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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: Kool_Naina

Hiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiii (n dont call me diiiiiiiiii we are friends ryt)

again 1st one to comment
the update was superb yaar
Raj-Pooja scene was so funny
Loved Raj n Naina in Akshardham Mandir
but yeh Naina YESSSSS kab bolegi
do cont soon
thnx for pm

Luvs
Naina

Ok, As u say....Naina...hehehe....wat to do seems like everyone is trying to bigadofy me into not giving them there due respect....hehehe.....😆😆😆....
I told u....it seems like u r racing wid me... as soon as i update b4 i can even reserve another post....i see u have reserved a post for urself...hehehe😆😆😆....thanx for that....it makes me feel good...😃😃...
I like the Akshardham scene too....its bcos i thot i'll end up making a joke out of it....but seems like it really didn't turn out stupid...hehe😆😆😆....
Ab toh usne bhi yes bol diya...yahaan toh late lateef main hi hoon...hahaha....
Love,
Rajita
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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: Kool_Naina

Hiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiii🤗

again 1st one to comment😆😆😆😆
Naina spent her whole money in shopping😆😆 n have only 200 rupees left but apne Raj k hote hue dont worry 😉😉
so finally Naina ne Raj ko YES bol diya woh bhi unique style main
😳😳😳😳😳 but loved her style👏👏👏👏👏
Raj n Naina confessed their love for each other😳😳😳😳😳😳 n Pooja ne unko ashirwaad bhi de diya😆😆😆😆😆
whole update was superb, mind-blowing,awesome..too good👏⭐️👏⭐️👏
do cont soon

Luvs
Naina🤗

Helllllllllllllooooooooooo Naina...hehehe....u go in the merit for being first.....hehehe...
Yes, wen Rajveer's here Naina doesn't have to fear...hehehe😆😆😆.....oops, i knw it was stupid...hehe....
Naina siad a yes keeping in mind her abilities...hehehe....😛😛😛....nice to knw u appreciate her expression of love...hehe....😊😊
Rajveer and Naina's first step towards a bright future...hehehe....ofcourse aashirwaad is very important for the beginning of anything auspicious...hehe😉😉😆😆😆
Thanx....wonderful to knw that u found is good....thank you....
and plzz read the note on pg-19...ok...u'll know the other reason for my delay....hehehe
Love,
Rajita...
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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: mayadika11

awesooooome...
superb...
wonderful.......
excellent UD.......
loved it to the core....
thanx for the pm.......

Thanks....😊😊😊....its soo wonderful of u to drop in a comment...😊😊....its really motivating....i hope u like it till the end....
Love rajita...
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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: mayadika11

awesooome....
superb.....
wonderful......upd.
loved it.....
thanx for the pm.....

Thanx again....!!....for liking the update....and thank god u got the PM....i always feel i've missed out on sumone...or the other...hehe....keep reading!!!
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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: FULTUSI

AWESOMEEEEEEEEEEE👏👍🏼
PLZZZZZZZ PLZZZZZZZZZZ CONTINUE WITH THE NEXT PART SOON,,,,WE CAN'T WAIT ANYMORE,,,,,,

Thank you....yaar... it feels great to know someone waits for my updates with so much enthusiasm...i'll try to update as soon as possible....
Love,
Rajita....
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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: sweet.dreamz

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OK Guys i am in another problem.....oh god save me....seems like even bhagwan doesn't want me to update it.....HELPPPPPP!!!....
See, i have left my home now and at my masi's place.....my luggage has been transferred to Assam....so, in short i don't have a net connection on my laptop.... Now i am using my sis's comp but wen i shifted my doc file of the fic, it refuses to open up on her system since she has word2003 and i've word 2007 docx format....!! so now i would have happily updated today but now seems like it is bound to get delayed till i find an alternative....which i already have but then the alternative is in a time zone 10 hrs behind India...So, In short Suhana dii has to come to my rescue...hehehe.....DIII Help!!!!!!!!!! Love,
rajita




Hi....If u want u can mail me the .doc file, I will send it to u in a PM and then u can post it here.
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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: suhana_dixit

