Hum aapke hain kaun 4 Kshitij-kumud

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Posted: 19 years ago
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PART-1
Kshitij,kumud,simran study in
ST.Peter's college.Ks
is reserved,good at
studies.very handsum too.kumud is a
cheerful, naughty girl.she is
very optimistic.simran,the
rich,fashionable girl is her
friend.she wants her luver
2 be a dashing guy...who makes
her happy with money.so
she was sure that Ks wud
make her happy.tho she is
after him,he does'nt mind
her.so Simran is sad.kumud
decides 2 make Ks 2 fallin
luv with S.they all
go 4 excersion. during the
excursion,infront of every1
she teases ks-S as
luvers.S was shy &
happy.Ks becomes angry & he
complains it 2 the
principal Sr.Rose. Sr was
angry at kumud-simran. Sr:i
heard that u both always bunk
class. S:no sr,i was
not feeling well.so i did'nt
go 2 class. Ks:simran is
innocent.kumud is the trouble
maker. Sr:kumud,this is
my last warning,if u repeat
it,i'll send u out of the
college. kumud pretends 2 be
guilty:sorry Sr.i promise
u that from this moment
onwards i'll be the decent
student in this college. Sr
gets angry with kumud's
short skirt:what kind of dress
is this?2morrow onwards
be decent in ur dressing
too.it shud be a model 4
others' dressing. k :ok
Sr. when they go out of the
room,Ks smiles at kumud in
the spirit of
winning...she becomes angry.
the next day ppl felt
funny 2 see kumud cuming on a
bike in a diff dress-she
was dressed in the traditional
gujarati style.dark green
sari..black metal
ornaments.big nose ring.all
laugh.krumud go 2 each class 2
expose herself. Ks
cud'nt contol his laughter.
kumud goes 2 her
class:excuse me sir,may i get
in? the sir was surprised
2 see her dressing:whats this?
K:sorry sir,'m 10
minutes late. ppl in the class
laugh. sir:not that,ur
dressing..immediately Sr.rose
cumes:what's this funny
style? K:u only told me 2
wear a nice dress 2 be a
model 4 others.its nice no.i
luk nice in this
traditional look,right?
Sr:don't wear this 2 class plz,i
think its better 2 wear
shorts,atleast no 1 teases.
K:so u allowed 2 wear
shorts?very gud. she hugs the
Sr.Sr was wondered.






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Posted: 19 years ago
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It's fantastic....... 👏
Nice start....I jus can't wait...plz post soonnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnn
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Posted: 19 years ago
#3
PART-2.....Simran comes 2 kumud with a hot

news:kumud,as we thot kshitij is
not rich. K:what?

S:yes,Rocky enquired.
K:he must be mistaken.

S:no way..he is poor.
K:then why did he avoid

u?see his headweight. S:i
don't want that beggar

anymore. kumud jokes:u r a
model 2 luvers.how fast ur

luv got vanished! kumud & simran
go 2 the canteen where kshitij
was there. kumud looked
into his food:why,only a

few items?only ordinary
curries?i don't cum 2 the

canteen.but i bring diff
varieties of curries. oh,how

can a lower middle class boy
like u be luxurious...right

Kshitij Oberoi? she teases.Ks
loses his control &

slaps her.they got shocked.
Ks:our family was very

rich..u can't even imagine the
luxuries we had.but

papa's business failed & we
fell down.money can go fast
so
rich girls like shud not
tease others bcoz of that.

his eyes were full of tears.
annie blames him when

they were alone:see his
headweight eventho he is a

beggar?how dare he slap u?
K:i don't care about

that.but the insult i had..i
will never 4get that.

S:i'll tell rocky,he'll
bring some ppl 2 beat him

into a lifeless body. K:i
don't want his help.i no

what 2 be done.i'll show him
who i'm. she was determint.

