Sajan and Mayur ff(Pyaar Ki Rahe), updt pg95 - Page 46

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Posted: 15 years ago
it was very nice Swetha..
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Originally posted by: mayur_my_jaan

Swetha
bahut maza aaya padh kar
awesum part dear
plz add me to ur pm list

Thanks a lot for reading my ff😃 I'm glad you liked it will surely pm you when I update my next part!
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Originally posted by: jes_jade

it was very nice Swetha..
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Thanks for the pm

Thanks a lot Jes😃
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Guys I was encountering some problems with the pm after the completion of part 10, so I'm not sure if my pm was delivered to all of you, if not please see the continuation of my part 10 on pg 59!

Part 11

The illumination of the Bhushan mansion marking the beginning of a new dawn.........

Gunjan(yawns and stretches her arms): Haaaaaaaaaaaaa..........(she turns to find that Samrat is missing!)

Gunjan: Samrat!

Samrat(opens the room door, looks like he is accompained by someone, warm, whose kiss never fails to refresh, its none other than a cup of tea): Morning Chashmish, ot gaye?

Gunjan: Haan, par tum chai?

Samrat(places the tray on the side table): Aapke liye Madam! Nasha utargaya apka ya main nasha utarne mein aapki madat karoon'smiles'

Gunjan: Samrat, please.......aa mera sar, bahut dukh raha hai

Samrat: Of course jaan, paanch peg bahut hota hai, especially un logo kayliye jinhone sharaab ko chuya tak nahi........

Gunjan: Paanch peg?!

Samrat: Yes sweetheart, lekin kal raat jo tumne aur Nupur ne humara entertainment kiya na, life mein aisa kabhi kisse ne nahi kiya..........

Gunjan: Kya?! Bahut pareshaan kiya maine?

Samrat: Haan, par tum jo bhi karthi ho na bahut januable lagtha hai, bilkul tumhari tarah'touches her nose with his finger'

Gunjan: Jo bhi?!

Samrat(smiles naughtyly): Haan jo bhi!

Gunjan(comes closer to Samrat): Acha?

Samrat: Hmmmmm.....(brings his face forward) Gunjan playfully slaps him......

Gunjan: Yeh kaise laga? (saying so she runs to the washroom!)

Samrat: Tum bahar aaogina......tab dekhta hoon kaise bachthi ho mujhse.........

- - -

Nupur has been woken not by someone but by the strong aroma of something..............

Nupur: Hmmmmmm coffee

Mayank: Sirf coffee nahi.......

Nupur: World ki best coffee!

Mayank: Haan par don't worry issme zyada sugar nahi hai! Yaad hai Nupur jab main pehle baar tumhare ghar aaya, hum play ki practice kar rahe thay aur maine hum dono kay liye coffee banaya......

Nupur'smiles': Haan, jisme sugar toda zyada ta!

Mayank: Toda?! Bahut zyada, par tumne koi shikayat nahi ki kyunki tum mujhe hurt nahi karna chahti ti, tum tab kitne sweet thi......

Nupur: Tab?! Tab ka kya matlab hai?

Mayank: Tab ka matlab then hai Nupur!

Nupur: Mujhe tumse koi baat nahi karni, aaaa aaaaa.......

Mayank: Kya hua?

Nupur: Tumhe kya farak padta hai, aaaaa mera sar

Mayank: Haan of course tumhara sar dukhega hi na, kal raat by god Nupur, kitna pia tumne.........

Nupur: Haan, tumhari hi galthi hai, tum hi laye thay na coke ki jagah sharab!

Mayank: Main kal ki wajah se hi bol raha hoon ki tum ab sweet nahi ho!

Nupur: Acha! Toh galthi tum karo aur sweet main nahi hoon, very nice Mayank Sharma.......(saying so she angryly walks to the window)

Mayank(goes behind Nupur and whispers in her ear): Haan of course! Kal ke baad mera opinion tumhare bare mein change hogaya hai, tum sweet nahi hot n spicy ho!(Nupur blushes)

Mayank: Dekho dekho tumhara gaal bhi lal mirch ki tarah lal lal ho raha hai.......(Nupur smiles and goes into the washroom)

- - -

Dia(pacing up and down in her room): God, its 9:00 aur abhi tak Benji nahi aaya, apne aap ko samajta kya hai? Kal toh bada romantic ban raha tha 'Rose for a Rose'(mimics Benji's voice) Aaj kya hua? Aane do usko uski khair nahi! (saying so she stomped to the hall, just then Sajan and Mayur come out of their room)

Dia: Hey, morning guys, OMG Gunjan and Nupur tum dono toh ek hi sari pehan rahi ho, guys you look very pretty in sari!

