'An Unknown Mistake' (Horror Mayur N Sajan FF)

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Kanishta

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Posted: 15 years ago

#271

hi the update was mindblowing thx 4 the pm. the castle is a bit scary

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Shivani

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Posted: 15 years ago

#272

hey i just loved it

can u pls add me in ur pm list

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-medz-

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Posted: 15 years ago

#273

wow! awesum!

i was jus starring at d comp!

amazing!

cont soon!

thanx for d pm!

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XDevilsDesireX

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Posted: 15 years ago

#274

OHHH noo if samrat is arrested then how will they come to know about mayank!!
and gunur un dono ko kya hogaya tha??they were out of control!!
and their eyes turned red!!horror update yaar sanu!!!
awesome work sanu dear and amazingggggggg update!!!
the flashback was really cute and the old scenes were very sweet yaar

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Beenish

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Posted: 15 years ago

#275

plz update soon update soon ubdate soon update soon update soon

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urbiiii

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Posted: 15 years ago

#276

hey lovely update yaaar plzz continue sooon

urbi!!!

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topsyturvy23

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Posted: 15 years ago

#277

hey this have been my first ever horror ff i am reading on this forum for first time
it is mind blowing so far
and i am eagerly looking forward towards it
thanks for pm

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Divya

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Posted: 15 years ago

#278

Sanu.. this FF is really nice and different.. Do PM me when you update next..

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Varsha

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Posted: 15 years ago

#279

Hey....hi dear !! First of all really very very Sorry for replying so late.........as I was terribly busy with my exams...u know na this study pressure !! 😔

Now...about your update ....

mmmm.....what to say darling.....it was superb.... mindblowing.... amazing..... scary...... touching..... full of suspense....... but above all.... it was simply Awesome my darling 😉😉

loved the Mayank-Gunan scene....at the starting....they were a lil hesitating to talk to each other.....mm....but later on...when Gunji had a great laugh....n Mayank said ''tum aise hi hasti raha karo achhi lagti ho...'' mm.....it was lovely !! 😉

the Sayank convo was great....full of jhedkanis.....taang kheechna n all .....😆😆

Aww....Nupur is so sweet.....she knew that Sam was lying....still she acted to be in anger....just to make him happy.....lovely....its gr8 !! 😳

Yaar i just love Samrat-Nupur relationship here.......but I'm scared of what will be their future....as the story is progressing.......n also u indirectly mentioned in your reply !! 😕

Omgg....Gunji was about to fall......thank god Sam held her...... otherwise she would have gone...!!

But this really scary yaar.....who was the one pushing her......someone or something must be there !! But aww.....she wasn't able to convince Samrat !! 😔😔

love the way Nupsi n Sam were irritating Mayank.....giggling....teasing...😆😆 .
Their team rocks !! 👍🏼

loved the song dear.....very nice choice !! 😉😉

omg....Mayank drove the car....no actually something made him drove the car to that bunglow.....its scary yar.....n the pic u used for the bunglow was even more scariest !!

the last scene....was even more n more scary yaar .....Gunji....n then Nupsi also !! Bechara Samrat in sabke bare mein sochte-sochte and inn sabko sambhalte-sambhaalte pagal ho jayega yaar !! 🤪

And....now....he's being arrested.....my poor Sammy !! 😭😭
😉
But your every update puts me in a new confusion.......I'm really confused.......Mayank is tensed about going to morena.....bcoz something happened there.... Sam is also tensed bcoz as Mayank said.....something happened there which can break Sajan's marriage..........

but why is Gunjan so tensed ?? She already had been to morena........ then why she lied to Samrat ?? Does she also aware of the incident ........ n if yes then how does Nupur does not ?? She came to the family first......so must be knowing about it !!

But here Nupsi is not all tensed or worried.......!! 😕

And ya.....if Gunji knows something why didnt she reacted when they first talked of going to morena...?? 😕

I know.....iss baar ke liye bahut saare questions puch liye maine......n now I should stop !!

I know dear.....ki mujhe mere sawaalo ke jawaab aise nahi milenge....... so I'll be eagerly waiting for ur update jaana !!

mmm...... i know ab tak toh tum mera comment padhkar bahut pareshan ho gayi hogi na...... kyunki main itne sawaal puchti hoon........ sorry !! 😔😔

But main kya karu yar....... its the first time I'm reading an FF full of suspense n horror........ n its damn interesting......too good.......i just love it to the core !! So main chah kar bhi apne aap ko rok hi nahi pati......😆😆

Chalo....ab main tumhe aur zyada bore nhi karungi......n i'll stop my ques list here..... ok !! 😊

really sorry for taking your so much time !! 😭

But I would like to tell u yaar...... you are first writer I have came across who give such a long long update everytime ............n for that Hats Off to You jaana !! ⭐️⭐️

It was loveliest to the core !! Brilliant work !!

Keep it up !! 👍🏼

love u...
varsha