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Posted: 15 years ago
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cute part...................sujal is very protective of kashish and he bought her bangles...................and the last scene was cute..................sujal wah she just asked the person's name aur janab ne describe karne laga.................cont soon dear..................
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Part 6:

they came back into senses when people started clapping for them because they stood still,facing each other gazing into each other eyes...both of them felt a bit shy and looked away from each other...they heard people talking

"kinni sohni jori hay donon kee...aisa lagta hay jannat se hoor utar ker aayi hay"

"munda vee tay daikho naa...ghabroo jawan...dolay sholay daikho"

Sujal's biceps were bulging out but he didn't look muscular...he had a tough built

"larrka larrki alag alag chal rehay hain...lagta hay koi masla hay"

"masla kiya ho sakta hay?...larrka larrki ne abhi tak piyar ka izhaar nahin kiya hogaa"

"piyar ka izhaar? daikh ker tau lag rehaa hay keh izhaar tau door,,donon ne apnay aap se bhee chupaaya hogaa..daikho tau sahih,,,apas main bhee nazrain nahin mila rehay aur khud bhee idhar udhar daikh rehay hain"

"aray bhai log! kion aap log inn keh peechay parr gaye hain...shehar se aaye huay lagtay hain...inn bechaaron ko tang tau mat kero..humaray ulfatnagar keh mehmaam hain yeh" and elderly lady comes to their rescue

"Shukriya Khala ji!" said Sujal and tried to walk away while Kashish was trying to ignore Sujal and looked at the bangle store

Sujal caught up on Kashish while she was selecting bangles for herself...

"Bhai Sahab! woh silver waali choori dikhaaiye gaa" and Sujal told the salesman not to show the bangle by nodding his head...it was the same shop where Sujal had bought the same silver bangle but he didn't want the salesman to sell it to Kashish...so salesman made an excuse

"muaaf kerna bibi ji! main nahin dikha sakta...woh aakhri choori hay jo display per lagi huee hay aur abhi aur maal aana hay"

"Oh acha! koi baat nahin,,,woh kaanch kee chooriyan dikha jo keh laal aur kalay rang main hain" Kashish said

Sujal could feel the dejected voice of Kashish as he knew very well how much she liked silver bangles as they make sounds as if saat surr ikathay ho rehay hon....Don't worry kashish! u will get these bangles and when I will be the one giving it to you then may be I can see what you feel for me only if u let your face do the talking for you....
Sometimes Kashish becomes a closed book and no matter how hard Sujal tries, he can't get through the cover and sometimes Kashish woh phool ban jaati hay jiss kee khusboo door se hee mehsoos ho jaati hay...kiya hay yeh larrki? this last sentence has been a constant part of Sujal's train of thoughts...

Anyways,Kashish selected some beautiful bangles and paid for them..then both started walking towards Kashish's medical camp..and Kashish thought : what a boy Sujal is,,,,did not even offer to pay for my bangles...itna rookha,itna sakht,itna be-zaar,itna kharoos bhee koi hota hay...hunh! aisa lagta hay jaisay apnay aagay kisi ko kuch samajhta hee na ho,,,per phir kabhi kabhi itna sweet kiyon ho jaata hay...itni care kiyon kernay lag jaata hay..aur kabhi kabhi iss kee nazrain,,,,,,,,,ufffffffffff!kiya kuch nahin hota iss kee nazron main....aisa lagta hay jaisay yeh mujhe ankhon hee ankhon main samana chahta ho...uss kee ankhain itna bolti hain keh mujhe lagta hay uss ko bolnay kee zaroorat hee nahin hay..aur kabhi kabhi uss kee ankhon main aik hayraani nazar aati hay...jaisay woh aik dum shocked huaa ho kisi baat per...lekin main uss kee ankhon main itna kion jhaankti hoon? aaj tak kabhi kisi larrkay kee taraf itna attract nahin huee aur agar koi larrka mujh se free honay kee koshsih kerta hay tau phir bhayya hain naa...khe khe khe khe...aur woh khud hee apni baat per hans parri

tabhi sujal ne murr ker daikha and he just kept on looking on how innocent her laugh was..he was mesmerized by her sweet laugh...he just kept on looking and bumped into a pole...and then Kashish burst into laughter..it was uncontrollable...she had tears in her eyes..because it was so funny....Sujal was sitting on the ground holding his head...which showed a clear bruise...

