MayUr FF: With Or Without You (Ch.11 - Pg109) Fin.

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Mou.

@Mou.

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Posted: 13 years ago

#771

*sigh it ended...but it was a happy ending...or a happy beginning of a new life for Mayank & Nupur...so yeah i m happy...

two years f reading this FF & finally it came to an end...& like i always tell u akki , it was a pleasure reading this FF...like all ur other ffs...the deep intense emotions of this two characters Mayank & Nupur, u captured so well...when they were in pain , i felt their pain, when they were in love, i felt their love ...really good writing akki👍🏼

i m looking forward to ur other two ffs now, love u always!🤗

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Faria Ferdousi

@Faria.

Stunner

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Posted: 13 years ago

#772

Beautiful update.loved it as usual.

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Payal-15

@Payal-15

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Posted: 13 years ago

#773

Firstly, thanks a lot Akki for writing this story 🤗

Needless to mention, you write absolutely perfect...every update is complete in itself and leaves you something to think about...especially the casual way in which you write...that's something remarkable...thoughts flow in an easy way...and m so glad that you dont over justify any of MN's character as good or bad...grey shade is just perfectly fine...its real...we all are somewhere in between the definition of good and bad...and I like that you let them make mistakes, act like a jerk sometimes, be immature and still they are the most amazing people...that's how MN are supposed to be like naa😳

I really liked how you made Mayank confess...well it felt bad to see him in that condition but he was still so adorable there...how could Nupur not give him the chance again 😍

btw also loved Nupur...she had been an amazing woman in this FF...so much in control of herself...powerful...yet couldn't take in the dejection...I especially loved her😃

Do keep writing so...and keep rocking Akki...as you always do 🤗

Edited by Payal-15 - 12 years ago

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Sujata

@SujaLuvsMayur

Inactive

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Posted: 13 years ago

#774

very nice update.

very nice ending.

thanks for the pm.

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Anila

@-Anila-

Rocker

Posted: 13 years ago

#775

Edited my comment on pg.109..

plzz do have a look n to req too...😳

Akki SIS...

wanna ask u wud u now continue ur other ffs too plzzz

m dying to read "All u need is love" n "I Thee Wed" plzzz do continue dem too...

will be waiting for ur PM for dos ffs...

love u SIS...🤗

God bless u...😳

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mahek

@Star_001

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#776

this was a beautifuuly written story with full of emotions

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AWonderfulChaos

@AWonderfulChaos

Sparkler

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Posted: 13 years ago

#777

gosh i loved this one!! seriously very well written :) Aku u rock ! everythng was perfectly written :)

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Supriya

@-SupriyaluvsMN-

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Posted: 13 years ago

#778

Beautiful Akki! 👏
actually cried reading it!!!😭

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Fantasia.

@Fantasia.

Stunner

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Posted: 13 years ago

#779

ahhh!! Finally we have the end!
beautiful and fairy tale like! 😳

It was a wonderful story akki!, pain and emotions explained to the pro - Keep it up! 🤗