ALL FOR YOUR SMILE-2-RN fic[part 37-pg57-24/11/11] - Page 21

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hey dear any chance of us getting an update in near future 😭 😡
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Edited by prerna1 - 14 years ago
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Madam
Aur kitna wait karaogi...update kardo yaar
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hey guys!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! i m back after a lonnnnnnnnng time...i know u all must be giving me all sorts of gaalis and i m ready for ur chapals and sandals too😭😭....i won't say that i was busy because i hv been saying this time and again....time it was a combination of all...i was busy with my classes plus exams plus assignments plus i guess the biggest of all writer's block...i just couldn't bring myself to writing...i am very sorry for all the negligence😭😭😭...i won't promise that i'll be very regular but ya i'll not to take this much time again...
here's a bit of recap of the scenes...i'll advice to read these first sooo that u can get a feel of the characters again which i am sure u all must have forgotten😊


naina-kya hua????aur aap kab aaye????
raj[sarcastically]-jab aap baith kar ye stupid show dekh rahi thi...
naina tried not to laugh at his reaction...she knew he didn't want another serial victim in his house...
naina-vo main bilkul free thi na issi liye main maa ke saath.....
raj[cutting her]-why don't u find something useful to do?????


naina opened one bottle and smelled it....
naina[loudly]-yuckkkkkkkkk kitni gandi smell hai..isse koi khaane mein kaise daal sakta hai..
just then she heard someone laughing and it was none other than raj...
maa-tu kyun hass raha hai?????
raj-maa shayad aap bhool gaye ki aapki monica singh ko khaana banane ke baare mein kuch bhi nahin pata aur garam masala????? i am sure naina garam masale aur kaali mirch ke beech ka farak bhi nahin bata sakti...


maa-raj...
raj-yes mom...
maa-fir mom...tujhe kitni baar kaha hai ki mujhe ye mom tom mat bulaya kar...
raj-sorry maaaaa....

maa-tu kuch dino ke liye chuti le sakta hai??????
naina knew what was coming...
raj-no way maa....i am tooo busy.....abhi to itni chutiyaan li thi... its not possible for me to take even a single day off
maa[dramatically]-theek hai fir naina akeli hi chali jaayegi apne ghar....
raj-what??????????????????????

raj-tumne academy mein to kabhi nahin kaha ki ek saaaaal hone ko aaya hai i am missing maa baba[he said this imitating her]-
naina-tab ki baat aur thi...aur vaise bhi aap mujhse kya expect karte ho ki main raat ke 2 baje faculty quarters mein aakar aapke darwaaze par knock karti aur kehti sir please kuch kijeeye mujhe maa baba ki bhut yaad aa rahi hai...huh
raj-haan...aana chahiye tha..vaise bhi tum aadhe se zyada din mere room mein hi hoti thi...
naina looked at him with wide eyes whereas maa looked at him all shocked......



naina[laughed]-aapke kehne se aaj tak kabhi chup hui hun jo ab hongi....aur vaise bhi ab to aap mujhe ye bhi nahin keh sakte...get out of my room ....hahaahhahhhahaaa...kyunki na to ye koi faculty room hai na main aapki cadet...hahaa..
raj[sighed]-u r right...i can't say that...par main to ja sakta hun na????
saying this he was about to get up when naina suddenly pulled him back and in a fraction of second she was sitting on his stomach and hugged him tight.....actually soo tight that poor raj was struggling to breathe...
raj-naina get off me....
naina-nooo...pehle aap bolo ki aap mujhse naraaz nahin ho....
raj-naina hato mere uppar se and lemme breathe...
naina-pehle bolo naraaz nahin ho......jaldiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiii
raj-ok fine...i am not angry.....now get off me....
naina kissed him loudly on lips and went to switch on the light...
naina[showing her teeth]-now i am happy...
raj-u know tum sach mein pagal ho...
naina-i know...
raj rolled his eyes at her childish behaviour...
naina-mujhe pata hai aap mujhse jhagda karna chahte ho...come on jitna lecture dena hai de sakte ho...vaise bhi main itneeeeeeee dino se aapke lectures miss kar rahi hoon....actually u know what hum apne room mein ek blackboard lagwaate hain...aap uss par mujhe apne private tutions dena....i'll sooooooo love it...
raj tried his best not to smile but failed and he ended up smiling wide....


