Zindagi RN ff upd pg 8 note onpg 11 25.7.10 - Page 4

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Posted: 15 years ago
#31
Update was really gud..
Finally Raj n Naina ek dusre se mil jaate hain..Raj kitna khush hai Naina ko dekhkar..
Reyan ko lagne laga hai ki Naina Raj se pyaar karti hai..
God has given one more chance to Raj to prove Naveen innocent n get back his honour..
I hope evrything will b fine now..

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Posted: 15 years ago
#32

Originally posted by: Dhara_s

Hey...u hv got a nice ff going on here..!!!!

Glad that i read the 4 parts in one go...didnt hv to go through the torture of thinking of Rajveer as dead....!!!!šŸ˜‰

Update soon and pls PM me...!!



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Posted: 15 years ago
#33

Originally posted by: prerna1

that was so good
plz continue soon and do pm me too



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Posted: 15 years ago
#34

Originally posted by: dazzling_glory

Superb part

Naina is suprised to see Raj in the hospital and wants to know how Reyan found him, She is extremely happy to see Raj alive and safe.

Raj is equally happy to see her but feels guilty about failing his mission. But now that naina is there both of them will fight together.

please continue soon



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Posted: 15 years ago
#35

Originally posted by: FULTUSI

please next update jaldi likhna,,,,,,aur intezaar nahi hota yaar......aur raJveer naina ke bich thora ROMANCE DALO YAAR





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Edited by Shona91 - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
#36

Originally posted by: esha143

Very nice update...........Rajveer ko hosh aagaya aur v Naina se bhi mila...........ab vo usske ghar pe rahega.........wow.......jaldi continue kar pls.........



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Posted: 15 years ago
#37

Originally posted by: Revolutionbreez

wow shona !!!

gr8 that Raj and Naina met finally !!!!


And as usual naina ne Raj par apni manmaani karna bhi start kardiya hai !!!


Waiting to read more !!!



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Posted: 15 years ago
#38

Originally posted by: ronojoy_ria

<font color="#3333ff">yaar mainne abhie abhie tera yeh fic para its just superb kya likha haai tune rajveer ka accident ho jaata haai aur phir woh jaake naina ke dost reyan ke pass aata haai wow plz jaldi se isse up kar aur haan mujhe pm karna jab bhi up karege samjhe i dont wan to miss it </font>



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Posted: 15 years ago
#39
that was a nice update...
finally they met.. i'm so glad..
thanks for messaging...
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Posted: 15 years ago
#40
Part-5

