NEW SS-HEY RABAA (mn)

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HI GUYS BACK WITH A SHORT SS, DIFFERENT HOPE YOU LIKE IT TRY TO GIVE IT SOME ROMANTIC TOUCH WELL I LOVE TO WRITE IT HOPE YOU LOVE TO READ THIS ........ THIS SS HAS SOMETHING DIFFERENT
HEY RABAA
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what happen when a nani i mean when some one want her to marry but she does nto want this ....lets see what happen well this is little touch of punjabi hope you like this

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Posted: 15 years ago
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INDEX
PART 1-PAGE -1
PART 2-PAGE -
PART 3-PAGE -
PART 4-PAGE -
PART 5-
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Posted: 15 years ago
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part 1
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utth ja .hay rabaa ki karaa mein iss kudi da ....aisne ta mere jaan le lei..........utth ni........no response then .......rukk ja hone das ti haa tanu........... ........saying this the voice to disappear..........and we saw bed was flying in air......and the girl was screaming......................

girl- bachoo ,,,,,help help ....................saying this if you not stop this i will jump.........and she start counting .........1 ..........2 ............3i will count untill five.......................then i will jump.....

voice- kyo you don't know after five don't worry i will count but you have to jump.........don't back to your words............just jump when i complete five.........

girl- oh god why yaar she is my nani or ghost........

the bed was flying ...........she tightly shut her eyes and jumped.........knowing she will broke her leg or her bones....too.............

voice- rukk ja saying this ...she just use her hand....and now the girl was in air..........hanging like a baloon...........

gir- no nani no not again plz sorry sorry...........plz nani i was feeling dizzy plz plz put me down otherwise i will poke nani plz plz........you love me na nani plz don't do this with me plz.............she pleade......


voice-ok today i will leave you but not again.......you know what's the time and here your are sleeping like kumbkaran......you lazy girl ......you are a big girl ....you have to take care yourself but you are useless fallow....you know everytime i am not here to help you............

girl- why i don't think so you are alwys with me.........no body snatch you from me..........

saying this she try to hug her.............but she just pass her body................

voi- dekha tuje kaha hai na.........i am not here to help you ......i touch you but you can't touch me...........

hearing this the girl started crying.........

voi- ab ye ro kyo rahi ahi pagal mein abhi kaha ja rahi hoon jab tak teri marrige nahi ho jati tab tak to nahi jane wali agar god bhi aa jaye tab bhi nahi........


gir-( tab to bhool jao nani shaddi mein hone nahi dongi becoz .....aap muje kabhi chod ker nahi sakti.......) nani i am geeting late for my college.........

well this is the story of a sweet girl who don't have anybody in this world rather than her nani which is alive for her but no body can see her .....only nupur her daughter............. whom she love most ........her life.................

Edited by adi_gupta - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
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awesome awesome concept and part one di...

Magic and ghosts...wohoo..sounds different..

I am absolutely up for it..

Loved the first part..

Continue soon..

Love,
Akansha

P.s. Yay me first..
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Wow bhut bangle ki kahani hai he he he

Part one was toooooo goooddd
I hope next update will be soon
aur tum to badi fast ho jee abhi request kari thi aur abhi PM bhi aa gaya 😆😆😆
Thanks for the PM
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awesoooooooome.....
superb.......
lovely........
fantabulous..........
thanx for the pm........
do cont.soon........
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Posted: 15 years ago
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hey adi nice concept and please pm me when you update
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Hey awesum concePt do pm me
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Wow Adiiiiiiiiiiiii
a new FF
congrats dear
awwwwwwwwwww i loved ur concept
totally unique yaar
1st part awesome
great job
keep it up

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nice one
thanx 4d pm

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