raj[rubbing her arm to keep her warm]-tumhein kisi ne bataya nahin ki shaadi ke baad apne pati se har cheez share karni padti hai????most importantly blanket..hmm????
naina-pata hai…par main kya karoon?aadat hai....i never shared my blanket with anyone aur fir mujhe face cover karke sona hota hai...
raj-u should not do that...saans kaise aayegi??? its a bad habit...
naina-uff aap fir se raj se rajveer sir ban gaye???lemme sleep...
raj[grinned]-ok no problem...main fir se raj ban jaata hooon...
and he kissed her hard making a loud sound....naina had her eyes wide open in shock..


aryan-maine na jab aap "moon" par gaye the na to class mein apni pant mein susu kiya tha.....
raj and naina-what???????????????????
raj[shouted]-what rubbish???????aisa kyun kiya aapne????
aryan[cutely]-main kya karta maine teacher se bola bhi tha ki mujhe zorrrr se lagi hai par vo kehne lagi ki main jhooth bol raha hun....to mujhe dikhaana padaa ki main jhooth nahin bol raha tha...



naina-lekin maa aapko kabhi koi to sawaal pareshaan karta hoga na?????
maa[smiled]-mujhe mere sabse bade sawaal ka jawaab bhut pehle hi mil gaya tha........jis din maine tujhe pehli baar dekha tha.....
naina[confused]-matlab??
maa-jab raj kma se vaapis aaya tha tab teri tasveer dekhi thi maine uske kamre mein..........
naina looked confused at this...
naina-tasveer??????
maa-teri, raj ki aur uske guzre hue dost ki photo.....naveen ki photo.....
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here's the update....

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😊PLEASE SEE PAGE NO. 32 BEFORE READING THIS😊

recap-RN's blanket fiasco...raj out on sunday for some important work...maa had seen naina's pic with raj and naveen before their marriage...

part 34

naina[shocked]-maa???ye...

maa[smiled sadly]-raj ke paas vo tasveer tumhaari shaadi ke pehle dekhi thi maine...vo tasveer dekhte hi pehchaan gayi thi ki tu uske dost ki behan hai...t.v par news mein dekha tha tujhe jab tere bhai ko begunah saabit kiya gaya tha...

fir raj tujhe jab shaadi karke lekar aaya to main samjh gayi ki kuch to hua hai jis vajah se tum logon ne iss tarah shaadi ki...

naina-maa vo...

maa-teri shaadi ka card jab raj ke liye aaya tha vo maine hi recieve tha...

naina was shocked to the core at this...

maa[continued]-jiss din raj ne tujhse shaadi ki uss din teri shaadi thi na...

naina[tried to explain]-maa main aapko sab bataana...

maa[cutting her]-nahin beta...ye mat samjhna ki main tujhse ya raj se naraaz hun...mujhe kuch nahin jaanna ki tumhaari shaadi kinn haalaaton mein hui...kyunki vo tum logon ke beech ki baat hai main beech mein nahin boloongi...mere liye bas ye maayne rakhta hai ki tum dono ek saath ho aur bhut khush ho...bas aur kuch nahin...

naina started crying and hugged maa immediately like a small baby...

maa-bas beta ab rone ki zaroorat nahin hai...ab to sab theek ho gaya hai...aur main jaanti hun ki raj tujhse kitna pyaar karta hai...itni khushi uske chehre par bahut saalon ke baad dekhi hai maine...aur ye sab teri vajah se hai...iss liye main to tujhe hamari peedit saas association ke best bahu ke liye nominate karne waali hun...

naina forgot about crying and started laughing like a maniac at this...only maa could do something like this to her...

maa[proudly]-arre hass kyun rahi hai?????? dekhna ye award tujhe hi milega...

naina-vo jab milega tab milega...abhi aap chaliye mere saath pleaseee.

maa-kahan??????

naina[happily]-shopping pe...

maa[smiled]-chal...kya chahiye tujhe??????ya fir aise hi shopping karne ka mood hai??????

naina-mood nahin maa bhut zaroorat hai...

maa-kis cheez ki...

naina-aapne hamara room dekha hai?????..bhut khoobsurat hone ke saath saath thoda depressing bhi hai...har taraf white hi white...aapne kabhi roka nahin inhe ??????

maa-pooch mat... itni baar koshish ki hai maine ki thoda badal dun...kuch rang daal dun taaki iski boring zindagi mein bhi thoda rang aaye...par kahin bhi posting pe jaane se pehle bolke jaata hai...mere room mein kuch badalna nahin chahiye...ab tu hi bata main karun bhi kya???

naina-don't worry maa ab main aa gayi hun na...sab badal dungi...ahh i mean sudhaar dungi...

maa-issi khushi mein aaj main tujhe kheer bana ke khilaaungi...mere itne saalon ki tamanna poori hone waali hai...

naina[excitedly]- i loveee kheer maaa..wowww...

maa-to fir done hai...aaj kheer banegi...

naina-doneee...

and they exited the house laughing over their plan...

