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imshveta

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Posted: 15 years ago

#91

That was sad. Its really devastating, you know, for a family when a child is abducted and tormented like that. Specially girl child is more diificult to handle. Maybe because of the way our society works. And this is the true test of a family bonding.

Armaan behaved responsibly. That was good of him.

Good work. Nice story. Just hope Ridhima is cured of all her fears soon.

Shveta

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EmilyIsaac

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Posted: 15 years ago

#92

Originally posted by: Pebblez
:) theres a line in the last few paras of this part, about the youngest having to be te strongest, because sometimes parents are so grieved, they are incapable of seeing through the ordeal the others are facing, and as someone has to stand up, why not the youngest? And suddenly, the youngest is seen to be the one who can handle things, make decisions, do the right things....even though from inside they are as devastated and grieved...being in that state, of being broken inside and being strong from outside, is the hardest thing to do...surprisingly, i learnt that only in this last week of my life :)

You have a commendable way of incorporating real life thoughts and events into everyday conversations and make it seem so genuine! Really liked it. Thanks for the PM.

Kiran

Hello Kiran,

Thank you very much for your comments. I was not speaking from a personal experience, but it is something I guess comes naturally for people with Anjali's personality. Kids who face these kinds of situations grow to be strongest because their innocence was taxed when most other kids were still throwing tantrums for ice creams. If you have learned, then I must apologize. Because things like these don't happen randomly. They are always associated with a loss of something.

Thank you very much for your words.

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Posted: 15 years ago

#93

wow, its a great FF...please PM me when u continue

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EmilyIsaac

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Posted: 15 years ago

#94

Originally posted by: AngelTeen
Very serious part...liked how you handled it.

Hello,

Thank you very much for the comment.

Thanks,
L.

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EmilyIsaac

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Posted: 15 years ago

#95

Originally posted by: desire_20
loved the part... u wrote it wonderfully, im glad armaan is willing to help riddhima and anjali out with this...im not sure if it would go with the plot, but i'd love to see some light mood or romantic AR moments if possible.... newayz continue soon

Hello,

Thank you very much for your comment. Armaan has a natural reaction when it comes to helping people. He is empathetic towards others and that character in him attracts people and makes them to trust him.
I must apologize that the plot would only go darker from now on and it was actually quite light till now. Because foundation for principal characters are laid, now the actual story will begin.

Thank you,
L.

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EmilyIsaac

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Posted: 15 years ago

#96

Originally posted by: dhruvikaluvsKSG
gr8 part dear

Hello Dhruvika,

Thank you very much for the comment.

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L.

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EmilyIsaac

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Posted: 15 years ago

#97

Originally posted by: khahani
Hi L

It seems as if though that this group of friends have been wounded in their childhood in one way or another, which is pulling them all even more closer and inevitably this is what makes them want to look out for each other.

The title of chapter 6 really caught my eyes as it represents Armaan and his nightmares of not being able save that woman in Africa. But the outcome of the title turned out to be Anjali! Armaan has developed a whole new metaphorical concept of darkness in life which many people develop in real life due to circumstances.

Coming to Riddhima this poor girl has been through a lot it seems. I have to commend you for conveying such sensitive issues in this story. You fitted it in so brilliantly into a normal conversation. The progress is really intriguing.

Thanks for the PM :)

Nahida

Hello Nahida,

I would leave finding one another was an act of fate; it is as if fate took a pity on them and brought them all together to fight a huge battle. You are right about the closeness they each have.

Armaan has another shade in him which makes him stand out from the group. He has embraced his troubled childhood and his adolescent life wasn't grand either. So he sees life in a much different way from many others.

Writing Riddhima is little difficult as I have to do lot of homework before I write her.
The family interaction is something I would see happening with people like them. Over-dramatization doesn't actually exist in reality.

You are welcome for the PM.

Thanks,
L.

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EmilyIsaac

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Posted: 15 years ago

#98

Originally posted by: NiksAngel
Hey ling,

i donno wht attracted me to this FF.......is it the title or the story line.....but one thing is sure....its amazing and very interesting.....i hav read it for the first time today and i find it quiet unusual compared to other......waise bhi m not a great fan of sadistic FF but its different.....n m lovin it.....!

Hello,

Thank you for the comment.

I am thinking you mean the story is depressing? Perhaps, it would seem so. But birth of happiness starts with death of tragedies. The tragedies have to be dealt before happiness can be fully experienced. I hope you will continue reading further.

Thanks,
L.

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EmilyIsaac

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Posted: 15 years ago

#99

Originally posted by: imshveta
That was sad. Its really devastating, you know, for a family when a child is abducted and tormented like that. Specially girl child is more diificult to handle. Maybe because of the way our society works. And this is the true test of a family bonding.

Armaan behaved responsibly. That was good of him.

Good work. Nice story. Just hope Ridhima is cured of all her fears soon.

Shveta

Hello Shveta,

The damage is irreversible irrespective of the fact that whether the child is a boy or a girl. But I agree that a girl would whole new aspect of trauma.

Thank you for your comments.

Thanks,
L.