Hi Rajita

How r u??? hello dii....me doing good...how abt u...hehehe....as if i don't know...haha😆😆
Update was just so gud...👏👏.... Yipee...didi liked it...and i got 2 claps instead of slaps...😛😛😛....ok, i think in just trying to rhyme words, i am making a stupid fool out of myself...hehehe😛😛
I have never been to Akshardham Temple but I have seen it ..It is really beautiful..😊 even dii, i have never been to akshardham...hahaha....thats why didn't describe anything within the temple...just assumed kuch na kuch toh common temples jaisa hoga hi...hehehe....i have just seen it from the flyover and it looks really beautiful to me...SmileSmileSmile
When will Naina say YES???.. OK, i was late in replying...seems like she has already said a yes...hehe
I am waiting for that eagerly..There r so many sweet moments dat its difficult to point one..😃 hehe....seems like they make a sweet couple...ofcourse with their free offer pooja..hehe😆😆😆....
specially the one in Temple where Raj helped Naina with her hair..😳😳.... it was romantic...there first romantic scene...hehe...seems like i am not all that bad...hehe....i thought it will either seem too kiddish or it may seem like a joke...thankfully it turned out quite serious...hahaha
Pooja is teasing both of them but its affecting Naina mostly..😆😆 I think Raj knows dat Naina loves him ..Tongue it has got to be pretty obvious....naina keeps on blushing all the time...and also stealing glances...and sharing the front seat wid him....😉😉...hehe
Mr.IIT is studying in Temple too..These people never stop studying na!! 😆😆😆... seriously...hehe..... ofcourse u would know it better...😆😆😆
" If I had one wish.
If one desire could come true.
If I had one wish.
My wish would be you.

If I could choose.
I would stay in your arms forever.
Our hearts would fuse.
And our love would become an endeavor.

I would wish for you to stay with me.
For you to be my love.
You would be my hearts key.
Forever my angel, my dove.

Forever is a long time.
To require in a single command.
I will write our love in a rhyme.
For it would be my demand.

I would ask of this.
Only with your permission.
Lost in a kiss.
Our love is my ambition.

So I wished upon the star.
The star that reminded me most of you.
My actions seemed bizarre.
But this wish I had to pursue.

If I had one wish.
My wish would be you.
And since I made that wish.
My wish has come true...

Wow that was soo beautiful dii....your poems always gives me goosebumps...SmileSmileSmile...how i hope even i fall in love sometime...hehe...😛😛😛😛...silly me..


Pls continue soon(this means day after tomarrow) .. oops sorry...seems like i'll fail in the punctuality test...hehehe...but i did post the next part..hehehe...
Bye...love
Rajita
Bye

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Posted: 15 years ago

Guys this is the update from Rajita...This is the first time I am posting some update never mind its not written by me😉😆😆

I smiled..what if there was no Pooja or we were not friends where exactly would I have been .maybe studying further.or maybe my family would have been looking for another eligible match..watever I know I could never have been as happy as I am with Rajveer. I realized from the day our courtship began..unknowing he became the reason for my smiles, my dilemmas, my pouts, my tears and my hopes?..😊 how void would my life be without him.i fear to even think.😕

"Pooja suun..Can you just be here for like 15 minutes.i'll just be back" said Rajveer

"ok!! bhai tum jao .meanwhile myself and Naina are just around here."she said pointing to some nearby shops.

"Nahi yaar, aa don't mind par kya main plzz Naina ko apne saath le kar jaa sakta hoon.just for 10 minutes I promise?.we'll be back soon"😳😆

I looked up surprised.he glanced at me and back again?.😳

"Bas dekh liya.now suddenly u make me feel as if I am ur kabaab mein haddi..jao jahaan jana hai.maine kab roka.but plzzz ghar wapas jaane se pehle mujhe le lena.warna mummy se kya kahoge" she said dramatically..😕

He sighed disappointed. "fine stay here.i'll go alone and come back"😲😕

"Hey bhaiya wait.don't make me the villain in your love story..u know I was just kidding." Pooja said seriously this time.

I knew she was serious because generally woh Rajveer ko asaani se bhaiya nahi bulati and now that she did, it meant she was serious..

"Pakka.gussa hoke toh nahi bol rahi ho?.."

"Go and shut up.u see even I need my privacy.i have better work to do" she said mischievously.😉

"Better work as in" he asked?😲

"As in?" she came closer to his ear and signaled him towards the right corner. "you see the hot guy there?.you have been blocking my view.its been one hour I have been trying to check him out.hehe" she giggled.😆😆😉

Rajveer simply gave her his signature 'AS IF' look!!!!!

