MayUr FF: With Or Without You (Ch.11 - Pg109) Fin. - Page 75

amazing part!!
it was really heart wrenching..brought tears to my eyes...
the way you write is superb! all the emotions can be felt through your writing!
waiting for next part..cont soon 😊

Beautiful and heart touching update
feelhng bad 4 mayur

Hey Akansha,u r a wonderful writer..u hav an inborn talent in ur writing dat just beholds d readers n displaces dem to a diferent but beautiful world f mayank n nupur..ur each ff whether AYNIL or I thee wed or with or without u is so beautifuly writen dat t manages to pulls d cords f my heart in ts own unique way..i just love d way u write each update puting in so much efort n time..love u yaar n a big JAPPI for such long n wonderful updates u write everytime...
Now abt dis update f with or without u,i m at loss f words to express how beautifully u hav depicted d turbulent emotions dat both mayank n nupur r going through at d loss f their unborn child..ur words touched my heart n den mayank's heated harsh words to nupur just brought tears to my eyes..it ws a heart wrenching update.
Waiting fr d next part f ur evry ff...
Bt i m eagerly waiting fr d next part f I thee wed please try to update t..
Thanx f d pm.
U r a born writer n ur writing touches my heart!!!

Nice update...😃

very sad update
i don't understand why people not actually say what they mean
why they didn't tell they want to do
life is so simple
why maynk can't say nupur baby is gone but you are with me i love you we can together make everthing right why can't he simply stop her
really it hurts..
but very well written emotions
and nice part
next time plz try to update soon

ahhh that was one painful update & hurt so bad...can't see them going through such a pain...plz clear all their misunderstanings & reunite them soon...anyways beautifully written ak...
but hey i didn't get any pm for this one maybe coz ive changed my username...plz plzzz don't forget to pm me ur updates as i love ur ff's...
& do continue soon...

OMG Aku..that was a great, heavy n heart wrenching update! Gosh, the pain...the hurt ...u portrayed it so well...n it came out so impactful that it left me in tears ! awesomely well written like always...and I really love the story...all cos of you..all cos the way u pen it down! so intense ! I really wanna read ahead...do cont as per ur busy tym..no issues on that...

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