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in the evening...

naina had finished making the minor changes in their room...she just changed the color of the curtains and bedsheets from white to red...red roses replaced the white ones on the table...as the result their room started giving a more lively and romantic look...

"romance" well it was very much in the air already, thought naina...

maa[entering the room]-arre waah!!!!!! sab kaam ho ho bhi gaya?????

naina[happily]-kaisa lag raha hai maa?????

maa-bhut khoobsoorat...par agar vo mera "dukhi beta" naraaz ho gaya to???

naina[confidently]-aaahh...don't worry about that maa...mujhe poora yakeen hai ki vo kuch nahin kahenge...aur vaise bhi ye mera room bhi hai na...

maa-bilkul...tera jo mann chahe vo kar...ab to ye poora ghar tera hai...[saying this maa gently kissed on her forehead]

naina[getting emotional]-maa aap mujhse itne pyaar se baat karte ho na ki baar baar mujhe maa ki yaad aa jaati hai...

maa[smiled]-maine raj ko yaad karwa diya tha...vo tere jaane ki arrangements kar dega...

naina[hugging maa]-thankyou maa...

maa-vo to theek hai par mera saas waala dialogue pending hai to abhi bol deti hoon..."ab maayke ja kar vahin ki mat ho jaana...yahan poora ghar hai sambhaalne ko"

naina laughed at this while maa prayed silently for the happiness of her children...

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maa and naina were setting the table for dinner when raj entered with a big smile on his face...

naina[whispered in maa's ear]-maa aa gaye vo...zor se daantna please...dekho thodi der bolkar gaye the aur abhi raat ho gayi hai...poora sunday barbaad kar diya...

maa[whispered back]-tu dekh aaj main iski khabar leti hoon..

raj[smiling]-hiii...

maa[sarcastically]-badi jaldi aa gaya beta?????headquaters mein sone ki jagah nahin mili???

naina tried not to laugh at this...

raj-kya matlab????

maa[loudly]-teri itni himmat/??????mujhse??apni maa se matlab pooch raha hai??????

naina[whispered]-maa zyada ho raha hai...thoda kam kijiye...

maa[immediately lowered her voice]-teri itni himmat/??????mujhse??apni maa se matlab pooch raha hai??????

raj didn't understand what all was going on between them but naina couldn't control herself from laughing...

naina[laughing]-kya maa????aap aise gussa karoge to ye kya koi baccha bhi nahin darega...

maa-oh ho beta agli baar acchi practice ke saath aaungi...

raj-koi mujhe bhi batayega ki ye ho kya raha hai??????

naina-hum aapse baat nahin kar rahe hain...poora sunday headquarters mein nikal diya aapne...ab to main kal hi jaa rahi hun maa baba se milne...

raj-tum kahin nahin jaaogi...

naina-aapse poocha nahin maine...mujhe maa ne permission di hai...di hai na maa??????

maa-bilkul...maine jo tere liye kheer banayi hai na vo bhi saath le jaana...raaste mein bhookh lage to bahar ka khaana mat khaana...pata nahin kaisa khaana banta hoga bahar..

naina-thankyou maa...suna aapne[to raj]???????abhi main kal hi jaa rahi hoon...uske baad aap aaraaam se headquarters mein pooja, disco, hawan jo chahe kariyega...i really don't care...aur main kam se kam ek mahina vaapis nahin aane waali...mera saara sunday barbaad kar diya...

raj-ek baat bataao?tumne ye kya baar baar sunday sunday laga rakha hai???tumhein kya farak padta hai sunday ho ya monday sab ek hi barabar hai tumhaare liye..

naina-ahhh voo...par official sunday to aaj hi hai na...aur sunday to sunday hi hota hai...and what do you mean by all this???main koi kaam nahin karti????main kal hi duty join karne ke liye application post kar dooongi...

raj[smiled]-fir ghar kaise jaaogi????

naina-oh haaan...mujhe to jaana hai...maa main packing karne jaa rahi hoon...

raj-ab uski zaroorat nahin hai...kyunki tum kahin nahin jaa rahi...

naina[in crying voice]-maaa...

maa-kya laga rakha hai raj?kyun tang kar raha hai isse?????

raj-aap dono se milne koi aaraha hai..iss liye ladna band kariye aur dinner ready rakhiye...

naina& maa-kaun??????

raj-bhut jald pata chal jayega...excuse me..i need to change...

saying this he left for his room..

maa-naina tu upar ja isse pehle vo behosh ho jaaye...main khana banaati hoon...

naina-nahin maa main bhi aapke saath...

maa[cutting her]-nahin jaldi jaa...kamra dekh kar kahin kamre ki tarah laal na ho jaaye...

naina-oh nooo...ye to main bhool hi gayi thi...byyeee maa...

