MayUr FF: With Or Without You (Ch.11 - Pg109) Fin.

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Archana

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Posted: 15 years ago

#401

spamming until you read my comments....🤣

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Archana

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Posted: 15 years ago

#402

Ab bachhi ki jaan logi kya?

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Archana

@a-little-hope

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Posted: 15 years ago

#403

Dearest Sweetu....🤗

A brand new MayUr VM..... on your favorite song... !!

Made specially for you.....by ME.....

With or Without you.... the song of the century... the song that connected us.... 😍😍😍

I love this song.... 😍😍....and I love your FF....😍😍..... you are an exceptional and very talented writer Akki....!!

I have picked up the theme of your FF for this VM... and I hope it justifies the feeling of 'With or Without You' in your FF....

You are the reason I'm still stuck at I-F.

You restored the smile on my face after Nupur's death.

You are a very loving and caring little sister that I can have.

You are a beautiful person inside and out. Always remain the genuine person that you are. Love Ya!!!

Ok... speech is over... you can stop that blushing...🤣🤣🤣

So no more wait....😛

Here comes the surrrrrprisssse....😃

[YOUTUBE]http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=gDktO9NC6wk[/YOUTUBE]

Direct Link - http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=gDktO9NC6wk

Love u..... Muaaahhhhhh !!!

yours Jess Di aka Miffy 😃

Edited by -Jess- - 15 years ago

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You-Know-Who

@You-Know-Who

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Posted: 15 years ago

#404

Originally posted by: -Jess-

Dearest Sweetu....🤗 Uh! Oh! Dun squeeze me! Just kidding! Hug returned with all my might and that means you'd have to fight for your breath!😉

A brand new MayUr VM..... on your favorite song... !!

Made specially for you.....by ME.By Miffy you mean? For sweetu? I love you!.🤗...

With or Without you.... the song of the century... the song that connected us.... 😍😍😍 Ah! With Or Without You!! Yup, precisely the song that connected us!

I love this song.... 😍😍....and I love your FF....😍😍..... you are an exceptional and very talented writer Akki....!!*blushes*😳 You are my inspiration. Every time i write With Or Without You, I think of you! How will you like it? How will you react and all that!!!!!

I have picked up the theme of your FF for this VM... and I hope it justifies the feeling of 'With or Without You' in your FF....

You are the reason I'm still stuck at I-F.

You restored the smile on my face after Nupur's death.

You are a very loving and caring little sister that I can have.

You are a beautiful person inside and out. Always remain the genuine person that you are. Love Ya!!!

Ok... speech is over... you can stop that blushing...🤣🤣🤣 God! how did you know?😲😳

So no more wait....😛

Here comes the surrrrrprisssse....😃

[YOUTUBE]http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=gDktO9NC6wk[/YOUTUBE]

Direct Link - http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=gDktO9NC6wk

Love u..... Muaaahhhhhh !!! I dunno what more to say! I think I'll go with "I Love You" again!😎

yours Jess Di aka Miffy 😃

Ha! *sighs*

Eight time! i am writing this after watching the VM eight time di!!! Seriously, every time i watch it, i forget what to comment and how to!!

Firstly, Thank you so much! Love you! Really! i dunno how to convey my gratitude...Not for this dedication(Kyunki "Mujhe Haq Hai"😆) But for coming into my life! Miffy you are a sweetheart!

Fine Fine!! *controls self* *sighs* I dont think my words are enough to express the beauty of this VM but I am going to comment coz i promised!😳 Seriously miffy, Its just perfect!

I love the way it started! The 'I love you' It bears so much pain! Just wow! That Fanaa scene...In which he removes her chunri from her face..It goes so well with the background music! And i love the change in the music there! Seriously i am not going to go on how i like the song, or else i'll never stop!

'See the stone set in your eyes!!' That very scene so apt and perfectly chosen!

The ego, the confusion, the scenes so well chosen!! Goes with the song perfectly di!

And then Mayank "waiting for you"....Ah! those candles behind! So symbolic...So perfect for his turmoil! the wait, the love, the pain, the ego...everything!

At 2.242..the "and you give yourself away' That scene i have loved it! For the passionate love and hate it shows! and it goes so well with the equally passionate song!!! And you give...And you give...And you give yourself away!!!!!!

I love all the scenes you chose for the ending music! that lingering music..its just a hymn there..not even music!!! And those passionate scenes go so well with the lyric-less song behind!!!!!!!!! Wow!!! You've correctly identified the passion this FF holds! i was skeptical whether that ever came out in my writings.....But it sure did through this VM! Whether it was the love, or the ego or the hate...everything came with passion..Just like the song!!!!!! Just a beautiful Vm di!!!!!

Lovely!!!! BTW i'll try to give the ending to this story the way you have ended this VM!😳☺️

This Vm is going to stay forever with me. This time not coz of Mayank and Nupur, (who sure are the two people who brought us together) but because of the person who made this...I cant even start to thank you miffy! Nonetheless, Thank you for loving me the way you do...with passion!! (And you know it goes without saying that I am straight!😉)

Love you Miffy!! Manifold!!!

Thank you for giving pictures to my prosaic words! Thank you!!! *sighs*!!!!!

*Miffy's sweetu*

Edited by ak12 - 15 years ago

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Mansi bhatia

@-Mansi-

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Posted: 15 years ago

#405

Ive jus been reading ur stories Akansha! 😛 This was really amazing..I read it all. Sometimes ego can be so harsh on a person's life na? Well written. I loved this part. Atleast in unconcious-ness he confessed! Jus hope everythin goes right. Pls do PM me :):)

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mayur_bigfan

@mayur_bigfan

Explorer

Posted: 15 years ago

#406

hey..
it was really a wonderful upd8!!
after all mayank confessed!!
w8ng for the nxt 1!!
but why didn't u pm me??
i was w8ng for ur pm..
plz pm me the nxt tym u upd8!!
thnx!!