OMG.... this is a surprise... I thought you were busy.... hmm.. but finally you got time to update....😳
Check your PM...
I'll read this later... and comments will follow....
RES until then...
Muaaahhhhhhhhh!!!
EDIT:
Patience bears a sweet fruit...😃
So here is what I thought about this update....😳
A very very heart-wrenching update.... 😭😭
Again this update shows the intensity of feelings that you pour into your writings... it's surprising how well you are aware with such depth of feelings at this young age... you amaze me everytime....😳
The mountain of misunderstandings... and both running away without facing the truth... both in pain.... both in love... still both are hurting each other... *sigh*... why do some couples make it so hard... to accept that love concurs everything... and love means forgiving... love means caring.... 😍
You wrote so beautifully Akki.... I could feel the longingness and need in their eyes.... I could see the pain in Mayank's unshed controlled tears... and I could see Nupur's pain and concern when he is in pain..... her love and care for her husband overcoming her pain.... AMAZING...!!
I know people get to extremes of hurting themselves when heart-broken... it was painful to see Mayank loosing all the hopes to win Nupur back... and wanting to end it all... to put an end to the suffering.. to give up on his faith in love.... the accident....the drinking....the shattered pieces of glasses..... tragic... very painful Akki....
But I saw the hope when Nupur responded with care and concern for him... and he felt her love.. he felt her caring touch.... the strongest sign that she still loves him to death.... and he said it... he confessed.....
Lovely lovely update Sweetu...!!
And....umm... thanks for dedication of the update....again....!!
And thanks for 'Miffy'.... 
... God!! This is embarassing...*hiding face behind you*
Love U....🤗
p.s. I loved the use of song... madnoo...mashukoo... don't know the song/poem....
Edited by -Jess- - 15 years ago