Kashish sat by his side

"Awwwwnnnnnnnn ACP sahab! kiya huaa? takra gaye? ankhain kahan theen aur dhayan kahan? kiya soch rehay thay jinaab?"

Dil main tau aaya keh sujal keh day keh tumhain soch rehaa thaa per chup rehaa

"kuch nahin yaar! bus aisay hee idhar udhar nazaray daikh reha thaa aur samnay pole aagaya..pata hee nahin chala"

"nazaray hmmmmmm...haan bhayee! rangeen aanchal yahan wahan urr rehay hon tau kis ka dil keray gaa seedha chalnay ko"

Sujal understood her taunt

"Kashish kee bachiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiii...thehro main tumhain batata hoon keh kis ka aanchal mujhe disturb ker rehaa hay?"

Both of them started running right in the middle of the street..Kashish was ahead and Sujal was trying to catch her...they didn't see a bull-cart coming their way which was full of hay and little did they realize was that they fall on hay...Sujal under and Kashish on top of him....both of them had an eye-lock...and in one of the near music shop,this song was going on:

Mmmm aaahhh heeeeyy ohhh hooo
Baitein rahon, khayalon mein yun hi
Ulje rahe, sawalo mein yun hi
Mmm kitni batein hai jo
Kehna paye inko
Hum toh na the is tarah
(Ohhh ohhhhhhoooo
Ankhon hi ankhon mein yun)
Khoye rahe

Mmmohhooo
Ra ra ra ohhoo hooo
Bas tumko dehke, dekhte hi rahe
Ruk jaye lamhe sabhi, jaatey huye
Kya tumse kehde aur kya na kahe
Tum hi samjhlo sabhi, hai kaash ke
Bas yeh tamanna hai
Dil jo apna hai, usko mil jao tum
Ab na khayalo mein, na sawalon mein
Bahon mein aao tum
(Ohhh ohhhhhhoooo ohh hooo
Ankhon hi ankhon mein yun)
Khoye rahe
Yehhhh….

Chand sitare saare benoor theey
Tumse mile toh sabhi, roshan huye
Yeh sab nazare phir mile na mile
Ek do kadam hi sahi, mil kar chale
Kal kisne dekha hai, kya barosa hai
Rehana jaye gile,
Yehi ipthda bhi hai, inthaa bhi hai
Hai mohaabat yeh
(Ohhh ohhhhhhoooo ohh hooo
Ankhon hi ankhon mein yun)
Khoye rahe, khoye rahe
Khoye raheee……

and then all of a sudden..lightning striked and Kashish hugged Sujal tightly...still in the hay..not caring about what's happening around...both of them were immersed into each other arms as if there is no end...Sujal kee bahon main aatay saath kee kashish ko aik anjana sa ehsaas huaa jo iss se pehle kabhi nahin huaa thaa...aik protection ka ehsas.aik softness ka ehsaas.aik mohabbat ka hisaar....whattttttt! Kashish thought...Am I in love with Sujal....nahin nahin! yeh nahin ho sakta...I can't fall in love and that too with a stranger...Kashish tried to unlock their hug but Sujal just wanted to hold her forever and never leave her again...Sujal felt as if the entire world is in his arms...he was feeling so high but before he could mess up with the ambience...he loosened his grip...both of them felt a bit awkward and moved away from each other....
but then nature had its own plans...soon the light drizzle turned into a heavy downpour and both of them had to find a place to hide...
but kashish was kashish

She just walked out into the rain...donon haathon ko khol ker baarish kee boondon ko mehsoos kertay huay Kashish keh chehray per aik anokhi khushi thee..aur sujal ka dil chah rehaa thaa keh barish hoti rehay aur woh kashish ko yunhi daikhta rehay magar phir khayal aaya keh kaheen beemaar na ho jaye...

