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Divya

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Posted: 15 years ago

#61

kanks!! Just caught up with the first 2 parts :) totally loving it :)

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403848

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Posted: 15 years ago

#62

Originally posted by: deepikavasudeva
that was awesome!

now don't kill me.... but it was short 😉

yr write longer ones, considering the time bound we get ur updates after!!

love
deepika

When I was writing it down last night, I was almost done and then current got cut. My UPS doesn't work and the whole file got corrupted. Likha toh lamba hi tha but I had to write it down allover again and therefore, ended up writing something shorter than what I wrote originally. I'd make a Lil longer the next time. 😛

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Posted: 15 years ago

#63

Originally posted by: arunabehere
Hi Kanky,

Very beautiful update

Arjun's concern for a new student and apology for his mistake was too nice

andRati was not angry at all

I liked Shaila ,she is not aware with his nature so protectingRati 👏👏👏

Arhun feels shaila as his sister ,nice bro 😛

that means is is very emotional for his sis

in front of teacher they were more like Best friends

Just loved it

Rati Enjoyed the punishment

I loved this update to the core but can i pleaserequest you something

Can you please increase the font size next time [I am chashmish ,i can copy and paste the content in the word but then wo feel nahi aata 😭]

No mean to hurt you dear ,just a request

Oh yeah, sure sure Chashmish! 😆 I'd increase the font size. Sorry! 😃

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Varsha

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Posted: 15 years ago

#64

Hey... hi kanky !!

firstly..... congratulations to u on your new FF dear.....😊

I loved the concept dear.... its amazing ....very new !! 😉😉

woww.... Arjun n Rati as school students....lovely...😳😳

Its the first time I'm reading an ArTi FF..... n i just loved it jaan !!

And... its also the first FF of yours that I'm reading..... so I must say... u a fantabulous writer dear....👍🏼..... i'm highly impressed by your writing style....😉

the way you have potrayed your characters...... express their feelings.....emotions..... is outstanding !! 👏👏

you have described each n every scene very beautifully.....😛

omgg.... Arjun is so sweet... caring.... cute... lovable....n adorable.... 😳😳 ... really love him !!

He agreed to help the new comer, Rati.... loved his talks !!

Aww... by mistake he hurted Rati........ but he's sweet enough to have waited for her outside the washroom for so long.... n apologised her.... he's too sweet !!

But... aww... shaila was so rude to him...😭😭..... hope she understands that Arjun is a good ...caring guy... soon !!

Woww........ ArTi became such good friends.... that too on Rati's first day only ....mm... great..😉

Arjun have already started feeling something for Rati..... mm... thats good... he saw that glow... that spark in her eyes... which he never saw in any other girl.... wow.... so romantic...so cute yaar !!

I have just fallen in love with your FF dear.. 😍..😍..... its just marvellous !!

cont soon.... n dont forget to pm me....

love u...
varsha

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Mariyam Ghaffar

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Posted: 15 years ago

#65

heyyy..!!!
Amazing update...
loved itt....
continue it s0000n.....

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-sam-

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Posted: 15 years ago

#66

Hey Kanky
this is amazing
I loved it
Arjun is so Arjunish......
I love him...
Its so good....
Rati is a sweetheart....

Please continue pride and prejudice soonnnnnn

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zarfishanzahid

@zarfishanzahid

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Posted: 15 years ago

#67

really nice part plz cont soon and thx alot for the pm

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seema mittal

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Posted: 15 years ago

#68

Heyyyy kanky
Really amazing update yaar
Hehe...arjun is already falling for her
Do continue soon
N thanx for pm

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Saba Siddique

@Sabaah..

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Posted: 15 years ago

#69

awesum...will wait 4 d nxt updt:)
thnx 4 d pm..continue soon!!

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-Sindhu-

@-Sindhu-

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Posted: 15 years ago

#70

Hey Kanky!

"Enmeshed in love" nice title! 😊

Arjun stood near the washroom just for Rati that too for 30 mins!!😲 How chweeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeet! He apologized and Rati accepted his apology!

Shaila was very rude with him... but he didn't mind and she reminded him of his dead sister. Aww... poor lad. He misses his sister so much. I hope Shaila gets to know him better.

Wow!!! ArTi became such good friends that too on Rati's first day at there. Interesting!!!

The highlight was Arjun thinking of Rati. The way you described his feelings and expressions was mind blowing dear! And KUDOS to you for that!!

Love,
Sindhu

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