Takreeban ek ghanta beet gaya hota hai naina ko reyan ke saath gaye huye aur rajveer bas chahtahai ki naina jald se jald uske pass aa jaye usse apne aap par hassi bhi aarahi hoti hai kyonki usne kabhi bhi itna restless feel nahin kiya hota jitna ki vo aaj kar raha hota hai tabhi door khulta hai aur naina andar aati hai
Naina-mujhe laga tha ki shayad aap so rahe honge
Rajveer-(mann mein)ab neend kahan aayegi tum jo mere itne kareeb ho ab
Naina-kya hua sir kahan kho gaye aap
Rajveer-naina itne mahino se so hi to raha tha ab jagne ko mann karta hai khair chodo tumbatao tum reyan ke saath gayi thi na
Naina rajveer ko medicine pakrate huye-haan usse kuch papers par sign chahiye the mere isliyemujhe le gaya tha saath mein
Rajveer-(puppy face banakar)naina please main ab theek hoon mujhe yeeh medicines aur nahin khaani hai
Naina ko rajveer ka aisa face dekhkar hassim aa jaati hai
Naina-sir aap bilkul chote se bachche ki tarah behave kar rahe hai yeh zid choriye aur medicines lijiye jaldi
Rajveer-naina tumhe to pata hai na mujhe hospital aur jahan ka mahol pasand nahin hai aur upper se tum mujhe yeh sab medicines khane ko keh rahi ho please mujhe nahin khaani hai
Naina-mujhe pata hai ki aapko hospital mein rehna pasand nahin hai isliye jab aap ko goli lagi thi aap ali aur pooja ki madad se wahan se bhaag kar kma aa gaye the mujhe pooja ne bataya tha
Yeh sab kehte hue naina ki aakhon se aansoo behne lagte hai usse vo time yaad aa raha hota hai jab usne apne rajveer sir ko goli maar di thi aur fir bhi unhone kuch nahin kaha tha uff tak nahin ki thi
Rajveer-naina please chup ho jayo dekho ……………
Naina-nahin sir please aaj mujhe mat rokiye keh lene dijiye pata nahin mainu aako kitna kuch nahin kaha aa…….aap par goli tak chala di lekin aapne uff tak nahin ki mujhe maaf kar dijiye sir main bohut sharminda hoon apni galti ke liye
Rajveer-meri taraf dekho naina tumhe lagta hai ki main kabhi tumse naraz ho sakta hoon batao mujhe
Naina sirf na mein sir hila deti hai
Rajveer-fir tum apne aap ko kasoorwar kyon samjhati ho tumne kuch galat nahin kiya us waqt humare halat galat the aur kuch nahin naina aur aaj ke baad tum kabhi bhi is bare main baat nahin karogi aur na hi usse yaad kar kar ruogi vaada karo mujhse
Naina-main vaada karti hoon sir ki aaj ke baad main kabhi bhi uiss bare mein baat nahin karongi
Rajveer-that's like my cadet naina ah… singh
Naina rajveer ke muh se iss tarah apna naam sunkar kush ho jaati hai
Naina-ok ab no rona dhona ab aap apni medicines lijiye aur aaram kijiye kal hum ghar challenge
Rajveer chup chap medicines lekar so jaata hai
Agle din reyan apne parents ko receive karne airport chala jaata hai isliye naina aur jass rajveer ko ghar lane ke liye hospital chali jaati hain
Rajveer bed par baitha hua magazine par raha hota hai
Naina-good morning sir how are you feeling now?
Rajveer-much better cadet naina ah. Singh
Naina-very good main aapki packing kar deti hoon fir hum chalet hain mujhe pata hai aapko hospital zyaada pasand nahin hai
Rajveer-vo to hai isme main kuch nahin kar sakta
Fir rajveer ki nazar jass par parti hai jo kaafi der se wahan khadi hokar apni behen aue uske rajveer sir ki baatain sun rahi hoti hai
Rajveer naina ko ishare se puchta hai jass ke bare mein
Naina-oh main to bhool hi gayi sir yeh jass hai I mean Jessica meri behen mere tayaji ki beti jinhe main dad bulati hoon aur tayi ji ki jinhe main mom
Rajveer-hello Jessica
Jass-hi aap bhi mujhe jass bula sakte hain jaise di bulata hain
Rajveer-ok and congrats tumhari hi sagai ho rahi hai naa
Jass-haan thank u but ab aapko bhi aana hai meri sagai mein vaise aap ghar to aa hi rahe hain lekin kehte hain na invite to karma hi chahiye basic manners kyon
Rajveer-bilkul sahi
Naina-chaliye ab hum chalet hain ghar pe mom dad wait kar rahe honge
Fir naina aur jass rajveer ko leke ghar pohunchate hain
Naina-sir yeh hain meri mom ms.sushma singh aluwalia
Rajveer unke pair choota hai
Sushma-jeete raho humesha khush raho
Naina-aur yeh hain mere dad mr. harsh singh aluwaliya
Rajveer unke bhi pair choota hai aur vo rajveer ko gale lagate hain
Fir thodi der baad naina ke dad nain ko rajveer ko aaram karne ke liye guest room mein le jaane ke liye kehte hain
In guest room
Naina-so lijiye yeh hai aapka room aap thodi der aaram kar lijiye fir fresh ho kar hum log lunch karenge
Rajveer-naina……
Naina-ji kuch chahiye
Rajveer- thanks thanks for everything
Naina-aapne jo mere liye kiya hai uske saamne to yeh kuch bhi nahi hai so no need of your thanks keep it to yourself
Yeh kehkar naina wahan se chali jaati hai aur rajveer khada muskurata reh jaata hai