Mayank: Haan Dia, Nupur toh har kapday main bahut sundar dikti hai!

Nupur: Bada pyar aa raha hai mujhpar!

Samrat: Aur Gunjan toh bina ka......Gunjan cuts him

Gunjan: Chalo kapeday I mean breakfast kathe hai 'all giggle'

Mayank: Ek min ek min, kya keh rahe thay tum Samrat?

Samrat: Woh main yeh keh raha tha ki.....

Gunjan: Ki main bina kajal ke ache nahi lagthi!

Dia: Acha?! 'laughs'

Gunjan: Please guys chalo mujhe bahut bhook lag rahi hai........

They all move to the table......

Nupur: Waise Mr Majanu kaha hai?

Dia: Naam math lo uska! Stupid, dekho ab tak nahi aaya.....

Gunjan: Dia shayad woh kal raat dair aane ki wajah se tired hoga so he must be sleeping!

Samrat: Benji kyun tired hoga ussne kya kiya, kal raat ko toh tumne aur Nupur ne hi pee rakhi thi!

Mayank: Tumme pata hai Dia tumhare aur Benji ke jaane ke baad Gunjan aur Nupur sadak pe gaana ga rahi thi 'laughs'

Dia: Kya?! Sachi?!

Samrat: Haan! Aur Gunjan toh shirt bhi up karna chahti thi!

Gunjan(choked) 'coughs'

Dia: Your ok?

Mayank: No no no she is not ok, she is Gunjan aur Samrat kay liye Chashmish 'Samrat and Mayank hi5 eachother'

Nupur: Yeh bilkul funny nahi tha! It was stupid!

Mayank: Acha?! Kal raat toh tumhe yeh bahut smart laga jab Gunjan ne yeh kaha!

Nupur: Shutup Mayank!

Mayank: Shut up nahi, Shirt up 'Samrat and Mayank burst out into fits of laughter'

Dia: Guys guys bas! Aap logo ko kal raat kay adventure ko morning ka comedy show nahi banana hai!

Nupur: Exactly, hum kal raat ki baat nahi karaingay!

Gunjan: Haan! Hey Dia waise aaj Bui Chinki ke saath aane wali thi na?

Dia: Haan, aaj dopaihar ko........

Gunjan: Achi, baat hai, humme sagai ki tayariyaan shuru karni hai, sirf paanch din baaki hai.........

Samrat: Yes, in 5 days tumhara aur Benji ka rista official ho jayega!

'Ting Tong'(door bell rings)

Dia(immediatly gets up from the chair): Benji hoga, idiot! Uske kabar leti hoon main!

Mayank: Benji toh gaya..........(Samrat and Gunur laugh)

Dia(opens the door but instead of turning towards the door she shows her back): Ab aa rahe ho, jahaan se aaye ho wahi chalay jao, mujhe tumse koi baat nahi karni aur haan tumhe breakfast bhi nahi milega.........

Dia's dad: Acha? Itne dino baad aa raha hoon socha ki pyari si japi mileygi par yahaan toh mujhe wapis jaane ko kaha ja raha hai!

Dia: Dad?!(hugs him)

DD: Haan, socha tumhe surprise doon, waise tum kisse daant rahi thi?

Dia: Woh...forget it! Aap ander chaliye aur humare saath breakfast kaiye!

DD: Gunjan, Samrat, Mayank aur Nupur aagaye?

Dia: Haan dad!

Dia's dad joins the gang for breakfast.......

Gunjan: Arre chachaji aap? Kaise hai aap......(goes to seek his blessing along with Nupur)

DD: I'm doing great aur tum dono?

Gunur: Ache hai!

Sayank greet Dia's dad: Namaste chachaji!

DD: Namaste beta kaise ho tum dono?

Sayank: We are good!

DD: Waise aaj subah mere Shashiji se baat hui, woh teek sagai kay din aa rahe hai!

