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Pebblez

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Posted: 15 years ago

#81

:) theres a line in the last few paras of this part, about the youngest having to be te strongest, because sometimes parents are so grieved, they are incapable of seeing through the ordeal the others are facing, and as someone has to stand up, why not the youngest? And suddenly, the youngest is seen to be the one who can handle things, make decisions, do the right things....even though from inside they are as devastated and grieved...being in that state, of being broken inside and being strong from outside, is the hardest thing to do...surprisingly, i learnt that only in this last week of my life :)

You have a commendable way of incorporating real life thoughts and events into everyday conversations and make it seem so genuine! Really liked it. Thanks for the PM.

Kiran

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AngelTeen

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Posted: 15 years ago

#82

Very serious part...liked how you handled it.

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EmilyIsaac

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Posted: 15 years ago

#83

Originally posted by: Riddss
heyyy dear,
both the parts
where awesome
thanks for PM.
continue soon

love
Riddss

Hello Riddss,

Thank you very much for your comment.

Thanks,
L.

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EmilyIsaac

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Posted: 15 years ago

#84

Originally posted by: munnibai
Hello.
Sorry couldnt comment on your previous part. Anyhow, both the parts were brilliant. 👍🏼
The 6th part was a bit shocking. I knew something bad had happened to Ridhima when she was young, which was the cause of Anjali's over protectiveness but I would have never guessed it would be something so serious.😲
I like the way the story is progressing and revealing out things about each of the characters' past. Its really good.👏
I wont ask you to update soon....cause I know you will! 😉
And...thank you for the PM.
x

Hello,

Thank you very much for your comments. It is good to know you liked both the parts.
Yes, I will be updating soon. You are very much welcome for the PM.

Thanks,
L.

Edited by Ling - 15 years ago

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desire_20

@desire_20

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Posted: 15 years ago

#85

loved the part... u wrote it wonderfully, im glad armaan is willing to help riddhima and anjali out with this...im not sure if it would go with the plot, but i'd love to see some light mood or romantic AR moments if possible.... newayz continue soon

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@khahani

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Posted: 15 years ago

#86

Hi L

It seems as if though that this group of friends have been wounded in their childhood in one way or another, which is pulling them all even more closer and inevitably this is what makes them want to look out for each other.

The title of chapter 6 really caught my eyes as it represents Armaan and his nightmares of not being able save that woman in Africa. But the outcome of the title turned out to be Anjali! Armaan has developed a whole new metaphorical concept of darkness in life which many people develop in real life due to circumstances.

Coming to Riddhima this poor girl has been through a lot it seems. I have to commend you for conveying such sensitive issues in this story. You fitted it in so brilliantly into a normal conversation. The progress is really intriguing.

Thanks for the PM :)

Nahida

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Niks

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Posted: 15 years ago

#87

Hey ling,

i donno wht attracted me to this FF.......is it the title or the story line.....but one thing is sure....its amazing and very interesting.....i hav read it for the first time today and i find it quiet unusual compared to other......waise bhi m not a great fan of sadistic FF but its different.....n m lovin it.....!

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EmilyIsaac

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Posted: 15 years ago

#88

Originally posted by: sisgeo
wow.........gr8 update........serious though...love the way the 4 handled the situation..especially arman and anjali.....continue soon

Hello,

Thank you very much for your commens.

Yes, I will update soon.

Thanks,

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EmilyIsaac

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Posted: 15 years ago

#89

Originally posted by: naureen_aly
wow so this is the reason
amagzing part

thanks 4 the pm

Hello,

Thank you very much for your comments.

You are welcome for the PM.

Thanks,

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EmilyIsaac

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Posted: 15 years ago

#90

Originally posted by: mansibharti

hey ling that was amazing yaar. Armaan is such an understanding person and what happened with ridhhima was indeed scary but after this part i felt somewhat respectful towards anjali... she was very brave and so understanding through out, youngest became the toughest. ... beautifully written. a deep insightful part, now looking forward to see how the situation is handled and how AR come together... sorry couldn't comment before, have an exam tomorrow was busy just could not stop myself to come for this... brilliant work... did i tell you that I am your fan now ?? 😉😉

P.S

hey ling, one thing ... what's your ling ?? 😆

okay sorry for the PJ , i guess I'm delirious after reading those fat books and my sense of humour is effected... but what i mean is What's your name ? 😃

love
Mansi

Hello Mansi,

Thank you very much for your comments and appreciating my writing. A fan eh? It makes me feel wonderful to hear that.

My name, is Ling. No, it is not my real name but it is a name which is important to me. Calling me Ling makes me happy.

For the record, Ling means "Zero" in Mandarin.

Thanks,