~Diyar-e-Dil~ (SK) - 2nd last part - Page 5

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Posted: 15 years ago
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Originally posted by: cute_samrah

hey...............lovely parts...................the concept is soo good.................the little littel romance is soo sweet......................barish scene was superb....................con't soon



Thanks hon!....the preview is just an indication of the blossoming love between them!
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Posted: 15 years ago
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very sweet and lovely part dear............................enjoyed it very much.......................liked it when kashish said poora sujal chahiye...................and the shararat and care for each other is too cute.......................love is blossoming between the two....................cont soon dear.....................




just few more hours 😍
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Posted: 15 years ago
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hey
the update were very nice.
aisa kya hoga that ki piyush Sujal se itna naraaz hai
waiting to know..please continue soon
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Part 9:

Inside the bathroom,,Kashish was thinking: mujhe bura kiyon nahin laga jab Aunty ne mujhe Sujal kee aurat kaha aur sujal ka reaction bhee mujhe acha laga jab uss ne inkaar nahin kiya/...kaheen yeh sirf meri imagination tau nahin...yeh bhee tau ho sakta hay naa keh sirf aunty kee wajah se uss ne aisa kaha ho...Kashish! sudhar jaa...Sujal keh mann main aisee waisee koi baat nahin hay...

Outside the bathroom, Sujal was thinking: yeh mujhe kiya ho rehaa hay? I think i am really falling for kashish,,,pehle uss kee innocence thee...phir uss kee khubsoorti,,,phir uss ka piyara mann,,aur ab uss kee shararat bhari khamoshi!....yeh larrki mujhe sach much main pagal ker day gee....but then Kashish's voice brought him back to the reality

"Sujal Kapray please"

"haan daita hoon"

Sujal took the saari,petti-coat and blouse in his hands and looked at them wierdly..I wonder how these women get to wear such strange clothes..and that too so many clothes...we men are far better...just a jeans a t-shirt and we are ready...we have nothing to do with mix and matching.......arghhhhhh these women...

"here you go Kashish" he just slipped his hand inside the washroom and when Kashish brought her hand forward....both hands brushed each other for a second...and both felt a sensation running down their spines....both of them quickly withdrew their hands...

and then Kashish walked out of the bathroom wearing a tea-pink saari with a navy blue border and blouse...it was a half blouse so her belly-button was visible..Sujal just kept staring at her...she was drying her hair but had trouble standing so Sujal came forward but

"udhar hee ruk jaao sujal...paas bhee mat aana mere"

"kashish kiya ho gaya hay tumhain? pagal ho gayee ho kiya? mujhe mana kiyon ker rahi ho paas anay se...abhi kuch dayr pehle tau" Sujal was shocked at this statement

"abhi kuch dayr pehle kiya Sujal?..kuch dayr pehle baat aur thee,,,ab baat aur hay" saying this Kashish took a step forward while holding the wall

"Kashish...kyon ker rahi ho tum aisa? mujh se koi ghalti ho gayee hay kiya? agar tum woh aunty waali baat per naraz ho tau main sorry kerta hoon aur woh bhee kaan pakar ker aur zameen per murgha bann ker sorry kerta hoon" saying this Sujal squatted on the ground while holding his ears

Kashish could not hold back her laughter and burst out

"Ufffffffffffffffff Sujal! tum bilkul pagal ho! gadhay ho! ullu ho!...main mazaaq ker rahi thee...bhala tum aisay ...(she pointed him from top to bottom)...iss muddy bhoot ko main kaisay apnay paas aanay doon...jaao pehle naha ker aao" and then she handed him his clothes which were a kurta pyjama....

"Kashish! tum ne meri jaan nikaaal ker rakh dee hay....aindah aisa mat kerna warna main jeetay jee marr jaaon gaa...please Kashish" Sujal pleaded her in a way!..

Kashish was deeply touched....sirf mere iss mazaaq ne Sujal kee kiya haalat ker dee hay...

"Sujal! aisay mat kaho...acha I promise! nahin kahoon gee...chalo ab jaao naha ker aao aur fresh ho ker aao phir khana khaatay hain" she sent him in

After a while Sujal came out in white kurta pyjama and Kashish just kept looking at him...he looked smashing hot in white...and she couldn't stop herself from saying

"WOW Sujal! you look amazing in kurta pyjama,,,please pehna karo...pata nahin her waqt jeans charhaye rakhtay ho...u look really handsome in it"

Sujal bowed down and thanks her

"Shukriya Malka-e-Aaliya! aap ko iss ghulaam ka yeh roop pasand aaya...waisay aapas kee baat hay..tumhain saari main daikh ker andaza huaa keh tum choori-daar kee jagah saari main ziyadah achi lagti ho,,jee kerta hay keh tumhain ..." and then he stopped...he didn't want to take it further

"kiya jee kerta hay sujal? bolo naa"

"kuch nahin...chalo khana khayen...ab tau main tumhain support ker sakta hoon naa " he winked at her

"haan chalo..per tum ne adhoori baat chorr ker mera dil torr diya"

"glue laa doon,,uss se jurr jaye gaa kiya?"

"Sujalllllllll! mazaaq chorro...anyways chalo chaltay hain...aunty wait ker rahi hon gee"

Both went and sat down for food..Kashish had some problem bending her foot so Sujal gave her food while she sat on the khattya....after eating the food, they asked for the place to sleep...

"Aunty! Kashish aap keh saath so jaye gee aur main Uncle ji keh saath so jata hoon"

"aray! kaisee batain ker rehay ho puttar jee! bhala hum pati patni keh darmiyan kiyon aayen?"

