MayUr FF: With Or Without You (Ch.11 - Pg109) Fin.

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nishi

@Nishithini

Dazzler

Posted: 15 years ago

#381

I am feeling so good after reading this update. this was your best update till date. after mayank's accident, when he was sitting in the car and all random thoughts were coming to his mind..that part was awesome. and the way you wrote their feelings...was ammmazing. finally mayank confessed his love. I'm so happy. loved this part.

continue soon.

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Beet

@Beet

Rocker

Posted: 15 years ago

#382

Akki 🤗

OMG! I am so mondo excited after reading your update. This is like the best update ever. *Ahhhh screams in happiness*

Gosh, this was magical Akki. I mean he finally confessed. And some where both of them realized again that they truly love each other..😳

Beautiful hun. Simply brilliant.

I loved this update loads. You have given me immense excitement out of this one...😍

Love you loads

-Daania

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dua

@dua22

Voyager

Posted: 15 years ago

#383

wow wonderful update.....

both of them care for each other but does not want to show

oh thank god he confessed.....

do cont soon

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_ArTi4ever_

@_ArTi4ever_

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 15 years ago

#384

i m speechless...awesome update yaar.plzzzzzzz continue soon..

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Senny

@Senny

Inactive

+ 2

Posted: 15 years ago

#385

Hey Akansha,

Wowwww! At last he said it. But that journey was hard and he said it when he was not in his senses, I hope he doesn't forget about it or else things might get more awkward and complicated nevertheless either possiblity I am sure it would be pulled off well. Amazinggggggggg chapter. the depth of their emotions were so well described, especially the way you started took me by surprise! Great job done, keep it up!

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fiza ahmed

@drfizaahmed

Stunner

+ 4

Posted: 15 years ago

#386

waooooooooooo its more than beautiful....plz add me to ur pm list .ur a beautiful writer

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Divya

@dbr_kmichi

Inactive

Posted: 15 years ago

#387

wow...that was an awesome update....god atlast mayank confessed...thats good...
do continue soon...😊

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Naina

@Kool_Naina

Navigator

+ 2

Posted: 15 years ago

#388

Hiiiiiiiiiiiii Aky
How r u?

Wooooooowwwwwwwwwww
update was superb,awesome,fantastic n emotional
Mayu tried to finish himself was a shock
Mayur love each other but they are so stubborn to confess
Both care for each other n understand the unspoken words
Finally Mayu confessed his love to Nupsi under influence of alcohol but hope their relationship gets better... w8ng for Nupsi answer....
do cont soon
thnx for pm

Luvs
Naina

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Pooja

@kweetrockstar

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 15 years ago

#389

wow
that was one haelluva part
ohsome
i really loved it too much Akansha
thanks for the pm

love
pooja

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Jiya

@Jiyyaa

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 15 years ago

#390

OMG !!!!! WOWOWOW!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Best Update ever!!!
Amazingggggggggggggggggg!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
I dont know what to say..... this was best!!!!!!!
I want Update!!!!!!!!!!!Now!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
I want Update!!!!!!!!!!!Now!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
I want Update!!!!!!!!!!!Now!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
I want Update!!!!!!!!!!!Now!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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I want Update!!!!!!!!!!!Now!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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I want Update!!!!!!!!!!!Now!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
I want Update!!!!!!!!!!!Now!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
I want Update!!!!!!!!!!!Now!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
I want Update!!!!!!!!!!!Now!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
I want Update!!!!!!!!!!!Now!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
I want Update!!!!!!!!!!!Now!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
I want Update!!!!!!!!!!!Now!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
I want Update!!!!!!!!!!!Now!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Im carving for your next update and Mayur Romance!!!!!!
Please Update Soon
Im gonna go read it again!!
Its just Fantastic!!!!!!!

Edited by Luv.MayUrArTi - 15 years ago

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