there was a func going on in
their college. there were

entertainment programmes on
the stage. K comes &

announces:next item....is a
beautiful melody ...it'll be

sung by a gr8 singer...Kshitij Oberoi.Ks was

shocked. ku-simran were
laughing. K:lets see how

he'll be insulted b4 others.
Ks:plz friends,this is

announced without my
permission. K:no he's

lying.kshitij,its not fair2 quit
in the last moment.this
is
a kind of cheating. Ks
was hurt,but he did'nt

show it.he decides 2 beat
K:friends,i'm not a gud

singer,but i'll try. he takes
a violen from the audience
&
starts using it.ppl
hoot..also kumud-simran.Ks

starts singing it.every1
starts enjoying it. it was so

beautiful that kumud cud'nt
believe her ears. she

thinks:i did this 2 embarass
him.but i failed in that

how can i face him? kshitij's
song was really

touching.K cud'nt control
herself & she sings along

with him.he eyes got filled up
with tears without her

knowledge. she cud'nt control
it & runs away from the

stage. K cumes 2 no that
Kshitij is not able 2 pay

the exam fees.she feels
sympathy & she pays 4 him.
Ks gets money from his
friend & goes 2 pay.but he

was shocked 2 no that its paid
by kumud. he goes near

her:did u pay my fees?
K:yes. Ks:why?

K:otherwise u won't be able
2 appear 4 the

exam,afterall u r a gud
student. Ks gives her the

money:take it.that debt is
over.listen kumud,i may be

having problems..u don't hav 2
bother about that.don't

interfere in my affairs..ok?
he goes irritated. kumud

becomes sad.simran cumes with
an angry face:what were u

chatting with him? while he
was singing itself,i noticed
ur
face expression.what were
ur sentiments...why do u

luv him? K got
irritated:yes,why not? S:i
knew

that it will end up in luv.i
threw him away,so u don't

hav 2 luv the same person.
K:thats my wish.what all

stupid things did i do 4 u?i
irritated the poor kshitij a

lot.u were not luving him,u
were luving his money.when u

came 2 no about his financial
condition,u threw him.i

feel affection bcoz i feel
that he is facing the similar

situation i'm facing...Simran
was angry.she goes away.

kshitij,his mom saakshi,dadi were

sitting 2gether & having lunch
at home.Ks gets a ph

call.he was shocked.






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Posted: 19 years ago
#5
PART-3....the ph call informs that aryaman;kshitij's dad is
admitted in the hospital due 2
the suicide attempt.they
all go 2 the hospital.luckily
he was saved.ks goes
in search of his friend 4
money 2 pay the hospital
bill.he fails in that & comes
back 2 the hospital with a
tired face.he tells his mom
saakshi:mamma,i did'nt see my
friend 2 ask 4 money? saakshi
smiles:who is that
friend ?is it kumud? ks was
shocked:how do u no
kumud? S:she paid the bill.
kshitij cud'nt believe
:what? he goes 2 his dad's
room.there the cheerful
kumud was chatting with his
dad. after talking 2
her,Aryaman was relieved. A:u'r
friend cracks
jokes.after a long gap,i
laughed with full heart. Ks
looks at K seriously.
K thinks:kshitij may not
like my presense.
she:ok,then..i'm going...but aryaman
uncle,we shud face our life
easily.due 2 sum stupid
financial problems,we shud not
throw away our
life.understand? A:yes
beti,i'll not repeat this
blunder. K goes with a
smiling face. she winks at
Ks without others'
knowledge.Ks was embarassed.
later he meets her on the
way....K:how is ur dad?
Ks:he is ok..but plz don't pay
money again,i'll giv
the money which we've 2 giv u.
K:then giv now.
Ksgot upset. K:why u r not
saying anything?i
no that u hav no money.u can't
giv it in the recent
time. Ks puts his head down.
K:u don't hav 2
feel bad.remember when i used
2 irritate a lot,u used 2
advise me not 2 hav headweight
just bcoz i've money.u
hav told me that money will
cum & go...but education
will remain with us till the
end.so u study kshitij.after
scoring good marks,u wil get a
job.then u giv me the
money.i don't care if u giv
the money b4 that also. Ks smiles. Ks goes.when
K turns back she cud
see the funny sir.ravindar who
got when he questioned
about her gujarathi style of
dressing.he stares at
kumud. K thinks:why is he
looking at me like
this?usually he is not that
serious..she felt
strange.unexpectedly he laughs
in a funny way:finally u
fell in luv? K was
wondered. ravindar:nice
selection,ronit is a nice guy.
K smiles. he:he
will change u into a
disciplined girl. K becomes
shy.
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Posted: 19 years ago
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PART-4...2 ask 4 money,Ks goes 2 a rich man's
house.there he was shocked 2
see kumud as a servant.
when kumud goes out Ks asks
her:so u were wearing a
mask of a rich girl? K:i
did'nt.bcoz i don't hav
false prestige like u.i'm a
optimist.every1 in the
college knows that i'm not
rich. Ks becomes
embarrased. she:the diff
dresses i put & the diff
curries i bring r given by the
ladies of the houses
where i go 4 work.i bought my
bike with my own money.i'm
prowd of that. Ks:then how do u
get time 2 study?
Kumud gives her walk man.he
puts it.he was surprised 2
hear the lecture of the
lectures of the college. both of
them smile. Ks:i really admire
u kumud,i've 2 learn
a lot from u. she smiles. when
K starts walking
4ward,Ks calls her:college
life is going 2 get
over.after that we hav 2 meet
no? K:yes...sure...u
hav 2 giv me money no...they
laugh. Ks:let me ask u
1 thing.u r having financial
problems.then also ,why did
u spend money 4 me? K
did'nt no what 2 say.
Ks:hum aapke hain kaun? K
simply smiles:how cum
i no? she goes away with a
smiling face. Ks smiles.
then cumes a new character 2
the college.K gets
scared & she tries 2 hide
herself from him.who is he?
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Originally posted by: jasminerahul