"per uncle,,main inn kee patni...." Kashish wanted to say something but Sujal pressed her hand

"Uncle ji! actually Kashish kee tabiyyat theek nahin hay aur main raat ko sotay huay bohat laat maarta hoon tau agar meri leg,,i mean meri taang iss ko lag gayee tau aisay hee yeh ghussa ker jaye gee" Sujal tried to handle the situation

"Baita! aap mazaaq bohat acha ker laitay hain..per aap donon keh liye hum ne kamra pehle hee tayyar ker diya hay" He pointed to a room...

Both Sujal and Kashish looked at each other and comforted each other...so they both went into the room because there was no other choice...but once inside the room

"Sujal! yahan per tau yeh aik hee bed hay...aur koi sofa bhee nahin jiss per main so sakoon?" Kashish was worried

"Aray yaar ! parayshaan kiyon hoti ho? abhi iss ka koi solution nikaal laitay hain...pehle yeh bataao! tumhara sprain kaisa hay?"

"its better...warm water se shower liya thaa...aur phir aunty ne sikaayi bhee ker dee...tau swelling tau kaafi kum hay...but i just need a brace now..aur woh tau yahan se milay gaa nahin...so when we will go tomorrow i will just put it on but i am feeling much better...thanks for asking"

"ab tum mujhe ,,yani Sujal Khanna ko thanks bolo gee jisse tum apna friend kehti ho...haan?"

"kiyon? tumhain kiya friend se aagay bhee kuch sun'na hay?" now Kashish winked...and Sujal was amazed at his lady-love's gesture....YES ! I AM IN LOVE WITH KASHISH MEHRA......WOWWWWWWWW! I finally resolved my inner conflict....YESSSSSSS and Sujal gave a wide grin and offered his hand towards Kashish...

Kashish,kept walking to him in a trance....he made her sit on the bed....and wanted to say something when they heard a knock on the door

Damn it! Only when i was about to confess...arghhhhhhh...Sujal went to the door and opened it...
Aunty was there with haldi wala doodh for Kashish's pain..

"Baiti ! yeh doodh pee lo aur yeh kambal rakh lo,,raat ko yahan per thand bhee ho jaati hay aur phir aaj baarish bhee tau hhuee hay naa!!"

"Thank you Aunty ji!" (for ruining my moment..he thought in his head)

"yeh lo kashish! doodh pee lo aur ab solution bhee aagaya hay...yeh daikho yeh 4 pillows hain,,hum 2 use ker keh apnay aur tumharay darmiyan aik deewaar bana saktay hain..aur yeh blanket hay...isse tum use ker laina aur main yeh sheet use ker loon ga..."

"nahin Sujal! its okay! hum log yeh blanket share ker laitay hain aur yeh deewaar bananay kee zaroorat nahin hay..I TRUST YOU" Kashish said it with her angelic smile

these words took Sujal to heaven...he couldn't believe that someone would actually trust him...he was really happy and wanted to thank God right away...he thanked God a million times that night...

"Thank you Kashish and this time you deserved a thank you! Iss main friendship ko mat lay ker aana...you have made my day..and my entire life by just saying those three words...YOU TRUST ME...iss se barh ker mere liye koi baat nahin ho sakti!" Sujal's grip on her hands became tight and both had an eye-lock session....and outside..there were winds blowing and moonlight was shining after the clouds cleared the sky...they both kept looking into each other's eyes when the sudden closure of the window brought them back into the senses...

"I think we should go to sleep..tumhain left side laini hay ya right?" asked Kashish

"doesn't matter...because koi bhee side ho,,hogee tau tumharay barabar main naa" Sujal eyes were sparkling with tears

"Awwwnnnnn Sujal! you are such a sweetheart...Okay then! Good night..sweet dreams" after saying that Kashish slept on the right side...she just fell in to sleep really quick because she was so tired after a long eventful day...

Sujal couldn't go to sleep...he had decided that he would confess his love tomorrow the first thing...and there on the other side Kashish was dreaming about confessing her love to Sujal as well...she didn't want to delay it any more..she had felt it the firs time and didn't want to let it go....

Preview :

"Inn paharon,in ghatta'on,inn waadiyo'n,inn nadiyo'n,,iss aakash,,iss dharti,,aur ooper baithay khuda ko gawah bana ker main tum se kuch kehna chahta hoon"
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Posted: 15 years ago
#45
very good very good....................both are in the verge of confessing..................thats veryyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyy nice...................loved their teasings and leg pullings....................lovely and cute jodi..................cont soon dear....................
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Posted: 15 years ago
#46
nice part
both of them want to confess their love to each other but time is not on their side.
They keep teasing each other while enjoying their stay.
please continue soon
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Posted: 15 years ago
#47

hi sorry for late comment , i have gone for my aunts house ,all the parts good


so sk want to express their for each other

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Posted: 14 years ago
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hy dear sorry main itne din baad aye hoon but mera net utar gaya tha but ab sab normal ho gaya hai toh aaj maine story ka next part dekha sach main bohat maza aya read karne main specialy the rain part and the night part lovely waiting for the next part hope tum jaild post karoo ge with love humaira
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Posted: 14 years ago
#49
SO sorry folks for making u wait...had some personal problems,,,well! watch out for next part...coming out soon,,,:)

Personal Thank you to each and everyone of you who commented and made an effort to read my FF :)
THANK YOUUUUUUUUUU
HUGSSSSSSSSS
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Posted: 14 years ago
#50
waiting eagerly for the update dear
pls cont soon now

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