Nupur: Par Bauji ne kaha ki woh sagai ke 2 din pehle aayaigay

DD: Haan, par unhe kuch kaam aagaya! Waise Uday ka phone aaya? Usne mujhse kaha ki woh koi naya client se milne ja raha hai?

Dia: Naya Client?! Dodo ne aapse yeh kaha?

DD: Haan kyun kya hua?

Dia'smiles': Nahi kuch nahi, woh uska phone nahi aaya!

DD: Ok guys, aap sab kao main fresh hoke aata hoon!

Dia: God I can't believe it Dodo ne dad se jhot bola!

Gunjan: Haan, par Uday bhaiya ko toh jhot bolna nahi aata tha!

Mayank: Nahi Gunjan, jab ladki ki baat aathi hai toh sab jot bolna jaanthay hai...........

After having successfully broken their fast Gunur decide to begin with engagement preparation and Sayank agree to contribute whatever little help they can offer while Dia agrees to enjoy the royal treatment that would be given to her...........

Seeing Sayank and Gunur busy with their deeds Dia decided to watch TV in her room.........

Dia: Shit, TV mein bhi kuch nahi hai, aur bahar bhi koi mujhe kaam nahi karne de raha!(the flower pot next to her window breaks!)

Dia: Kaun hai wahan?

Cat: Meow meow

Dia: Billi?! Yeh Billi ki awaz mere kamray se?(she walks up to the window sill to find a fluffy whit cat with a tag around its neck)

The tag read: A perfect cat for a perfect women! Waise mujh jaise perfect cat doondna aasan nahi hai, aur mujhe doondne kayliye kisse ne bahut mehnet ki so Dia you have to forgive the buyer of this cat waise uska naam Benji hai aur mera.....well I leave that for you to decide!!!

Dia(smiles): Tumhara naam hai.........Pussy!(the cat meowed in agreement to its name) Tum bahut hi cute ho aur Benji se kehna ki maine usse maf kar dia!

Benji(pops his head from the window): Sach?!

Dia(taken aback): Tum?! Yahaan aise?! Darwaaze se kyun nahi aaye.......

Benji: Isske do reasons hai pehle window is more romantic and you like romance aur doosra, iss ghar ka damaad banne se pehle kiddaki se ghar aana shayad iss ghar ka riwaz hai toh maine socha ki Samrat ki shuru ki gayi iss riwaz ko, jisse Mayank ne bhi follow kiya, main bhi karoon.......

Dia 'smiles'

Benji: Waise agar tumhara yeh smile karna katam hogaya toh will you pull me in, mujhe bahut bhook lag rahi hai!

Dia: Ya, sorry!(Benji smiles)

After having satisfied his stomach, Benji decides it was time to make Dia happy!

Benji: Guys, tum log itne busy ho, bichari Dia toh bore ho jayegi main usse drive pe layjatha hoon!

Gang: Ohhhhhhhh..........

Benji: Please guys!

Dia: Toh phir Pussy ka kya hoga?

Sayank and Gunur: Pussy?!

Dia: Haan, mere naya cat joh Benji ne mujhe aaj gift kiya!

Nupur: Acha?!(she stops what she is doing): Waise hum kaam mein itne busy thay poochna bhool gaye, Benji tu aaya kaise? I mean jaha tak main janthi hoon mujhe toh ganti sunayi nahi di!

Benji: Woh mein sidi.....

Samrat: Sidi?! Wahi joh main Chashmish se milney kayliye use kartha tha? God mera sidi abhi tak istamal ho raha hai....wah wah wah!

Benji: Haan! You know uss sidi ko naam dena chahiye....I know 'Sam'

Mayank: Haan Haan toh kal se tum kehna main 'Sam' par chada!

Nupur: Chi Mayank kitna cheap ho tum........

Mayank: Tumse seeka hai........

Nupur: Bakwas band karo

Dia: Guys guys cut it out main Benji kay saath ja rahi hoon Pussy ka dyan rakhna!

Gunjan: Teek hai Dia, tum jao........

Just after Benia left, Dia's dad came out of his room and enquired about Dia and Gunjan informs him that Dia went for a drive with Benji..........

Gunjan: Chachaji main khana banati hoon, Bui aur Chinki ek ghante main aathay hogay!

Nupur: Main bhi chalti hoon madat karne!

DD: In that case the boys will give me company!

Sayank: Bilkul.........