"Kashish! shade keh neechay aajao,,beemaar parr jaao gee...tum khud doctor ho,,,acha samajh sakti ho"

"Doctor honay ke yeh matlab thori hay keh main life enjoy na keroon...barish main nahanay ka apna maza hay"

"Kashish please...samjho na yaar ! tumhain thand lag jaye gee tau mujhe hee tau tumhari care kerna parray gee"

"achaaaaaaaaa! tau tum iss wajah se keh rehay thay warna tumhain meri parwa nahin hay...bus apnay aaraam se matlab hay,,,jaao matlabi insaan,,,main nahin aati shade main"

"aray baba! main tau mazaaq ker rehaa thaaa..per sach main sardi lag gayee tau kon keray gaa tumhara ilaaj ,,yahan per aik tum hee tau doctor ho"

"haan tau khud ker loon gee apnay ilaaj..tum baitho sookhay sarray huay karailay"

"kiya kaha? main karaila? tau tum kiya ho?"

"mujhe pata hay,,main ik teekhi mirch hoon"

"mirch nahin ho tum poora mirchon ka dabba ho..tauba tauba kitni tayz zaban chal rahi hay tumhari..sharam nahin aati...aik jawan larrkay se zaban chalatay huay"

"tum mujhe baaton main uljha ker majboor nahi ker saktay keh main itni piyari see barish ko chorr ker tumharay uss puranay shade keh neechay aajaaon"

"aray main kahan uljha raha hoon per sach bataao tumhain waqai sharam nahin aati kiya?"

"kiyon? mujhe sharam na aanay main tumhain kiya problem hay?"

and then Sujal realised that because of rain..Kashish's clothes were totally wet and she was getting transparent...he could not bear it so stepped out in the rain and he covered her up with his jacket...earlier he was not wearing his jacket but just tied around his waist...
Kashish did not realise why he did that and that too with such a stern look...later she realized that it was her clothes..she suddenly felt a sense of proud that Sujal is her man...OMG! her man? am I falling for him? Oh God! please help me understand this...otherwise I will go mad...

"Kashish! main ne tum se kaha bhee tha keh mat jaao baarish main,per tum meri sunti kahan ho? ab chalo,main tumhain camp tak chorr doon"

"per camp tau mere assistants band ker keh chalay gaye wapis base per...main ne hee unhain kaha thaa coz patients tau aa nahin rehay thay aur mujhe bhee bhook lagi huee thee tau o told them to go aur phir main ne tau tumharay saath hee wapis aana thaa naa?

"mere saath? Kashish! are you alright..abhi kuch dayr pehle tau jhagra ker rahi theen aur ab itni sweet batain"

"Sujal! tum kiya kabhi khamoshi kee zaban nahin samajh saktay,,,larrki jo bolay zaroori tau nahin keh jaisa woh feel ker rahi hay,waisa hee bolay"

"acha phir kaisay bolti hay larrki"

Kashish didn't realize that Sujal's hands were still wrapped around her shoulders and both of them were walking in the rain towards the shade

"larrki ka jo dil hota hay naa Sujal,,,woh aik band darwazay kee tarah hota hay,kabhi kabhi koi aik aaker uss ko khol tau sakta hay per ander jhank nahin sakta"

"kiya behki behki baatain ker rahi ho? dil,darwaza...tum ne kal raat koi movie tau nahin daikhi? nahin nahin tum ne movie nahin daikhi coz kal raat ko tau hum base per thay? phir kiya ho gaya hay? Kashishhhhhhh,,,kaheen aisa tau nahin keh sir per mere chot lagi ho aur asar tum per ho gaya ho?

"Sujallllllllllllll! mazaaq nahin kero...khayr janay do! tum nahin samjho gay"

"Kashish! tum kuch bolo aur main na samjhoon,,,i don't think its possible!"

"acha! ab kon bol rehaa hay dialouge"

"acha baba! kaan pakray..muaafi day do"

she didn't even realise and they were under the shade...still in his arms..kashish looked up to him and Sujal realised he was still holding her..he just let her off...both of them stood at the opposite ends...with only the sound of the rain between them...both of them were wet...but they didn't care...they were just standing opposite looking lost into each other's eyes...when they heard of a gun shot..............
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Posted: 15 years ago
#33
wow very sweet cute romantic part dear.....................the dialogues are so lovely......................post the next part soon.....................gun shot part is shocking.....................cont soon...................
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Hey folks
Apologies for late reply
was busy with sisters today...enjoyed friendships day with them....
tomorrow will be a longer part and will move the story forward !


