MayUr OneShots (6) -Maybe-final(pg 43)- 11/09/11 - Page 28

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Posted: 14 years ago
Deeps this version did not read *wink*
i ll comment aram se
it needs lot of brain and Heart
Weekdays me i m out of heart re Lol

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Hey deeps
sabse pahle tere liye Jadu ki Jhappi

You are back from sanyas [not really]
but this made me and many others happy

you know the entire real story was beautiful and sad
i feel sad for her
not because she loves and he doesn't but the one doesn't
really not aware that he is losing someone very precious

and until he doesn't come to know i say he lost or found
i just want him to found her
give her one chance on the basis of existing relationship,
so she deserves atleast one chance

Lie not good but as they say "every thing is fair in love and war"
but in practical ,i really don't agree
and as long as she didnt hurt him though lied
he should listen her

"I regret taking up fakeness instead of honesty.

I regret being so rash and childish.

I regret every thing I did which today is being a hindrance in my own life.

All I wish is that he would forgive me for all the lies I said, I can't afford to lose the pre-existing relation due a mistake like this.

I surrender for every lie I said and every mistake I did."

above lines made me to think and feel the pain what she is going through ,though she was childish the intention was always pure and thats what i feel she is not wrong though she lied ,not all are perfect we all do mistakes and she did something to know whom she loved,i just want her to let him know her feelings whenever time permits her.

Confess and ask forgiveness for fakeness.

And she should not take any decision for the future because life goes on and time heals wound

it reduces with time i just want to read another part of this ,with the happiness on her face

Amazing job done !!!!!!!!!!!!👏

Tc & Luv,

Di

Edited by arunabehere - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
Beautiful emotional touchy os.It was more interesting wen i read tht its a real life story
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Posted: 14 years ago
awesoooome......
superb..........
wonderful OS........
loved it.......
thanx for the pm.........
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Posted: 14 years ago
I am with Nupur.....if I wud hav been in her place I wud hav done the same.
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Posted: 14 years ago
wow......this was fabulous.....thansk for the pm!
keep writing!
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Posted: 14 years ago
amazing os!!!
loved it!!😊
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Posted: 14 years ago
Deepika 🤗
Awesome story! This is totally fabulous! And the best part was probably the reality of it all. =]
This is a very interesting piece and absolutely wonderfully written! Brilliant writing! Keep it up!
And I hope this story continues in real life. =]
Love
Daania
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Posted: 14 years ago
aww im dissapointed not to get a pm..., but anyway

i love the way you write.....so...real. and haha i saw some influence from akki on the science thing, 😳
a real life based ff..woah how intriguing!.... well i think it's a real tough situation!, i think it was wrong to create a fake account, but....hmm i don't know what to suggest.....
ill let you know, if something comes in my mind!
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Posted: 14 years ago
Deeps... It was nice reading your OS after a veryyyyyyyyyyyy longgg time 😊... Nicely written...
About the question, creating a fake account and letting someone know about her emotions is wrong.. It wouldn't be wrong if she had sent an anonymous letter or message to him, letting him know about her feelings for him.. but Fake account.. I am really not in for this.. somehow, I feel and believe that a relationship should always start with truth and honesty.. you may hide your identity for a while and then reveal it, that's fine.. but faking.. is wrong.
Now update the second part soon...
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Posted: 14 years ago
Awesome os
loved it loadz
thanks 4 da pm

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