A wonderful Life...(update on pg 145) - Page 6

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Posted: 15 years ago
#51
awesome update
loved it
but whats samrats mom gonna do
continue soon😊
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Posted: 15 years ago
#52
hey sweety fabulous update yaaaar n ur update was so itresting i really like it
urbi!!!
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Posted: 15 years ago
#53
thanx a lot guys i will update soon!!
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Posted: 15 years ago
#54
awsomeeeeeeeee updt
finally gunji sam k dad ko pasand to ayi....
cont soon
n thnx 4 the pm Hun!
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Posted: 15 years ago
#55
amazing,fab updt!!👏
luvd it!
plz cont soon
thanx for the pm😊
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Posted: 15 years ago
#56
superb updt
oops sry for double posting!!!!
Edited by Aditi_sajanfan - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
#57
it was superb n short!!
amazing
thanx for the pm
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Posted: 15 years ago
#58
Gr88 Scene..
Liked The Surprise...😉
Update Next Soon...
Thnnxx or PM....
*Sana*
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Posted: 15 years ago
#59

At night.. that day..

Samrat and gunjan on the phone...

S: chashmish.. batao kya tumne soch bhi kais3e liya tha ki main tumhe itni aasani se apne life se jaane doonga??

G: pata nahi.. uss samay sirf bauji ke bare main soch rahi thi.. pata nahi tha na ki woh bhi mazak kar sakte hain....

S: aur surprise kaisa laga??

G: plzz... uski yaad mat dilao.. Meri dharkane kitni zoro se dhadak rahe the jab tumne kaha ki tum party main aaoge ...

S: haha... waise chashmish tum rote hue bahut achhi lagti ho...'

G: kya?? Rote hue?? Samraat!! Toh kya shaadi ke baad tum mujhe rulaoge..

S: chashmish.. mere paas toh koi aur plan hai...

G: kya?

S: agar main shaadi se inkaar kar do toh? Phir toh tum rogi na?

G: samrat in sab cheezo main mazaak mat kiya karo... Main tumse alag hokar nahi jee sakti...

S: main bhi chashmish..Chalo gudnyt... agar bauji ne pakar liya toh sach main shaadi pospone kar denge!!

G: (giggles) Bye..

Next day.. Breakfast at the bhushans..

G: ramu kaka.. jaldi nashta do warna late ho jaungi..

B: are beta.. itni subah subah kaha ja rahi ho?

G: bauji aaj dr.kirti ne jaldi bulaya hai... Waise shaadi ki date kab ki hai??

B: beta woh actually samrat ki ma aa rahi hai phir milkar teh kar lenge...

G: mujhe toh samrat ne nahi bataya ki uski mom aa rahi hai...

Breakfast at shergills

S: dad jaldi kijie naa... office late pahuchenge...

Dad: arre bhai... aa raha hoon.. aur samrat aaj tumhari mom aa rahi hai 5 baje shaam ko.. lene chale jana aur gunjan ko bhi le jana...

S: dad aap?

Dad: bhool gaye samrat... Mujhe jana hai abhi wapas.. 10 baje ki flight hai!! Tum aur gunjan airport chale jaana... aur gunjan ko mera bahut pyar dena..

S: ji dad.. bye..

That afternoon.. sam in office and gunjan at the hospital... Samrat tells gunjan that they hv 2 go 2 the airport and gunjan says she will hv 2 ask dr.kirti..

Phone convo.

S: kya bola dr.kirti ne?

G: samrat sorry... woh mujhe zyada s zyada 6 baje chhod sakti hain...

S: koi baat nahi.. ek kaam karte hai main mom ko pick karke unhe hospital le aaunga... Aur phir tumhe ghar chhodte waqt mom tumse mil bhi lengi..

G: samrat.. main apni car lai hoon aj... par ek kaam karo. Aunty ko hospital le ana main wahi unse mil loongi aur phir wahi se nikal lenge...

S: theek hai chashmish.. jaisa tum kaho... J

That nite at 6:30 outside sanjeevani..

Gunjan standing nxt to her car... (wearing salwar suit ) Samrats car pulls in.

S: chashmish yeh hai meri mom...

G: namaste aunty!

Mom: hi baby... (she makes a face)

S: toh mom bataye kaisi lagi meri choice...

Mom: gunjan ba..hu..t.. Sundar hai!! Wao bbeta...

G: (blushes) Thank u aunty...

S: dekha chashmish.. mom ko bhi tum pasand aai.. aur tum bekaar ka hi nervous ho rahi thi...

G: samraaat,

Mom: ner-vous?? Mujhse milne main?

G: ji woh...

Mom: Beta ab ghar chale bahut thak gayi hoon...

G: haan samrat aunty ko ghar lejao... unse kal mil lenge...

His mom gives her a fake smile...

S: ok chashmish.. baad main baat karte hai...

At the shergill's....

S: mom aap itna weird kyo behave kar rahi thi chashmish ke saamne...

Mom: uska naam gunjan hai na... plz ab yeh chashmish chashmish mat karo...Samrat mujhe tumse yeh umeed nahi thi... Itni old fashioned hai ye.. Jab tumne mujhe bataya ki dia ki cousin hai toh mujhe laga ki Koi outstanding larki hogi jo tumhe pasand aai hai... aur tumne is middle class larki ko chunaa?? Chhee...

S: bas mom!!! Enuf is enuf! Gunjan ke bare mein main issse zyada kuchh nahi sun sakta... dad ko bhi woh pasand aai.. aur har cheeze ko aap dekhte hi kyo judge karti ho.. Chashmish bahut sweet hai.. Hamesha mera saath degi...

Mom: bas samrat... maine keh dia so keh diya...

S: ek chance toh dijiye gunjan ko...

Mom: theek hai tum itna keh rahe ho toh main ekbar usse mil aaungi...

S: thank you mom!!

Mom: main kal hi jakar usse aur uske pitah se baat karongi...

Ill update again...

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Posted: 15 years ago
#60
ughhhh!!!!...his mom is sooo annoying!!!
great part!!
please continue soon!
thanks,
Sanju

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