'An Unknown Mistake' (Horror Mayur N Sajan FF) - Page 26

hey dear superb update yar you deserve this 👏 really awesome update loved it to the core and really really very interesting update do continue soon and thanks for pm

awesome part.....
loved it very interesting!!
please cont. soon!!

res! lots of power cut going on today...I wrote dis comment thrice but evry time power cut!

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Ok so here is my comment!

wat a UPDATE!!!!! 👏

Seriously SUPERB! Sanu di!!! 👏
I so loved d SG nd MN scene! I agree wid mayank gunjan looks rlly pretty while laughing!!!!! gunji shud try more to adjust! 😊 😊 😊
I also liked sammy teasing MN! its so cute! 😳
Y did gunji run to d terrace is understood, but y did she wanna jump of it! 😕 😕 😕
I LOVED d SaJan hug!!!!!! 😳 😳 😳 also their Kiss!!!! 😳 ☺️
D song is one of my current favs!
the flashbacks were.......confusing! 😕 😕 😕

Plz do cont soon wid SaJan scenes!!!!!! (selfish) 😆 😆 😆

luv Adz! 🤗

Heyyyy sana
Fabulous update yaar
Poor Sam he is arrested
Do continue soon
N thanx for pm

Wow wow sana wat an update n wow it was long lol omg omg Sammy got arrested y is gunji trying to kill herself man 1st in terrace she was abt to jump den in hospital wat was dat all abt is she possessed or something n wats wid da eyes changing colors n all it's so so creepy how gunur act In hospital omg sana u r really good in creating suspenses btw there is too many suspenses man how was car controling himself how did dat car stopped infront of dat haunted mansion n where is mayunbtw loved sanu scenes n loved sajan scene wow dey kissed wow wow n wat were sajan thinking abt in bus man too much suspense anyways sana u r really good in writing suspense stories really after 2 parts only I can tell dat u r gr8 in writing n ur imagination r gr8 u jst rock lol continue soon can't wait to read more

it was a great update and really loved it

wowow tht was nice i think something is fishy why samrat want kill his bhabbi and wife.

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awesomeeee updt
loved it
gr8 suspence
wat happen to gunur
do continue soon
n thanx 4 the pm