~'Enmeshed in Love'~ An ArTi FF (Ch6 - Pg38) 30/6 - Page 5

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Posted: 15 years ago
#41
okay kansh! Thatswhat i'd like to call you...

Btw i like your name very much, do temme what it means....

I m here suffering from bad insomnia at four in the night, morn i mean..

I thought of doing some noble deed...

So i thought of suggesting some titles for this ff...yeah thats the crzy me... At four in morn i think of titles for this untitled ff..hmph!

So here they go...

'More than a friend'

'i am yours.'

'i just wanna live'

'hearts collide'

'the time of your life'

So as you've already guessed these are not original..song titles you see...i cant make out much just frm the first chapter to suggest original *wink*

Those songs, btw are my babies. Love them...

Hope it helps..

Will come up with more if these don't....
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Posted: 15 years ago
#42
very nice start
plz cont soon
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Posted: 15 years ago
#43

Originally posted by: ak12

okay kansh! Thatswhat i'd like to call you...

Btw i like your name very much, do temme what it means....

I m here suffering from bad insomnia at four in the night, morn i mean..

I thought of doing some noble deed...

So i thought of suggesting some titles for this ff...yeah thats the crzy me... At four in morn i think of titles for this untitled ff..hmph!

So here they go...

'More than a friend'

'i am yours.'

'i just wanna live'

'hearts collide'

'the time of your life'

So as you've already guessed these are not original..song titles you see...i cant make out much just frm the first chapter to suggest original *wink*

Those songs, btw are my babies. Love them...

Hope it helps..

Will come up with more if these don't....



The meaning of Kankshita is desire! 😃

I guessed that. big time. šŸ˜† I have decided the title, though! šŸ˜‰ Thanks a million anyway, that's really sweet of you! 😳
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Posted: 15 years ago
#44
hey....

i m sorry i wasn't able to comment properly ...

i m so excited for the new RATI ff and the new ff written by YOU!!!

plz do update soona nd update pride and ..... soon too
plzzzzz

love

deepika
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Posted: 15 years ago
#45
superb dear!
continue soon
nd thnx for the pm 😊
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Posted: 15 years ago
#46
hey kanky..
fantastic...dear..
just read d new Arti ff..
i just luvd it 2 d bits...
thnx 4 d pm..
pls update soon..
luv ya...
-supriya

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Posted: 15 years ago
#47

Originally posted by: deepikavasudeva

hey....

i m sorry i wasn't able to comment properly ...

i m so excited for the new RATI ff and the new ff written by YOU!!!

plz do update soona nd update pride and ..... soon too
plzzzzz

love

deepika



Kay, I'd try and update Pride and Prejudice. 😊

Thanks!! I'd update this flick tonight!
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Posted: 15 years ago
#48
Hello people! I'm overwhelmed with the feedback. Thank you so very much. šŸ¤—

I have finally found the perfect title for my flick which is "Enmeshed in Love".
Dania (Dee.Mayur_Arti) suggested it. šŸ¤— I think it suits the story perfectly and thank you all for suggesting me some wonderful titles. 😳

My school starts after a fortnight and it's going to keep me busy until I'm not done with my exams in the end of July that is. Nevertheless, I'd update you guys with two back to back chapters every weekend. šŸ˜†

Here's the update! Happy reading! Don't forget to comment and/or hit the like tab. šŸ˜‰


Chapter Two -

Rati ran to the girl's washroom, all teary while Arjun followed her. "Hey, stop!" he said but she dint. He couldn't go inside the washroom so he waited for her to come out so that he could apologize. He stood there, waiting for her … 15 minutes passed. He preferred keeping quiet and waiting some more. Just then, a girl brushed past him. It was Shaila. She noticed him standing outside the girl's washroom. She went up to him and asked what the matter was. Shaila was a commerce student and therefore was in section C however, she knew Arjun considering, he was the head boy of the school.

"Why are you standing outside the girl's washroom, Arjun?" she interrogated.
"Oh hi, Shaila!" he greeted.

"Huh? Don't hi me and tell me what you are doing here. I never knew you waited for your girlfriends outside the washroom?"

"Eh, girlfriends?"

"Yeah, girlfriends. The girls you are around all the time. Be it class x, xi or xii … "

"Not my girlfriends honey, correction – my pastime." He joked.

"Whatever! You are waiting for another pastime here?"

"Na na, the new entrant, Rati. I think I hurt her."

Just then, Rati also came out of the washroom. She took almost half an hour and half the period. She had swollen eyes and yet a bewitching smile playing on her face. She was anxious though she dint show that. Without wasting even a second he said, "I'm really very sorry Rati. I have this forthright way of talking which hurts people, I'm sorry. Really." He said and smiled however, he felt bad. He shook his head.

"Arjun, you need be sorry! You did nothing! It's fine. Really, Sorry to have wasted your time." She replied and smiled back.

Shaila was standing right next to Rati and was observing the whole thing. She knew Arjun was a ladies' man, big time. The ultimate Casanova, however, there was still something missing in her knowledge about the stud. He knew his limits very well and respected women but Shaila being a person having dim view about anybody and everybody never noticed that.

"You better stay away from my best friend, head boy. Mind you!" she said and pulled Rati with her.

