MayUr FF: With Or Without You (Ch.11 - Pg109) Fin. - Page 6

ress

will read at night dear!
abhi i m going!
cya later
love ya

*edited*
i'll kill u
not bcoz mayur are having divorce and shilpa aunty is having heart attack

because u made me cry again! i'll seriously kill u.... ok no i won't

that was so well written

par problem kya hui
divorce?!?!?! 😲

ye kya hai? ye kyun hai??

ok, u can bring their wishes come true na.... plz do that asap.... na not asap.. but as the time needs... u know better :)

it was sad... but then life isn't a fairy tale.... i loved it.

awkwardness was well depicted:)

love

*d*

no p.s. this time... sorry...

THAT WAS SAD! 😭

PLZ KEEP THE NEXT PARTS HAPPY ONES!
PLZ

Originally posted by: sonali..

THAT WAS SAD! 😭

PLZ KEEP THE NEXT PARTS HAPPY ONES!
PLZ

Hey sonali.. Its the story.. you'll see how it goes.. But for the time being the parts will be a little serious... I am sorry if i didn't meet your expectations!!!!!

haey akansha.

Awsume update..

G8 start hun.

It vz lil sad dat mayur r planning 2 get divorce..

But im sure all wil b WELL.

Do continue soon.

Luv
*kulsum*

awesome part..!!!
its superb..
its little sad but i love your way of writing..
cont soon

Its just fabulous.

Hi Akshiiiiiiiiiii
sorry for late reply
wah a new ff
congrats dear
and ur first part was fabulous.
fantastic.
awesome as usual.
accha mujhe ek baat bata tu itni acchi kaise likhti hai.
yaar u r an awesome writer.
the way u describe myurs pov, i really loved it.
but what is this - they decided to divorce becoz they they thought that they r very different from each other
nehiiiiiii, aisa kabhi nehi ho sakta.
u cant apart my mayur
agar aisa hua then u will surely beaten by me, samjhi
dekh jo bhi ho mayur alag nehi hona chaiye
fabulous update
wonderful
loved it to the core
update soon

sad one.....

akshi lovely update
but sad i want to know why maynk think that nupur alwys run from her responsibilities and about his decision i want to know why he is doing this .....and about nupur she was the one .feeling the pain na.......i know maynk too feel the pain but different thoughts

update soon ok