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Posted: 19 years ago
#11
PART-6......kumud-ks go 2 her house when trishul &
his mom had gone
sumwhere.kumud's mom khusum & vidhi
like Ks 4 his sweet
behaviour. Ks:i luv kumud
very much,our's is not an
ordinary campus romance. they
were shocked.K was tensed
about their reaction. Khusum & V smile. Ks:i'll
find a job soon after
the college.then will u allow
me 2 marry her? khusum's
eyes got filled up,she
smiles.Ks-kumud were
relieved. both of them go
out.V :i think ronit is
sincere.he won't be like
trishul.he'll look after her well.
K:when u get job only u'll
marry me no...how long
shud i wait? Ks smiles.
K:why can't u try 4
IAS? Ks laughs:4 that money
is needed.where is
money? K felt sad. she
starts saving money 4
Kshitij's IAS exam.she does'nt
tell this 2 him.she keeps
it as a suspense.
Vidhi:kumud,plz be careful.u
shud'nt feel later that u
wasted money 4 nothing.do u
want 2 spend this much money 4
kshitij? kumud loses her
control:yes,i want 2 spend 4
him.didi,u used 2 support
our luv.but what happened now?
V:still i'm not
against ur luv.but sumthing
makes me tensed. K:i no
kshitij well.every1 won;t be
like ur hubby. V
becomes sad.K feels
sorry:didi,i did'nt tell like
this 2 hurt.i just expressed
what i felt.sorry didi...
V:u did'nt tell
anything wrong...she hugs kumud.
jasminerahul thumbnail
Posted: 19 years ago
#12
part-7.....the college life get over.kumud tells Ks
2
go ahead with IAS exam.
Ks:but money is a problem.

K:u don't worry about
that.i've saved money 4 that.
Ks was shocked:kumud,u
did this much 4 me?

kumud,no...i can't...K:why?u
hav complex 2 take it

from me.Ks:kumud,i don't want
2 trouble u in the

name of luv.i no ur effort 2
earn money.i shud not

exploit u if i luv u.
K:...if u really luv me,u

shud accept it. Ks's eyes
rose up. he accepts it
&
go 2 write the exam.K
waits 4 him 2 return.she

wears a yellow sari & looks at
the mirror.she feels that

Ks cumes from the back &
carries her around.she

becomes shy. she goes out &
sits near a small river.she

hears Ks's voice.she was
surprised 2 see

him:kshitij,when did u cum?
Ks:2day

morning.immediately i came
here.vidhi didi said that u

r
here.1st time i'm seeing u
in a proper sari.u look gr8
in
this sari. K
smiles:oh,this river is a
hinder.i

want 2 cum near 2 u.but i
don't no how 2 cross it.i

dunno swimming. he:its ok.he
walks & swims & cumes 2

kumud.unexpectedly he takes
her in his arms & walks

around.K was
thrilled:kshitij,actually i
dreamt of

u.u carried me like this.
he:really? she stands down.

K:how was ur exam? Ks:no
hope. she becomes

dull:why?udid'nt study?
he:ya,but others were more

brilliant. K:i'm sure that
god will hear my

prayer.u'll win. Ks
smiles:kumud,nobody has dun
this

much 4 me like u. he hugs her.



jasminerahul thumbnail
Posted: 19 years ago
#13
part-8...while kumud was sitting in her house,she hears
Kshi calling from
outside:kumudddddddd...K was

surpised 2 see him there.
Ks:the result came.i

won..K was so happy that
she 4got everything &

hugged him.this was seen by
trishul's tashu. she thinks:let

Trishul cum back after his
trip.i'l tell him

everything.these stupid girls'
plans will be spoiled.

she laughs. K goes out in
search of job.but she

fails.she was tired & cumes
back in the evening. she was

dull:my efforts did'nt
work.did'nt get any job.

khusum:kumud,there is a
sweet news 4 u.it'll make u
4get

this worry. K was anxious
2 no. vidhi smiles.