Part 7:
the gun shot startled Sujal and Kashish and both jumped from their places...Kashish became really scared and moved closer to Sujal...She held him by his arm and looking around as if someone will come and just take her away..Sujal looked at her and then forgot to change his gaze....
Kashish kee geeeli lattain uss keh chehray ko chu rahi theen,uss kee hirni jaisee ankhain khoff keh maaray idhar udhar daikh rahi theen,,uss keh khubsoorat chehray per thori see ghabraahat daikh ker majbooran Sujal ko bolna parra :

"Kashish! kiya huaa? Itna darr kiiyon rahi ho?"

"Sujal! tum ne abhi gunshot suna nahin kiya? aur phir shaam bhee honay ko hay?"

"aray baba! darti kiyon ho? ho sakta hay yahan per pahaari janwer hotay hon,,,aur issi liye kisi ne goli maar keh kisi jaanwer ko maara ho?"

"nahin Sujal! mujhe bohat darr lag rehaa hay...zaroor koi anhoni huee hay kaheen per"

"acha ghabraao nahin...main baahir jaa ker daikhta hoon"

"nahin Sujal! tum baahir nahin jaao gay...tum mujhe chorr ker kaheen bhee nahin jaao gay" Kashish screamed...she couldn't let Sujal go away from her

"Kashish! be brave yaar...kuch nahin hota...and then I am an ACP..I have been trained to face bullets" Sujal tried to calm her down as he just wanted to go out and check that everything is fine

"Sujal! tum ziyadah door nahin jaao gay please..."

"Aray! (Sujal was tempted to say meri jaan) kuch nahin hogaa mujhe aur main bus baahir nikal ker idhar udhar nazar ghuma ker wapis aajaaon gaa"

Sujal was so delighted within as he found someone who ACTUALLY cared for him...He had never thought that he would come across someone totally a stranger who would make him feel loved and cared...He couldn't have thank God more than this...anyways! he stepped out and he felt as if someone was staring at him...he walked around the shade but found no-one...he walked back into the shade

"See Kashish! i told you...koi bhee nahin hay baahir! tum bekaar main parayshaan ho rahi ho"

"Nahin Sujal! mujhe kabhi weham nahin hota...khayr"

"its okay Kashish! chalo ab wapis chaltay hain...baarish bhee lagta hay ruk gayee hay"

"Haan chalo! OUCH"

"kiya huaa Kashish?"

"lagta hay sprain ho gaya jab tumharay peechay bhaag rahi thee...uss waqt tau itna dard nahin huaa per ab bohat dard ho rehaa hay"

"UFFFFFFFFFFFo Kashish! tum bhee na pagal ho..Doctor ho ker ouch kerti ho?"

"tum phir mere doctor honay keh peechay parr gaye ho? main ne kabhi tumhain taunt kiya keh tum ACP ho aur yeh aur woh"

"acha baba! I am sorry...lo kaan pakray...chalo ab utho! thehro main tumhary help kerta hoon"

"Thanks Sujal...sometimes you are really sweet"

Sujal helped her getting up and she limped on her right side...Sujal couldn't see her in pain and just lifted her...as soon as she got lifted Kashish got a pleasant shock...she quietly wrapped her arms around Sujal's neck and laid her head on his shoulder...and just closed her eyes...she wanted to feel the touch of her man......Oh God! my thoughts are again side-tracking...why do I take Sujal as my man...what if he does not think like that....no that can't happen because a woman can clearly feel what man's eyes are saying...OH GOD! please help me...I am getting tired of this battle now....

Preview :

"OH bhagwan! inn mehmaanon keh liye koi lassi paani lay aa...aur daikh inn keh sonay ka kamra bhee theek ker day"
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Posted: 15 years ago
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nice part...................sujal and kashish care for each other and happy to be together..................when will they confess?????????? the preview looks interesting.................cont soon dear...................
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Part 8:
Sujal helped her getting up and she limped on her right side...Sujal couldn't see her in pain and just lifted her...as soon as she got lifted Kashish got a pleasant shock...she quietly wrapped her arms around Sujal's neck and laid her head on his shoulder...and just closed her eyes...she wanted to feel the touch of her man......Oh God! my thoughts are again side-tracking...why do I take Sujal as my man...what if he does not think like that....no that can't happen because a woman can clearly feel what man's eyes are saying...OH GOD! please help me...I am getting tired of this battle now....

