MayUr FF: With Or Without You (Ch.11 - Pg109) Fin.

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_ArTi4ever_

@_ArTi4ever_

Rocker

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Posted: 13 years ago

#751

beautifully encrypted...just one request...plzzz update this ff on a frequent basis...i wait 4 it day n night to hv a quick progression 4m the traumatic situation to a soothing one...plzzz dont take too much time to update the next chapter...its a kind request dear...

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parul_bansal

@parul_bansal

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#752

loved the part..

thanks 4 updating it...

awww wat to say mayank's harshness still going infront of my eyes..

it seems i cn directly see the things happen between mayank n nupur..

n my poor nupur how much she cn tolerate..

bt i liked ..the line u hv written..the picture that mayank used to hold while sleeping in the nursery was of no baby..bt nupur...😭

thanks 4 the pm

may god bless u

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Sania

@dynamic_doll

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#753

awesome update dear!

continue soon

nd thnx for the pm 😊

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Ally

@.PINK.

Inactive

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#754

plezz cont soon

really wanna read

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Sana

@L_Z_L_H_N

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#755

great

amazing FF keep on posting and P.M for sure

~sana~

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Archana

@a-little-hope

Sparkler

+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

#756

Time management skills seem a global issue these days. 😆 Not that, I'm making an excuse to write my comment after 4 days 😳 But well, uhm.. let's just say we both suck at time management.

However, this gift.. no matter how much belated it is.. it makes me very happy. For it is written with heart. It is dedicated to me because you know how much I love this FF. And I love you for this heart warming gift. You totally surprised me. 😳 Thank you so much Sweetheart. 🤗

This FF happens to be my favorite FF of all and it continues to remain your best of writings. I know you have felt blocked many times while writing this FF, but every time you write the next part of this, you connect to the story so easily and it shows. This update came after months, but you proved that you haven't lost the hold of your characters, neither have you lost the passion in this story. You know what... that's what is so amazing about you! You pour your heart into your characters and your story.

Every update of this FF has that "With or Without You" feeling. Every update till date screams Mayank and Nupur's pain... those powerful emotions you describe so effortlessly. Pain is the hardest thing to describe and it drains your body when you write such intense emotions, but you make it look so easy when you write. It feels like every scene is happening right in front of our eyes. Not every writer can do that. You are THAT good you know! Take a bow my girl, you are one exceptional writer in this forum. Period!

This update left me with heaviness in my head. My heart cried for Mayank.. I felt more for him than Nupur. He isn't a cruel person to blame Nupur for the loss of their child, he knows in his heart that it's not her fault, it was just an accident. But he is unable to channel his pain in any other way. He has lost his most beautiful possession and he is not able to grasp the loss completely.. he is angry at God.. he is angry at Nupur.. he is angry with every reason which snatched his child from him. Nupur here is actually coping up with the loss somehow... but he is just not able to. I feel for him... I believe that he needed her support more than she needed his.

It's so beautifully written.. their pain penetrating in each and every little detail that you wrote. The part I loved the most is when he kisses her and becomes unhealthy wild in his actions. But Nupur.. instead of letting his pain come out in his actions, instead of letting his anger burn into his passion.. she moved away from him and pushed him straight into the pit of more anger and hurt. You have described that part amazingly...I got this hard lump in the throat while reading it.

Last part where you wrote how Mayank could have done something.. how he could have told her...she was an idiot if she thought she could live away from him.. that part is what I totally understand about Mayank. He could have stopped her, he had a right. He could have done all that.. but he didn't. Because... he expected that she would understand him... he was expecting that she would know that her husband doesn't express what he really means to say and what he actually says is really just to hurt her... Only if she could have understood him better!!!

*sigh.. I love this FF.

I tell you... Bono would not find a beautiful interpretation of his song as good as this... I can't live with or without you...⭐️

Thank you for this unique B'day gift. Love you very much.

Edited by ButterflyEffect - 13 years ago

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ESHITA GHOSH

@Eshita_Sweety

Explorer

Posted: 13 years ago

#757

It really doesnt matter how long you take to update..but what matters is your writing skill..'STUPENDOUSLY FANTABULOUS'...Absolutely STUNNING...Havent read ur previous update of it as u started it in 2010..and i joined i-f in May 2011 and we became friends in January 2012!! :P :P :P
I Loved ur writing..continue it n Always PM me ur updates!
Sorry Boss,cudnt Like any of ur posts as m doin i-f thru cell now :(
Bye.