"Shall we?.." Rajveer asked me.

I stood up silently and waited to follow him.instead he asked me move forward while he stepped behind me. In short or else in my mother-in-law's words he has been following me from the time he has married me. He has no opinions,just orders from his wife?.!!!!😛😛

Only Rajveer's wife knows that she could not even take a step forward without her husband behind her?? her heart says there is no hand to hold her if not for his.❤️

"Where are we going?.??" I spoke to him for the first time as his girlfriend.

"Just a little far,over there" he pointed to a corner.

It was like any other shop in Delhi Haat. It had variety of jewellery. I liked Delhi Haat for this being one of the reasons. One could get such beautiful and unique accessories. Rajveer asked the shop keeper for something he had asked him to keep aside a little while ago. The shopkeeper, a pleasant old man glanced at me, smiled and handed a small pouch to Rajveer. Rajveer thanked him respectfully and took me aside.

"Naina, I just thought of keeping some memories of the day.." he hesitated.

I smiled and urged him to continue.

"It's a small gift which I want you to keep.U know as a memoir" with this he gave me the light blue pouch.

I hesitated but took it carefully in my palm.

"May Iopen it ???" I asked

"Go ahead.i don't know if you would really like it but I hope my choice isn't too ba"..

I open it carefully and took out a pair of beautiful earing,.simple and very elegent.it was a small silver stud attached with a black crystal stone.

And needless to say I loved it.

Sitting on the bed alone, suddenly something struck me..i smiled, scrambled out of the bed and went to my cupboard.there I excited rummaged through my stuff.. I took out few things from there.then I came to my dressing table.. I searched through the drawer and took out some more little things..Going to the study and unlocking my drawer.yes, myself and Rajveer had separate drawers and both of us kept things which were closest to us in them and both of us kept it locked..

What, don't we seem the ideal couple suddenly!!!..... keeping secrets from each other??hehehehe.I know it's a bit weird but we wanted to make our rules in our love life and behind this was also a concept ...we love each other but we respect each other's individuality also. always in each one of our lives there are some things which we wish to keep to ourselves .just ourselves as our close secrets..Though they may be things as simple as our first movie tickets but still they remain close. there may be no harm if anyone sees them, yet there are no answers as to why one holds those things dear..They are things which have unconditional unreasonable and irrational importance..and as for us we didn't want to be accountable for those to anyone, not even to each other.so came this thing.nevertheless whenever we get too lovey dovey, we ourselves share some of the things but are happy showing them as we know its our decision..this way now we both know exactly what each one has in each of the drawers, but still they remain locked..hehehe.to take care of our very personal space

I took out some more things.once my hands were too full to take on more.i went and put all of them on the bed and neatly arranged it..finally going to where I was lying earlier I folded my legs and smiled seeing all of it..each of the items on the bed had a memory associated?. I looked for the pair of earrings and found my little blue pouch.i took them out and held it in my palms lovingly as I stared on in the past.

"Oh my God!! .

Rajveer this is so beautiful.i mean this is amazing..." i said.suddenly all my inhibitions, my shyness dissolved and I was back to my normal self.and this was what surprise gifts did to me..they made me smile soo big that people around would think I have never smiled bigger..😃😃😆😆😆

He chuckled.. "wow, thank God u like it..you know I have never been soo nervous b4 buying any gift?."😊😊

For the next few moments we just kept the hehehe's and hahaha's.without saying anything..both of us were so freaking nervous..😉😉

"Naina I need your help?."

"Kya hua???"

"Ok, there is a reason why I have got you here...Naina I want to buy something special for Pooja..you know if not for her, u wouldn't have as much spared a glance at me." He joked.

"Very funny.." I taunted back

"What!!!. I thought you women know each other the best."

"Firstly yes, we know each other the best.and I am fully aware or what she likes.And Secondly, there is no women anywhere around."

He smiled, then grinned and then started laughing and soon the laughter became uncontrollable..😆😆😆

"WHAT's the joke?.may I know??"

"Naina, how is it that there is no woman around..when u said that i just started feeling a little u know?" and he trailed off laughing.