He stood there, still wondering why Shaila was always so rude to him. She was one girl he regarded as his own sister, he could see his late sister in her but she was just so rude to her all the time. This time, he was hurt. Rati, who turned back and was looking at the guy sensed it and told Shaila she should apologize.

"You don't know him, Rats. I do! He's a big time libertine. Don't let him cross your path ever. He already has many friends, he doesn't need you and don't you turn back again." Shaila commanded.

Rati kept quiet. She wasn't that bad a judge of nature. Arjun was really not of that kind. Instead, he was of the good guy kind. She knew what Shaila was like who had a negative opinion about everybody under the sun. Nevertheless, she talked no more of the subject and went to her class while Shaila went to hers.

Rati was joined by Arjun while climbing down the stairs. "Hitler's gone na?" he asked, or rather mumbled. šŸ˜†

"You mean Shaila?" Rati laughed.

"Yeah, Shaila. Why is she always rude to me, I don't understand. Anyway, how do you know her?"

"We are the best of friends since childhood. Then, we were about five years old or something!" She estimated.

"That means you've been suffering since 12 years?" he joked.

They both giggled and had now reached the class. "May we come in, Sir?" they requested to the teacher, together.

"Yes, of course. Please come in. You have all the time in the world, spend as much time as possible in bunking and then if any time left, come to the class." He said ferociously.

"We're really sorry, Sir. I had been crying all this while and he was waiting for me outside the washroom since past 30 minutes. The fault is mine." Rati protested before the teacher could say anything to Arjun.

"New student, eh? First day, you behave like this, bunk the class; hide our always on time Mr. Arjun Khanna's fault. I wonder what are you going to do the whole year." He screamed at the top of his voice.

"You cannot scream like this at her, Sir. It was my fault that she started crying. Punish me." Arjun raised his voice.

"Wonderful! You keep hiding each other's mistake but please don't disturb the class. OUT!" he said and shut the door hard. "Friggin' hell!" Arjun muttered and stood next to Rati, taking the walk's support. "I'm sorry!" he apologized. "It's okay! This is new and I love it!" He wore a confused expression now.

"Arey! See, in my previous school, I was never punished. I have been punished by a teacher for the first time ever and this is new to me. Fun!" she said and winked. "Huh! You quite fast! I thought it would take me a decade to make you feel comfortable talking to me. Forget talking, you winked at me. Impressive!" he said, astonished.

Rati chuckled. "See, it takes me a lot of time to open up usually. But never before had anybody waited for me outside the washroom for half an hour and no hunk, school hottie ever fought with the rigid teacher for me." She said and moved her hand forward, "Friends?" she asked. "Yeah, friends!" Arjun replied and they shook hands.

Rati made a friend at the very first day of school. That too with the school's most popular guy.

During the recess time, Arjun introduced his new found friend to all his friends, a group of 4 boys and 2 girls to be precise and now Rati was in acquaintance with them all. Rest of the day went good as they had two back to back periods of her favourite subject, English.

The first half of the day for the girl went bad, really bad though the second half was awesome. She loved it all. Be it the atmosphere, the mess which had food at least edible … not like her previous school, the teachers who did not ask her to stand up and introduce her and most of all, loved the new friend she made.

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After school, Arjun went back home. His father was a rich man, one of the biggest business tycoons of the nation who died of a car crash along with his 12 year old daughter, Alisha. Shaila resembled Alisha in nature. Rigid yet sweet, always angry, bossy and very kind hearted… and that is why he was always sweet to Shaila even after her being rude to him all the time

After his father passed away, his mother … Mrs. Komal Khanna looked after the huge empire Arjun's dad left behind. She was one strong woman. She had groomed her son well. She knew about his carefree nature and flirtatious behavior, yet she knew her son was a gem of a person and showered a lot of love on him. Arjun wanted to take over the empire and let his mother have all the time in the world to relax after doing his MBA. He was really ambitious and had his vision clear.

Arjun always studied at night, quite a nocturnal fellow. He was used to it, studying from 11 to 2 and then doze off at the study table itself. However, today was different. He was not able to concentrate and this was weird as he never was unable to do that before. All he could think of the angelic young lady he met with that day at school.

It wasn't like he had never seen a girl as beautiful as she was, just that … he could see something in her eyes which no other girl had. She was simple and quiet and turned chirpy and vibrant all of a sudden. This suggested to him, that she had a whole world hidden in her. She had something hidden inside her jet black eyes.

Her jet black eyes complemented her long black tresses perfectly. Her face, with all it's glow seemed to him like the moon, shining brightly and lightening up the dark. Her cheeks and nose were pinkish red in color and she looked really cute. Her lips were rosy and petal like in shape. Sweeter than the sweetest fruit, they appeared to him. Craving to suck them.

"WO WO WO! What's wrong with you, dude? Don't forget, she's a friend now and not like your other pastimes. You are not authorized to think like this, get it clear." He said to himself and dug his face in the book.


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Kay, here it is guys! Long enough, I guess.šŸ˜‰

I hope you all enjoyed reading it. Feel free to criticize and please let me know of my mistakes. 😳

Love,
Kanky 😳
Edited by Jiah.Angel - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
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wonderful update dear!

continue soon
nd thanx for the pm 😊
Edited by Favouriteofall - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
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AWESOME WORK!!!
CONTINUE SOON!!!
THNX 4 THE PM!!!
TCCC...
BYEEEE šŸ¤—

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