahay ho!

Mayank: NUPUR!

Nupur: Kaam kya hai Bui?

Bui: Tumhare pati bula rahay hai aur tum yahi ho, aaj ke peedi!

Nupur: Aap kaam jaldi batayiye main jaathi hoon!

Bui: Tum pehle damaad ke paas jao main Gunjan se keh dethi hoon!(Nupur runs towards their room!)

Nupur: Kya hai Mayank?

Mayank: Itne dair kyun laga di! Main kabse avaz laga raha hoon!

Nupur: Shaadi ke ghar main bahut kaam hota hai!

Mayank: Toh main kaam ke baad aata hoon?

Nupur: Mayank please ab tum shuru math hona, mujhe bahar jaana hai, jaldi batao kya hai?

Mayank: Kuch nahi, main kudh kar loonga, tum jao!

Nupur: Thank you.......(walks away)

Mayank: Chali gayi?!

Nupur then responds to the frantic calls of Chinki

Chinki: Nupur kahaan thi tum humme bazaar jaana tha!

Nupur: God agar ek hi time mein mujhe hazaar log bulayaigay toh main kahaan jaongi!

Chinki(smiles): Teek hai Nupur, ab chalain warna aur bhi late ho jayaingay!

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Gunjan: Aap aagaye! Saara samaan mil gaya?

DD: Haan Gunjan, maine yeh kehne kay liye bulaya ki kya tum mere liye ek cup chay bana sakthi ho?

Gunjan: Haan zaroor abhi aye!

Bui: Gunjaaaaan!

Gunjan: Haan Bui!

Bui: Woh caterer ko phone karke aadha ghanta jaldi aane kayliye bol dena aur haan phone abhi karo!

Gunjan: Haan teek hai!

Gunjan (moves towards the kitchen): Main Nupur se phone karne kay liye keh dathi hoon, Oh no woh toh Chinki kay saath bahar jaane wali thi na, teek hai main pehle phone karthi hoon phir chai banathi hoon!

By now Samrat was very restless as Gunjan hadn't attended to his call.........

Samrat: Chashmish!

Gunjan: Oh haan Samrat ne bhi mujhe bulaya tha!

Gunjan(runs upstairs): Haan Samrat!

Samrat: Kahaan thi tum, itne dair se bula raha tha!

Gunjan: Sorry woh kaam bahut tha, mera ek kaam karogay, Caterer ko phone karke aadha ghanta jaldi aane ko boldo, please mujhe bahut kaam hai!

Samrat: Par Gunjan, main tho......(Gunjan cuts him)

Gunjan: Thanks Samrat!(she runs downstairs)

Just when she finishes preparing tea for Dia's dad and serves it to him the door bell rings!

Gunjan(runs towards the door): Maaji aap?! Arre ander aayiye! Kaise hai aap?

Mayank's mom: Main teek hoon beta! Tum kaise hai ho?

Gunjan(takes her bag): Main teek hoon! Apne phone kyun nahi kiya hum main se koi airport aa jatha!

MM: Nahi beta! Maine socha aap sab busy hogay aur waise bhi main aap sab ko surprise dena chahthi thi! Mayank Nupur Samrat Dia sab ghar pe hai?

Gunjan: Dia palor gayi hai, Nupur Chinki ke saath bazar gayi hai, Mayank aur Samrat ghar pe hai!

Mayank's mom is then greeted by Bui and then Dia's dad

Gunjan: Aap jaake fresh ho jayiay main chai banake lathi hoon.....

Mayank(coming down the stairs): Maa aap?!(runs and hugs her) Aapne phone kyun nahi kiya?

MM: Surprise dena chahthi thi!

Mayank: Gunjan kahaan hai?

MM: Chai bananey gayi hai!

Mayank: I think usse glucose ki zaroorat hai, pura din daud rahi hai, waise Samrat usse dond raha hai.......(Samrat comes down the stairs all grumpy)

Samrat: Arre Maaji aap and comes and seeks her blessings!

MM: Jeethe raho! Kaise ho?

Samrat: Ya good!

Gunjan comes out with a cup of tea and serves it to MM and turns towards Samrat who looks away from her, MM notices this!

Bui: Woh Dia kahaan hai, ab tak nahi aayi, usse phone laga!

Gunjan: Haan Bui!

MM: Arre Mayank tu phone laga! Aur Gunjan tu mera chai Mayank ke kamray main la dena main fresh hokay pe loongi. Samrat tu mera samaan kamre tak laogay please!(saying so she winks at Mayank)

Mayank goes to make the call, DD goes for a nap while Bui goes to check if they have forgotten any details!

MM moves to Mayu's room followed by Samrat and Gunjan! MM moves into the washroom......Gunjan keeps the tea cup and moves outside when Samrat grabs her hand!

Samrat: Chasmish main bahut naraaz hoon!

Gunjan: Kya hua Samrat?

Samrat: Purre paanch din hogaye aur tumne mujhse teek se baat bhi nahi ki aur time bhi spend nahi kiya, raat ko tum dair se sothi ho aur subah jab main ot tha hoon toh tum kamre se gayab!

Gunjan: Samrat, Dia ka engagement hai aaj aur aise main kitna kaam hota hai!

Samrat: Toh engagement hi toh hai na, shaadi nahi.......

Gunjan: Please Samrat, mujhe kaam bahut hai, jaane do mujhe.......

Samrat leaves her hand and she goes..............

Nupur and Chinki come from the grocery when Gunjan tells her that Mayank's mom has arrived, Nupur drops the bags and runs to Mayank's mom and like we all know the chemistry between Nupur and Mayank's mom is excellent so seeing eachother after really long led to the ignition of their talks, Mayank just entered the room to see his beloved wife and dear mother chatting away to glory and he thinks to himself subah mere liye time nahi tha aur ab Maa se aise baat kar rahi hai...............

That's it for today guys! Will update the engagement part tomorrow lest the update will become very long:) Waiting for all your comments!

Love

Swetha

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Posted: 15 years ago
awesome update....
waiting for tomorrow..

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hey very nice update...loved it😉
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awesome update ......you very well described the situations in the "Saadi Ka Ghar".....bechaare gunur itne busy ....aur sayank gunur se naraaz.....hope everything turns out well....thanks for the pm and please update soon 😊
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awesomeee updt dear
loved it
awww poor sayank😔
pllzzz do cont soon

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