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in the room...

raj stood rooted at the door only when naina came running and bumped directly into him...

naina[stammering]-ahh...voo...aap ya..yahaan kyun khade ho...maine room mein na jaane ki punishment to nahin di thi...

raj[still looking at the room]-ye kya hai???????

naina[shrugged]-aapka room hai...no actually ab hamara room hai...

saying this she tugged at this shirt's sleeve to make him move...raj entered the room still not able to believe that this was his room...

naina [tired of his strange behaviour]-ab aise kya dekh rahe ho aap????aise to koi baccha pehli baar zoo mein jaake behave nahin karta..vo bhi aapse zyada normally behave karte hain...

raj-ye sab tumne kiya????

naina-aur kaun karega??????aapko accha nahin laga ???

raj-ahhh...

naina[cutting him]-isse pehle aap kuch aisa waisa bolo main aapko yaad dila dun ki ab ye room mera bhi hai aur main jo chahe vo badal sakti hun...soo mind your words...now continue...

raj[smiled]-accha to mujhe kya kehna chahiye????

naina[pouted]-yahi ki aapko ye sab bhut accha laga aur aap bilkul bhi gussa nahin ho...

raj smiled wider looking at her cute face which now had a big pout just like a small baby...

raj pulled her close and kissed her on the cheek..

raj-aur agar main ye kahun ki main yahi kehne waala tha jo abhi tumne mujhe kehne ko kaha...to?????????

naina-to aap jhooth bologe kyunki main jaanti hun ki aapko apne room mein changes pasand nahin hai...

raj-aur ye tumhein kisne kaha?????

naina-maa ne...

raj-maa ne bilkul sahi kaha...mujhe APNE room mein changes pasand nahin thi...lekin abhi to tumne kaha na ki ye HAMARA room hai..to uss hisaab se this was a much needed change...

naina[frowned]-sach??????

raj[smiled adoringly]-bilkul...

naina smiled wider at this and returned his kiss in a much louder way...

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at dinner table...

raj-maa aryan kahan hai??????

maa-aaj sunday hai na..to mera pyaara baccha jaldi so gaya...

raj-aa ha...pyaara baccha...sach sach kahiye na ki saara din shararat karke thak ke so gaya...

maa-tu kyun bacche ke peeche pada rehta hai????

raj-main to bas...

naina-bilkul sahi...kyun aap uske peeche pade rehte ho?????itna cute hai vo aur kitna pyaar karta hai vo aapse...aur aap hamesha usse hitler ki tarah daant te rehte ho...how mean!!!!!!

raj-naina agar koi usse daantega nahin to vo sahi cheez kaise seekhega?????

maa-tujhpe aaj tak meri daant ka asar hua hai????nahin na..to uska peecha kyun nahin chodta tu???

naina-bilkul sahi...aur vaise bhi bacche shararat nahin karenge to kaun karega??????

raj-aap dono ne permanently mere khilaaf team bana li hai ya aaj koi special occasion hai??????

maa and naina[together]- permanent hai...

both gave a high five to each other and started laughing ...

while raj was left with no other choice but to smile...

suddenly...

naina???????????

all three of them looked towards the main door from where the voice came...

naina[whispered]-maa baba????????

the end

link to next part--part 35


https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/fan-fictions/1402544/all-for-your-smile-2-rn-fic-part-37-pg57-24-11-11�

ok i know this was not much...but i really want to know your response first...sooo that i can continue in a better way with RN scenes...right now i want to rush through this family reunion to continue in a lighter way later..

waiting for ur comments😊

Edited by rajeev fann - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
that was really nice update
saas-bahu team is really good
i was hoping raj room dekh ke behosh ho jayega.
but it was fun also
waiting for more RN scene
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Posted: 14 years ago
awesomeeeeeeeeee too good very nice part waitingggggg for next asap
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Posted: 14 years ago
sum of d conversation's on page 32 didnt happnd in d story na??

for example d 1st nd 2nd nd d blackboard in d room?????
Edited by tina_1234 - 14 years ago
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Originally posted by: tina_1234

sum of d conversation's on page 32 didnt happnd in d story na??


for example d 1st nd 2nd nd d blackboard in d room?????

no it's all from the story dear....i hv just done copy paste....u must hv missed some update
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Posted: 14 years ago
awesome update Raj's mom and Naina's scenes were fantastic.......
Please update soon with a long one.............................

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