Thodi der baad rajveer neeche aata hai
Harsh-aao beta ab kaisa feel kar rahe ho
Rajveer-main………….
Naina-aap ko aaram karne ko kaha than a ki ghumne phirne ko
Rajveer-main kahan ghum raha hoon
Naina-nahin nahin aap kahan kuch karte hain aap room se niche tak kya ud kar aaye hain
Rajveer-oh isse tum ghumna kehti ho to………
Naina-sir main aapki bhalai ke liye hi keh rahi hoon abhi aap puri tarah se theek nahin hai aap ko aaram ki jaroorat hai
Harsh-naina-calm down vo sirf room se chal kar hi aaya hai koi bhaag kar nahin itne se kuch nahin hoga
Rajveer-bilkul vaise bhi naina main itni der se aaram hi to kar raha tha bore ho raha tha room main to socha neeche aa jaun
Naina-theek hai kijiye apni manmani mujhe kya
Naina gussa hokar wahan se chali jaati hai aur rajveer aur harsh dono muskura dete hain
Sushma rajveer ko juice ka glass laakar deti hai
Sushma-yeh lo juice
Rajveer-aunty iski kya jaroorat thi main khud le leta
Sushma-nahin tum humare bete jaise ho jaisa humare liye shlok hai waise hi tum aur waise bhi naina ne khaas hidayat di hai sabko ke tumhara pura khayal rakhen tum chahte ho ki naina mujhe daante
Rajveer-nahin aunty dijiye waise aap sab naina ko bohut pyaar karte hain na main pehli baar aap logon se mil raha hoon naina ne kabhi mujhe kuch nahin bataya aap sab ke bare main shayad vo mujhe apna nahin maanti dost nahin maanti

Rajveer yeh sab jaan bhooj kar kehta hai kyonki nain un ki baatein sun rahi hoti hai aur uske chehre se saaf pata chal raha hota hai ki vo kitni gusse main hai yeh sab sunkar aur dusri taraf rajveer naina ko aise dakhkar mann hi mann khush ho raha hota hai

Sushma-nahin beta aisi baat nahin hai naina tum pe bohut bharosa karti hai

Is se aage sushma kuch bol paati reyan apne parents ko lekar wahan aa jaata hai
Reyan-hi everybody
Rayan ke father mr.yash kapoor ek businessman hain aur mother kavita kapoor fashion designer hai
Harsh-aayie aayie safar kaisa raha
Yash-safar to hamesha hi tiring hota hai par hum kuch nahin kar sakte karma to padta hi hai
Sushma-bilkul bhai saab aap log baithiye na
Fir sab log baith jaate hain aur reyan rajveer ki intro apne parents se karwata hai
Reyan-mamma papa yeh rajveer hai nain ke dost
Rajveer-numste aunty uncle
Yash aur kavita-jeete raho
Waise naina aur jass kahan hai
Main yahaan hoon mumma
Jass aakar apne honewaale in-laws ke pair chooti hai aur baith jaati hai
Kavita-kaisi ho
Jass-bilkul theek
Kavita-aur iss gadhe ne tumhe tumhari poori shopping karwayi ya nahin
Reyan-maa main gadha nahin hoon
Iss baat par sab hass uthte hain
Kavita-theek hai tu gadha nahin tu gadha aur nalaayak hai

Iss baat par reyan aur bhi chid jaata hai aur sab log hasne lag jaate hain

Rajveer aise mahool main aakar bohut khush hoti hai kyonki aaj usse bohut saara apnapan mila hai aur iski wajah sirf aur sirf uski cadet naina ah.. singh hai

Jass-maa yeh bohut achche hain aur inhone mujhe meri poori shopping karwayi hai
Reyan(khush hokar)-dekha aapko to meri kadar hi nahin hai
Yash-theek hai theek hai ab yeh sab chodo aur batao naina kahan hai
Naina-main yahaan hoon papa
Naina aakar yash aur kavita ke pair chooti hai
Yash aur kavita-humesha khush raho
Naina-kaise hain aap papa mumma
Kavita-hum dono bilkul theek hain mera bachcha

Fir naina unse baatein karne lag jaati hai par rajveer soch raha hota hai ki naina reyan ke parents ko mumma papa kyon keh rahi hai………………….

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