"Started feeling a little what?."

"Never mind.."😉

"No wait, Tell me Rajveer.." I demanded

"U know, I just started feeling a li'l Gay.." and he ended up laughing.😆😆😆😆

I sighed?. "Uff, both brother- sister alike?.with no women around I meant, there is no women like women?..u see I am not even 18 yet for God's sake?..i am still a young girl"

"No ways?.don't tell me u aren't even 18?..Damn I am having an affair with a kid"😆😆

"Hey, U never gave me an eligibility criteria before saying yes?.and waise bhi I turn 18 in 3 months?." I said rather annoyed?

"Naina, look here."

"What??" I said looking everywhere other than at him.Obviously on our very first day I didn't want him to know that I was even a bit annoyed.

"Naina, wait are you angry?."

"No ways, why will I be ?."

"Are you hurt?."

"No, I am not."

"Naina, I love you"😉

"Obviously not."I said without even thinking what I was saying..and then when my mind actually processed the actual input, I looked at him surprised.my eyes as wide as ever?.😲😲😲😲😳😳😳

"Kya hua?." He smiled his brows raised.My eyes lowered on its own will..😳😳😳

This situation continues till now.he looks up I look down .i shop, he sleeps.. I love reading, he loves para gliding.. I happen to be a pure veggie, he lives on Non-veg. So, if people say opposites attract is a hypothetical situation, believe me its not..😃😃😃

"Lets Go.Its already 10 minutes.we can't leave Pooja alone for too long" I said gaining my breath back....

Coming back to the same shop from where Rajveer got me his first gift, we selected some Pooja like accessories.Ok, I admit this time I did the shopping whereas he just stared at me both with affection and astonishment as I pointed on things kept at places where even his furthest observation would not have reached..😆😆😃

Finally back to Pooja.Obviously she had to tease, I had to blush, he had to sigh and she had to giggle..in the exactly 30 minutes we were away.can u beat it, she had one plate of momos, a smoothie, and was half way through her lays which may not be much if forgetting her heavy lunch just a few minutes before we left...Rajveer was right, she does need a boyfriend to keep her engaged

. But God definitely has blessed her with an amazing figure which never swells!! 😃

But she did like her gifts?.even on the day of our wedding, she wore something of it, and whenever anyone complimented, she just replied "Its because they fell in love in my room.i think they should keep on falling in love when I am aroun .i'll keep on getting gifts hehe..;D."😃😊

Thats all..
Pls do comment or press like button..Silent readers pls try to comment even if its a single line...
Bye
Edited by suhana_dixit - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago

Hi Rajita

How r u??
Update was really gud...👏👏👏
How on earth u can end this fiction so soon..Abhi to u have to write small romantic moments between dem..itni jaldi ending nahi chalegi😃
I love it when Raj n Naina went for shopping..😃 Pooja is a full nautanki piece..She is a sweet heart..
Raj gave her a beautiful gift..Naina was so happy..😃
U know I beleive in this philosophy of individuality😆😆 I hope I dont sound too rude but I really love this logic..Dont try to know too much abt your partner..This knowing inside out makes life boring..ohk enough of my boring lecture😆😆
Once I start writing I just can't stop..😆😆
I think Raj was sure dat his life partner is completely opposite to him..I do belive dat opposite attracts 😉
Raj thought of buying gift for Pooja too..Afterall its because of her dat these thwo r together😃😃😃
Their small tit bit chatting was cute..Raj has a humorous nature..He loves teasing her then seeing her getting annoyed too fast..
But Naina was really trying to control her temper...😆😆
They shud thank God for making them for each other.😊
Pooja has a gr8 appetite..She is lucky that she doen't put on too much weight😛
Continue soon
Bye
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Posted: 15 years ago

Hiii Rajita,

How r u?
First of all thanks to suhana for posting the update on your behalf n for the pm also
Now coming to the update its simply awesome yaar 👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏
Raj ne naina ko gifted beautiful ear raings...choooo chweet of him...aur usne pooja ke liye bhi gift liya...Raj is teasing naina ....n naina getting annoyed ..the whole shopping scene is so lovely
Pooja ki nauntanki ....ab is ke bare main kya kehna...enjoyed so much
loved the whole part
please continue soon
Edited by princessyogitha - 15 years ago

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