MayUr OneShots (6) -Maybe-final(pg 43)- 11/09/11

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Nikki

@dmgmjht4ever

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Posted: 14 years ago

#281

This was an amazing os. And I absolutely loved it. Did this happen to to a friend of yours...or you? ;) Honestly, I think the lie isn't that big and people always say "Be honest in relationships", but that's not always true. So whatever you think is right, that's what you should do.

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Archana

@a-little-hope

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Posted: 14 years ago

#282

Deeps... 🤗

What should I comment? You write so beautifully that my ordinary words can't describe the beauty of this OS.... and rest, you already know what I have to say....

Loved it Deeps...

Life is not a fairytale... but faith is what keeps the dreams alive...

Love u

Deeds

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Nirvrithi

@Nirvrithi

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Posted: 14 years ago

#283

res..

I know reserving doesnt make any sense ,when its after 6th page 😆

Still It is to remind myself that I owe a reply to u 😊

Ab office jaana hain - vapas aake edit karungi...

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Okay...I am back..So what were we talking about??

Oh..Got it... 😊 The OS was nice Deepika.. But I would like to see the second part too - even if its just out of imagination...

Coming to your question - I never support any kind of cheating.. In fact to the level of irritating others, I know. But can't help- mein aise hi hoon...

But here - the question is about expressing one's feelings... I cannot blame that girl - But again it entirely depends on the person at the receiving end.. I mean its upto Mayank that how he wants to take that kind of behaviour towards him.. If he takes it lightly , the action was not wrong. If he is hurt, yes- ofcourse it was wrong. Do not think I am giving the diplomatic answer - but this is what I feel 😊

Nivi Di

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MrsJaimeFraser

@MrsJaimeFraser

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Posted: 14 years ago

#284

Deepika...Debz here.............🤗🤗

Hope u remember me.............😃

Now-Girl-this is AMAZING,mind-blowing,awesome....!!!

life is seriously NOT a fairy-tale,n u tend to resort to the wrong ways at times when u desperately want something-more so,when that something happens to be LOVE.😳IDK-but somewhere my full sympathies with Nupur,k.. shouldn't call it my sympathy-my support-dunno why but i m with this girl here,n i completely identify her with me.i've myself taken a few hasty decisions-n the consequences..😳well.she truly love s that guy.,well,i know Mayank has been wronged by it,she shouldn't have don e those fake account n stuffs-but u see-SHE'S IN LOVE!! i don't know what i wud have done ,maybe d same thing-resorting to not-so- right ways😳.He shud hear her out and then..can't they get back??!!!plss....

and about the real persons-i sincerely hope the guy agrees n they get together-i can feel the girl's pinning for him(yes,i mean it)😊She loves him beyond evrything,otherwise she wouldn't have done something like this.

P.S-i m gonna read ur last 2 OS..before-"it happened ..."

and u write brilliantly-i have told u once earlier-n everything, every single word touches my heart.i guess u have watched this from close quarters maybe,hence the beauty n the emotions come out even better...

and yes-i NEED the pm...next...pukka..😃

Edited by Deblina_ArTi - 14 years ago

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Babaji Ka Thullu

@BabajiKaThullu

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Posted: 14 years ago

#285

hey its really vry nice yarrrrrrrr

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maria

@Maria.

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Posted: 14 years ago

#286

very beautiful os

very well written

do write more

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griffy.fz

@griffy.fz

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Posted: 14 years ago

#287

awwww lovely stories dear!!!....

really liked them....

hope u write more :)

rock on

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mysteriousmilli

@mysteriousmilli

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Posted: 14 years ago

#288

Mind blowing os.....
thanx 4 pm....

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AmyArTiMayUr

@AmyArTiMayUr

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Posted: 14 years ago

#289

Deepika it is the first time i am reading something you have written and i must say you write brilliantly😃😃😃

Loved the OS and would love to read a sequel...but as you said it is a true story and it will go on if anything really does happen between the two characters in real life😃😃

One-sided love..lols...interesting concept....okay ignore this....
let me get to your question...the fact that she used a fake id to get to know his feelings...i really cant judge whether it is really completely right or wrong...coz i see it this way...maybe she should have used her right id and gotten in touch with him...maybe he also likes her but is unsure of her feelings for him...she could have given it a try...everyone fears rejection but that should not stop someone from trying right??😃😃

On the other hand....well love makes someone do a lot of silly and stupid things that may seem weird and wrong later....but well it is love to be blamed for making the person think senselessly (if there is such a thing)..lols...but yeah, sometimes love makes us do things that we may regret doing or that we may feel we should not have done...but then there is always a chance to correct that mistake and go about things the right way....😃😃

Just my opinion.

Otherwise, a beautiful piece of writing😃

Amy😃

Edited by amyluvsmayur - 14 years ago