Gunur are busy cooking when Sayank come into the kitchen and hold them from behind, but wait what do we see here Samrat holding Nupur and Mayank holding Gunjan?!

Gunjan(turns): Mayank!

Mayank: Gunjan?!

Samrat: Nupur tum?!

Nupur: Samrat?!

Maynak: By god tum dono ek saree math pehna karo yaar, peechay se patha hi nahi chalata!(saying so Mayank moves towards Nupur and Samrat towards Gunjan!)

Nupur(laughs): Ab tum dono yahaan kya kar rahe ho, humme kaam karne do!

Samrat(nuzzles Gunjan's neck): Toh humne kab rokha tum apna kaam karo hum apna karthay hai, kyun Mayank?

Mayank: Bilkul(hugs Nupur)

Gunjan: Please Samrat band karo, main kaam kaise karoongi? Tum chachaji ko company de rahe te na?

Samrat: Agar main itna dashing ho ki tum kaam pe nahi mujh pe concentrate kar rahi ho toh it is not my fault aur Chachaji phone mein busy hain!

Mayank(turns Nupur to face him): Nupur mujhe ek kiss dona?

Nupur: Pagal hogaye ho kya?! Samrat aur Gunjan yehi hain......

Mayank: Woh toh apne hai, Guys(Sajan turn) do you have a problem if Nupur kisses me?

Samrat: Nahi hum kaun hotay hai pati aur patni kay beech main aane waley kyun Gunjan, aur waise bhi mera point of focus toh Chashmish hai.......(Gunjan smiles)

Busy with their lovy dovy talks Sajan and Mayur don't hear the door bell...........Dia's dad opens the door to welcome our very own Bui and Chinki........

DD: Namste Namste! Kaise ho tum aur Chinki?

Bui: Hum teek hai aur aap?

DD: Main bilkul teek hoon! Waise Chinki tumhara pati aur bache kahan hai?

Chinki: Bache actually wahi Mowrena main hai, unka koi bahut hi important exam tha aur mere pati bhi unhi ke saath hai, woh log sagai main pahaunch jayegay........Waise bakhi sab kahaan hai

DD: Benji aur Dia kahi drive pe gaye hai aur Samrat Gunjan Mayank Nupur kitchen main hai shayad! Ok aap log jaake fresh hojayi main Gunjan aur Nupur ko aapke samaan ander rakhne bhol doonga!

Bui: Arre aap toh phone mein teh na aap baat kijiye main kitchen main jakke unse miloongi!

Bui and Chinki move to the kitchen to find Sajan and Mayur romancing!

Bui: Arre aree doodh ko dekho?

Gunjan: Oh oh and before it pours out she manages to put the stove off and blows the milk

Nupur: Bui aap, Chinki, kab aaye aap dono?

Chinki: Jab aap charo ahem ahem.......

Gunjan: Nahi hum dono kaam......

Bui: Acha toh tum dono aise kaam karthay ho?

Gunjan: Nahi woh.....(Gunjan and Nupur followed by Samrat and Mayank seek Bui's blessings and greet Chinki)

Gunjan: Aap dono chaliye main aapka samaan kamre main shift kardethi hoon, waise Uday bhaiya ghar pe nahi hai toh aap dono unke kamre main reh sakthay hai! Aap dono jaake fresh hojaiye main aapka samaan ander rakh deti hoon.......

Nupur: Main chai banake laathi hoon..............

Chinki: Aur uske baad hum sab milkay tayariyaan karaingay, bahut maza aayega!

Sayank: Bilkul:)

That's it for today guys, I know this part was boring and I apolagize for boring you guys! But you guys do comment, me waiting for all your precious views.

Love

Swetha

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Posted: 15 years ago
res!

editied:
awesome!
a long update too
gr8 part
no, it was not boring yaar
liked it
thnx for the pm
Edited by Januable_Sajan - 15 years ago
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amazing part loved it plz plz plz cont soon and thx alot for the pm
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Posted: 15 years ago
OMG...
Very romantic part jii
loved it...
"Gunjan bina hi...."Aheeemmm Aheemm☺️😳😆
Killer Lineeeee.....
cont soon...

*Sana*
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Posted: 15 years ago
it was toooo good dear
amazing
loved it
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Posted: 15 years ago
Nice update
Liked wen Sayank hugged wrong persons
Gunur n Sayank were fab
Loved it
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very nice part yar........
also want more romentic scenes..........

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