" I know you can't walk Kashish so please don't feel awkward...okay?"

"I am not heavy naa?" asked Kashish innocently

Haye iss saadgi peh kon na mara jaye...Sujal dil main soch ker reh gaya...aur muskuranay laga..

"muskura kiyon rehay ho Sujal? main ne koi lateefa sunaya kiya?"

"main tumhari innocence per muskura rehaa hoon...tum itni cute aur sweet kaisay hosakti ho?"

Sujal had held her in his arms and was taking careful steps so as to not fall...he was carrying her towards the basti becasue they needed a place to stay at night...baaton baaton main aur hanstay khailtay din kab dhal gaya pata hee nahin chala aur ab raat main yeh log base camp per jaanay ka soch bhee nahin saktay thay tau they had to find a place to stay...

"main jitni shakal se masoom nazar aati hoon,,,utni hoon nahin...bach ker rehna mujh se"

"uf uf uf! tum mujhe darra rahi ho kiya?"

"tum khud hee bhoot ho tau tumhain kon dara sakta hay?"

"Kashish! tum bhool rahi ho keh tum iss waqt meri bahon main ho,,,main chahoon tau kuch bhee ker sakta hoon"

"kuch bhee......" kashish winked at him

"Kashishhhhhhh! main mazaaq nahin ker rehaa...tum agar mujhe bhoot bhoot keh ker chayrti raheen tau main tumhain gira doon gaa"

"hahahaha...tum mujhe giraao gay? tum giraa hee nahin saktay"

"Kashish! don't challenge me"

"achaaaaaaa! aisee baat hay tau chalo giraao mujhe phir"

"Kashish! tum ne acha nahin kiya,,,ab daikhna tum"...

Soon Sujal found a mudpile and he just landed himself there...though still holding Kashish in his arms......

"Sujalllllllllllllllllllllll!" Kashish screamed because she relaized that Sujal actually slipped into the pile intentionally...

"chorro mujhe...badtameez insaan! pehle he barish kee wajah se kapray geelay thay tau socha thaa keh sookh jayen gay aur sahih ho jayen gay per tum ne tau mujhe gira diya...ab tau yeh ganday bhee ho gaye"

"tau kiya sirf tumharay kapray ganday huay hain? mere bhee kapron ka hashr daikho tum"

"uffffffffffff...jangli insaan"

"kiya kaha tum ne? jangli,,,pehle bhoot,ab jangli,,aur kuch kehna baaqi reh gaya hay..."

"haan abhi bhee bohat kuch baaqi hay,,jaisee tum harkatain kero gay waisay hee tumhain main title doon gee...samjhay budhu"

"chalo ji ab ACP Sujal Khanna bhoot bhee hian,junglee bhee aur budhu bhee...khayr! ab utho...koi jagah dhoondtay hain...duaa kero keh log humain daikh ker darr na jayen"

"hahahah! darrain gay tau bhaag jayen gay aur hum unn kee cheezon per qabza ker lain gay"

"sahih kehti ho tum...tum sirf shakal se masoom nazar aati ho,,,ho nahin tum"

"daikhaaaaaaa! main ne yehi tau kaha thaa"

"acha chalo ab baatain band...utho ab tum" Sujal gave his hand to Kashish

"tum uthaao na please...." Kashish was in her naughty mood

"utho gandi bachi! haath tau day rehaa hoon naa"

"mujhe haath nahin poora Sujal chahiye"...and then she realized what she just said

"kiya kaha tum ne....zara phir se kehna" Sujal could not believe his ears what he has just heard

"kuch bhee tau nahin kaha...tumharay kaan baj rehay hon gay..chalo chalain" Kashish had to hide her smile....I think I have began to realize my true feelings for Sujal but lets see what the time has in for us

Sujal again had to hold her in his arms because Kashish's foot was swollen now...