K:i don't hav the patience 2
wait anymore.plz tell

me..r u all teasing me?
mom:never! V:here sum

ppl came.kshitij's parents & his
dadi. K was

surprised. V:they asked
whether we'll giv u 2

them. they want u & kshitij 2
get married. K becomes

shy. she runs away...dreams
about ks...song in which

they perform:tum pass
aaye......Tashu tells
him

whatever happened here
concerning Ks_k.he

becomes angry & he beats
vidhi.mom cud'nt save her.

V:i no why u r angry.u
won't get kumud,thats

why.. T:yes,i want
kumud.i don't leave her 4 that


stupid kshitij. V:kshitij
is not stupid.he is so nice

that he luves kumud very
much.he'll save her from this

hell. k comes hearing
this.her eyes got filled up

with tears.T beats
vidhi again. K cud'nt

tolerate it. she shouts at
A:if u beat my sister

again,honestly i'll die.
T stops beating
her:ok,but

don't dream about ur wedding
with kshitij.its not going 2

happen. he goes out.
K-V-khusum start

crying.they hug each. K

cud'nt tolerate this & she
shouts at tashu:i no that u

torture my mom & sister.if u
repeat it,u'll see my true

color.i'll break u into
pieces.i'm not like didi 2

tolerate everything. she
pretends that she's going 2

beat her.that lady got scared.


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Posted: 19 years ago
#14
Wowwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww.....
yeh howi na baat... 😆
jasminerahul thumbnail
Posted: 19 years ago
#15
part-9...Kumud goes 2 kshitij's house 4 the party which
is conducted 2 celebrate
Ks's success.she was treated
well by Ks & his family.but
when other guests cum
they all go 2 them. then cumes
Ks's childhood
friend;the rich kali.she
talks 2him very freely.K
did'nt lke the freedom she was
thing 2 him.K feels
lonely.she begins 2 go.but
unexpectedly Ks hold her
hand.she feels very happy. but
she goes & stands at the
verandah.ks cumes:kumud,why
r u standing here?cum &
enjoy the party. K:no kshitij,i
don't hav any mood.
Ks:i no kumud,u feel isolated
here.but don't feel
like that as long as i'm
alive. his words were touching
2 her. she:kshitij,will u luv me
4ever? he:ofcourse.
she:but seeing my sister's
life i doubt about it.b4
marriage didi& jeeju were so
close that they were even
willing 2 die 4 each other.but
now he wants only her 2
die. Ks:all the men r not like
trishul. she:i no ..i
trust u,i no that u'll never
be another trishul.
Ks:kumud,if i die also i'll
continue luving u.
she:plz don't talk about
death.bcoz i want u 2 be alive
4 me.u r my breath. Ks
smiles. K:i'm so happy
2hear ur sincere words..if we
were alnoe i wud've kissed
u. Ks:thats ok,no 1 will
see,giv me a kiss. K
becomes shy & smiles:no
way....she runs away from
him.his eyes follows her &
smiles. Ks's family hav
sum debt left.his dad Aryaman
tells:there is only 1 way 2
escape. Ks:whats that? I:u hav
2 marry kali,only
her money can save us. Ks was shocked.
hp123 thumbnail
Posted: 19 years ago
#16
aww..dont make kshitij marry kali!!!that was really good!!cont soon!!
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Posted: 19 years ago
#17
ohhhhhhhhhhh don't take more tests of these lovers.
plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz 😭 😭 😭
jasminerahul thumbnail
Posted: 19 years ago
#18

