A wonderful Life...(update on pg 145) - Page 8

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Posted: 15 years ago
#71
nice update and thanks for the pm hope samrat succeeds in getting his chashmish back 😊
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i hope so 2!! thanx for appreciating!!
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Posted: 15 years ago
#73
heyy .....it was gr8 .....i read 4 parts together ......so comment karne mein der ho gayi ...
but all gr8 ........
the thing is ..
sajan have got engaged ......
every1is wid them now .....
only adchan is samrat's mom .......
well it will b overcome ...time lagega i feel bt all's well that ends well !!!!!!
neways .....thnx 4 pm ...update soon
neeraja
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Posted: 15 years ago
#74

Originally posted by: Mjhtrox11

Sry this was avery long one!!

hey dont worry ....all of us here like long parts .....😉
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#75

S: Mom! Mom! Kaha ho aap?

Mom: Haan beta... itna chila kyo rahe ho...

S: aapne bauji ko aisa waisa kyo bola??

Mom: Oh! Toh us larki ne tumhe bata hi diya... Aur kya usne bataya ki usne mujhe kya bola?

S: kya bola mom?

Mom: usne mujhe apne ghar se nikala... Mujhe bola ki apne bete ko apne paas hi rakho... ki woh tumse shaadi nahi karegi..

S: haan mujhe pata hai.. aur mujhe lagta hai usne sahi jawab diya aapko...Mom plz aap wapas london chale jayye

Gunjan is standing at the door listening to all this...

Mom: ek mamuli si larki ke liye tum apne mom ko wapas jaane ke liye keh rahe ho!!

S: Mamuli nahi hai gunjan.. aapke liye chahe uske koi maiyne na ho... par mere liye woh bahut special hai...

Mom: samrat mujhse behes mat karo..

S: mom aap plz kripa karke wapas chale jaiye..

Mom: Wah!! Kaisa jaadooo kar diya hai uss larki ne tumpar.. uske liye apne maa se lar rahe ho tum...

S: Mom enuf... waise bhi meri custody dad ko di gayi thi.. toh aapke bolne se kuchh nahi hoga... Pehle mujhe dukh hota tha is baat ka ki mujhe kabhi ma ka pyar nahi mila... par ab khushi hoti hai ki meri custody aapko nahi milli... warna toh main barbaad ho jata...

G cant stand it anymore...

G: Samrat...

S: chashmish tum yaha...aao na...

G: woh...

Mom: main apne bags pack karti hoon...

After his mom leaves...

G: ye tum kya kar rahe ho samrat?

S: kya?

G: tum apni ma se aise kaise baat kar sakte ho!!???

S: chashmish.. mom ne tumse, bauji se, itni buri tarah baat ki aur abhi tum mom ki side le rahi ho??

G: ye baat side ki nahi hai samrat... Par..( she stops) Chhodo... ye tumhari choice hai...

S: holding gunjan ) Chashmish.. tum jaanti ho na ki main tumhari har baat manoonga.. toh ye bhi..

G: samrat.. humara rishta isse sudharega nahi... L

S: matlab?

G: main yaha sirf is liye aai hoon kyoki... abhi tumhare dad ka letter aaya aur hamare shaadi ka gift bhi...Ye dekho

It was a key and a letter.. In the letter it was written...

" Gunjan beta. Bahut dukh hai ki tumse mile bina ja raha hoon.. par main wapas aaoonga... Yeh tumhara shaadi ka topha hai... yeh tumhara aur samrat ka ghar hai jaha shaadi ke baad tumlog rahoge... Isse khud design karna aur shaadi hone tak yeh kaam khatam ho jana chahiye...

Love,

Dad"

S: sorry chashmish.. main ye nahi le sakta... yeh tumhare liye hai.. aur haan main tumhe itni aasani se jane nahi doonga...

Gunjan just turns and goes and on the way leaves the key on the table...

S: kya karoon main... kaise chashmish ko bolu ki ..

His mom comes wid her bags...

S: mom mat jayye.. main gusse main tha.. sorry

Mom: aww samrat.. mujhe pata hai tum mujhse pyar karte ho.. par main wapas aaoongi kuchh hi din main... office main koi emergency hai... bye beta

S: bye mom!!

The next day...

A: toh kaisi chal rahi hai shaadi ki tayariyan?

R: achhi hi chal rahi hongi na.. ??

G: guys mujhe tum logo ko kuchh batana hai...

A and R: kya? Samrat ne kuch bola kya?

G: guys hamari shaadi toot chuki hai.. Samrat ki mom ko main pasand nahi hoon...

A: kyo?

R: tumme kya kharabi hai?

G: woh kehti hai ki main samrat se uske paise ke liye shaadi kar rahi hoon..

A: par yeh toh jhooth hai na...

G: plz iske baare main mat baat karo...

That evening...

M and S fone conv.

M: samrat aaj tum kya kar rahe ho?

S: kuchh nahi.. mom chali gayi...

M: chal na.. taash khelte hai...Poker!

S: Theek hai dude... mere ghar pe...

M: Gunjan aur nupur ko main bol dunga.. woh log khana bana denge tumhare ghar par aakar...

S: Dekh mayank ... agar gunjan nahi aana chahe toh usse force mat karna...

M: theek hai baba... aur armaan ridhima ko bhi invite karenge...

S: ok dude.. toh 7 baje se...

M: ok bye...

Line diconnected...

M: nupur ho gaya!!

N: ab samrat aur gunjan ko paas lana meri zimidari... (Hoye!!)

Mayank Gunjan Phone conv..

M: gunjan aaj shaam samrat ke ghar par taash khelenge hum log sab.. armaan aur ridhhma ko bhi bol dena...

G: jiju.. aap ko pata hai na

M: are baba.. nupur akele bore ho jayegi isliye... tum armaan riddhima ko bolna mat bhoolna... 7 baje se...aur tum aur nupur 5 baje chale jaana khane ka arrangement karne...

G: ji jiju... di ke liye.. kuchh bhi...

M: okk... bye

Line disconnected...

M shows his thumbs up!!

M: done!!

hope ull like it...

will update soon

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Posted: 15 years ago
#76
Do update soon dear......and thanks for the PM.
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Posted: 15 years ago
#77
awesome part
cant wait for sajan meeting
update asap😊
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Posted: 15 years ago
#78
hey sweety amazing part yaaar n plzz sajan shaadi zaror ho or next part main sam ki mom ka reaction kia ho ga im waiting for tht n thnxxx for the pm
urbi!!!
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Posted: 15 years ago
#79
hey again amazing part plzzz update more i love it
urbi!!!
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Posted: 15 years ago
#80
Niceee...
Loved The Both parts...
Cont Soon..
Thnnxx for PM..
*Sana*
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