Ks:hum aapke hain kaun?

Main batao Hone wale Husband/Wife

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Posted: 19 years ago
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Part-5......the man who scares kumud is none other than
Trishul.Trishul searches 4 kumud
& he fails in that &
goes.K was shivering & was
wet. she hides hersef in
ronit's empty class.rKs
cumes & catches her from the
back.thinking that its
T,she screams.Ks was
shocked:kumud,what
happened?why r u screaming? kumud
was relieved seeing ks.she
weeps:kshitij..she falls
into his arms.just 4 a moment
both of them 4get
themselves. they become
concious & they feel guilty.both
of them feel difficult 2 look
at each other.finally
Ks gets fed up of this
situation & talks 2 her:why r
u looking so dull
kumud?usually u r so cheerful.1st
time u r seen dull.what makes
u upset? K:i saw a
terrible figure.he came 2 our
college in search of me.he
won't do anything here,bcoz he
pretends 2 be decent b4
others.but i dared 2 see him.
Ks:who is he?
K:trishul. ks:who is he?
K:my only
brotherinlaw. she tells him
the story.Vidhi is her
luvly sister.they r like
friends. V falls in luv
with T,a middle class
guy.they were gr8 luvers,who
can't liv without each
other.they get married.T
becomes pkumud's dearest
jeeju.due 2 debt K loses
her house ,she & her mom goes
2 stay with V.her
motherinlaw was terrible who
always gossips about
V. vidhi gives b'th 2
a child.slowly slowly T
loses his interest in V
listening 2 his mom's
words.he started luving K.
K cries :now he is
after me kshitij.my poor
didi...she nos that.i don't want
2 see her cry.so i go 2 my
friend's house during
holidays.but trishul used 2 cum
there & make
problems..simran used 2 help me
.but now she hates me.i
don't no where 2 stay.i'm
scared 2 go 2 my house. i thot
of staying in a hostel.but ppl
start gossiping. Ks-kumud go out.K was shocked 2
see T there
b4 them. T:who is this guy?
K:my friend.
T:simply a friend?or...K:thats
none of ur
business. T:ur voice is cuming
up.may be the support
given by this guy. Ks:yes,i
support her 4 standing
against devils. T becomes
angry:what did u say? he
beats Ks.Ks beats him
back.in that mood T
tries 2 beat kumud.but Ks
cumes:don't touch herif
so,i'll not think twice 2
finish u. T:now i'm
going,but kumud can't escape
from me. he goes. K's
eyes got filled up with tears.
Ks:don't worry,he
won't desturb u again. K:bcoz
of me,u had 2 take
pain from him.he beat u
heavily. Ks:its ok..its not
a pain.it was a pleasure 2 be
adventorous like a hero 4
u. K smiles. Ks:kumud,can i
save u? P
:how? Ks:i can't do anything
now.bcoz i don't hav
anything.when i get a
job....if i call u ,will u cum
with me? K was shocked:due
2 sympathy,plz don't
take such big decision. Ks:its
not bcoz of
sympathy.when u r there with
me...i've relief...a kind
of feeling which can't be
explained.u r my
strenght...kumud...i'm
serious...really i luv u kumud....she
sMILes.she catches
Kshitij's hands.they dream
performing 2 the song
hum....hum tum.....
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