PART-10...Ks loses his control:papa,how cud u ignore
kumud?u 4got what he has dun 2
us?she is the reason why
i'm here now. dad:i no
that,but our
circumstance..Ks:i don't want 2
hear anything.
dadi:kshitij is rite.he shud'nt
cheat kumud.Ks
reveals his luv 4 kumud 2
kali.kali was very sad:its
ok kshitij.i understand.i'm fond
of u,bcoz of ur true luv
4 kumud.but plz see me as ur
gud friend. Ks:i always
saw u like that.still i'm.
mandy smiles:thank u kshitij.so
a gud friend shud help the
friend when he is in
need.rite?so i'll giv u sum
money.ur debt will be over.
Ks was shocked. K:don't be
shocked kshitij.4 this
money only ur dad forced u 2
marry me.but i'm telling u
that u don'r hav 2 marry me 4
this.its just a friend'd
help. he:thanks 4 ur big heart
kali.but i can't recieve
it. K:thats ur complex
kshitij.if u don't pay
money,u'll lose
everything..then ho can u bring kumud 2
ur life?she'll suffer along
with u.u want 2 see it?
Ks:no..i won't allow her 2
suffer. K:then u
recieve this money. Ks
accepts her money. khusum cumes 2 see
Ks:trishul is becoming really
cruel.he won't allow 2 conduct
this wedding.he will
not be there 4 2 days.b4 he
cumes back plz take kumud
away. khusum cries. Ks:tell
kumud 2 get ready.i'll
cum 2mrrow 2 take her home.
khusum becomes happy. tashu finds it out & informs
him.kumud was getting
ready.she hears the sound of a
vehcle:kshitij has cum.but
unfortunately it was not
Ks,but trishul.
jasminerahul thumbnail
Posted: 19 years ago
#19
pART-11..Trishul shouts at kumud:what do u think of me?u


thot u can easily fool me?let
kshitij cum.i'll kill him.i

won't allow u 2 go with him.
K got scared. he goes

near vidhi:u thot u can
save ur sister?

V:yes,she'll be saved.u
cannot do anything.when

i'm alive u won't get her.
T:so that means i won't

get kumud if u r alive..then
i'll kill u.then i'll get

kumud no. T beats V
heavily.kumud-khusum

cud'nt save her. vidhi's
situation was really

dangerous.so K takes a
knife & stabbed him.ppl were

shocked.K screams. Ks
reached.he did'nt

understand anything. K
cries:i killed trishul. Ks

was shocked. K:if u had cum
a little more

earlier,this wud'nt hav
happened. Ks was really

upset. K:u go kshitij.god
does'nt like us living

2gether.u marry kali.don't
spoil our life.u go

kshitij..plz giv me ur fav
violen.thats enuff 4 me 4 ur

presense.but in jail i dunno
whether they'll allow me 2

carry.go kshitij...but plz don't
say 'gud-bye'.i can't

bear it. Ks:kumud.. suddenly
she falls into Ks's

arms. she:u shud not cum 2 see
me 2 the jail.don't see
me
in that situation.sumtimes
i won't be seen alive

there. Ks:kumud,how can i liv
without u? he hugs her

tightly. Ks sees T's
hand moving slightly. Ks:trishul
is not dead.we'll take
him 2 the hospital.

K:no let him die.otherwise
he won't giv us piece.

Ks:r u crazy?
V:kshitij,we'll take him
2 the

hospital. K:u r mad.he'll
kill u. V:i don't

want him 2 die,not bcoz i luv
him.bcoz if he dies,u'll
be
in jail.u'll miss a happy
life.i won't u 2 be happy
in
Ks's hands. K was
touched by that. T gets

V

stares at him. T:i tried
2 kill u.then also u saved

me? V:that's not bcoz
of my luv. T becomes

sad:i won't destroy kumud's
life.let her go with
kshitij.kumud,i'll be ur old
jeeju.u can trust me this

time. V:i can't trust
u. T:i no that.but giv me

chance..2day onwards i'll be
ur faithful husband,i

promise. he catches V's
hand.she gets relieved.

T:kumud,thanku 4
teaching me a lesson.all these
days
i
was not conscious.now with
ur punishment i think i've
a
change. Ks-K smile.they
get married & hav a

happy life. THE END.
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#20
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