"Sujal! I think sprain keh saath saath mujhe lagta hay ligament tear ho gaya hay...chalo abhi kisi keh ghar chaltay hain help lainay coz yahan per tau koi hospital bhee nahin hay"

Both saw a light coming out of a cottage...they went near and knocked the door. An old man opened it and he saw Sujal holding kashish in his arm,both are drenched and covered with mud..

'Aap log kon ho baita?" the man asked

"Uncle ji! mera naam Sujal hay aur yeh Kashish hain...hum log paas hee keh base camp se aaye thay yahan per aik medical camp laganay...samay ke pata hee nahin chala aur raat ho gayee aur hum barish main phans gaye...agar aap bura na maanain tau kiya hum yahan per raat ruk saktay hain?"

"aray haan haan! kiyon nahin baita...ander aao!!..."OH bhagwan! inn mehmaanon keh liye koi lassi paani lay aa...aur daikh inn keh sonay ka kamra bhee theek ker day" the man called out to his wife....and then an old lady appears with a jug in her hand...

Sujal has carefully placed Kashish on a khattya....and was looking at her foot...

"Haye Dayya! aap log tau keechar se bharay huay hain...udhar nahanay ka paani rakha hay..aap log naha lain..."

"aray nahin aunty! iss kee koi zarorat nahin hay..bus subah tak humain sir chupanay keh liye jagah chahiye thee" Kashish said quickly

"kaisee batain ker rahi ho bittya! apni haalat tau daikho...lagta hay tumhara mard tumhara khayal nahin rakhta"

both sujal and kashish looked into each other's eyes and quickly turned their gazes

"aray nahin aunty! aisee koi baat nahin hay...main apni aurat ka bohat achay se khayal rakhta hoon,,bus yeh mujhe khayal rakhnay nahin daitee" Sujal winked at Kashish while her jaw dropped down

"nahin aunty! yeh jhoot bol rehay hain...asal main baat yeh hay keh..."

"kiya baat hay kashish?" Sujal tried to make her understand not to tell the old couple that they were not married...they might end up losing the place and kashish was smart enough to understand Sujal's eyes...

"kuch nahin aunty...aap bataaiye! nahany ka paani kahan rakha hay...main aati hoon.." Kashish tried to get up but her foot gave her a shooting pain and she just let out a cry...Sujal came to her rescue immediately and gave her support to walk to the bathroom...Aunty has given her saari to Kashish...

"Sujal! mujh se chala bhee nahin jaa rehaa...meri thori see help ker do?"

"Kashish! tum pagal tau nahin ho gayee ho? main nahanay main tumhari madad kaisay ker sakta hoon?" Sujal had astonishment in his voice

"ufffffffffff mere khuda! tum waqai bohat bholay ho Sujal...mera matlab thaa mujhe bus tum uss choki per bitha do,,,main baith ker naha loon gee aur jab main kapray mangoon tau bus haath ander daal ker mujhe kapray day daina...okay?" Kashish hit his head with a slight spank

"Ohhhhhhhhh acha! main kuch aur hee samjha thaa...han sure! why not! bus tum mujhe awaz day daina"...Sujal had a sigh of relief and he walked out of the bathroom...

Preview : Tum uss taraf so jana aur main iss taraf...aur yeh beech main hogee deewaar
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Posted: 15 years ago
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nice part der
relly love their cute,naugty,lovely -dovely talks.
hoping to get glimpse of romance b/w the two in up coming parts.
u very well describe their conditions.
pls cont soon dear.this story is now pacing its speed n geting on my nerves...
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hey...............lovely parts...................the concept is soo good.................the little littel romance is soo sweet......................barish scene was superb....................con't soon
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very sweet and lovely part dear............................enjoyed it very much.......................liked it when kashish said poora sujal chahiye...................and the shararat and care for each other is too cute.......................love is blossoming between the two....................cont soon dear.....................
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Originally posted by: pinky901

nice part der

relly love their cute,naugty,lovely -dovely talks.

hoping to get glimpse of romance b/w the two in up coming parts.

u very well describe their conditions.

pls cont soon dear.this story is now pacing its speed n geting on my nerves...



Thanks aaa lotttttttt pinky....yeah the story is moving ahead in the flashbacks...i promise u ...it won't be disappointing...

watch out for the next two parts...will post them tonight...muahzz

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