Zindagi RN ff upd pg 8 note onpg 11 25.7.10 - Page 6

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Posted: 15 years ago
#51

Originally posted by: poojabi

pls continue soon.i am waiting.⭐️

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Posted: 15 years ago
#52

Originally posted by: Dhara_s

Nice part...!!!!

Naina ke kitne mom dads hain...!!! 😛😆

Waitin for more RN...!!!!

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Posted: 15 years ago
#53

Originally posted by: dazzling_glory

Superb part👏
Raj wants to be with naina all the time. He becomes restless when she is not around.😳
Naina feels guilty about how she has behaved with him in thepast. seeing naina cry is most painful for raj and so he makes her promise that she will never think about the past.😭
Jass is observing how naina behaves with Rajveer. She also seems to have noticed the chemistry between them.😉
Naina's family gives Raj a very warm welcome and he becomes at part of their family very easily.
Naina, Raj ke arram na karne par sab ke saamne use daant deti hai. She has instructed eveyone to take extra care of him😆
Ab raj ki tarah mein bhi janna chahti hoon ki naina Rayan ke parents ko mom-dad kyun bulati hai..😕
please continue soon

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Posted: 15 years ago
#54

Originally posted by: suhana_dixit

Hi Dear

Update was really gud..
Finally Raj is at Reyan's place..😊
I hope everything is fine now..
Bye

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Posted: 15 years ago
#55

Part-6

Reyan and jass engagement day

jass-reyan kya kar rahe ho theek se khade ho

Reyan-jessica meri maa pichle do ghanto se theek se hi khada hoon

Jass-reyan its jass not Jessica tumhe pata hai na mujhe chid hai iss naam se

Reyan-itna achcha to hai par tumhe pata nahi kyon chid hai JESSICA

Jass-reyan agar tumne fir se mujhe Jessica kaha na toh main ……

Reyan-(coming closer to her)to main kya

Jass-ha..an toh mai…n mai..n tumse sagai nahi karongi

Reyan who is about to kiss her-kya

Jass smiling- haan toh main tumse sagai nahi karungi kisi aur ko dhund lena fir

Reyan-soch lo kahin main kissi aur ko na dhoond loon you know mujhpe aaj bhi kitni hi girls fida hai bhale hi unhe pata hai ke main committed hoon fir bhi vo mere saath hone ke liye tyaar hai tum to……..

Iske aage reyan aur kuch keh hi nahi paaya kyon ki jass ke dono haath uski neck pe the aue vo bas usse dabane hi waali thi ke naina aur rajveer wahan aa jaate hain

Naina-jass yeh kya ho raha hai tum usse maar kyon rahi ho

Reyan-naina pehle meri neck shudwayo fir sawaal kar lena iss se

Jass-nahin di aaj main isse maar hi doongi aap beech mein mat aana

Rajveer jo abhi tak yeh sab tamasha dekh raha hota hai with a smiling face kehta hai

Rajveer-jass pehle uss bechare ka gala to chodo fir aaram se baat kar lena

Jass-nahin bilkul nahin aaj to main isse maar dalongi

Rajveer- agar yeh mar gaya to sagai kiss se karogi

Jass-bhaad main jaaye sagai main kunwari hi achchi hoon

Naina(gusse se)-jass chodo usse …..maine kaha chodo

Jass reyan ka gala chodti hai aur usse bohut hi gusse se dekh rahi hoti hai

Naina-tum dono ko bilkul sharam nahi aati aaj tum dono ki sagai hai aur tum dono ho ki bachchon ki tarah ladai kar rahe ho tum na………

Iske aage naina kuch nahi boli kyonki tab tak jass room se roti huyi bahar chali gayi

Naina-lo ab royegi jao reyan ji manayie ab apni mehbooba ko mujhe nahin pata reyan ke vo tumse kyon gussa hai lekin main apni behen ki aankhon main aansoon nahin dekh sakti isliye jao aur chup karwao usse

Reyan ko bhi bohut bohot bura lagta hai jjass ko rote dekhkar aur wo chala jaata hai jass ke peeche peeche usse manane ke liye

Naina-pata nahi inn dono ka kya hoga

Rajveer-abhi bhi bachchon jaise ladte hain hai na

Naina-bilkul theek kaha aapne waise aap jahan kya kar rahe the aap ko tyaar nahi hona hai kya

Rajveer(smiling)-hona hai main to jahaan inn dono ka shor sun kar aa gaya tha

Naina-oh thaak hai to ab aap jayie aur tyaar ho jayie function shuru hone hi waala hai

Rajveer-naina-actually mujhe tumhari help chahiye thi

Naina-help to pehle batana tha na aur main bhi na bhul hi gayi thi ki aap ke liye yeh jagah nayi hai

Rajveer-koi baat nahi ab chalo mere saath

Naina rajveer ke saath uske kamre main jaati hai

Naina-lijiye aagayi main ab boliye kya hua

Rajveer-wo wo wo…….

Naina-wo wo kya theek se boliye na

Rajveer-naina wo meri shirt jo aunty ne mujhe di thi ka button tut gaya aur usse lagane ke liye mujhe sui dhaaga nahi mil raha hai

Naina-bas itni si baat mujhe laga pata nahi kya hua hoga

Fir naina apne room main jaakar sui aur dhaaga rajveer ke room main laati hai

Naina-layie main laga deti hoon

Rajveer-its ok naina tum mujhe dede main laga loonga

Naina-koi baat nahi sir main kar deti hoon waise bhi aapki arm abhi tak theek nahi hui hai to behtar hai ki main hi kar doon warna agar aap karne lage to poora function khatam ho jayega aapke pohunchne tak

Rajveer(hesitating)-are you sure

Naina-absolutely koi shak

Rajveer(smiling)-nahi par dekhna mujhe hi na lag jaaye

Naina-aisa main nahi hone doongi

Naina rajveer ki shirt ka button laga rahi hoti hai aur rajveer ki nazre sirf naina par hi hai

Rajveer(mann main)-main tumhe bata nahi sakta naina ke mujhe kitna achcha feel ho raha tumhe apne kareeb dekhkar maine kabhi sapne main bhi nahi socha tha ke meri zindagi main aise bhi pal aayenge jab tum mere itne kareeb hogi

Naina-sir sir sir……..

Rajveer-huh……… kuch kaha tumne

Naina-kya baat hai sir kahan khoye huye the aap maine kaha ho gaya

Rajveer-kahin nahin aur kya ho gaya

Naina-shirt ka button lag gaya

Rajveer-oh thanks

Naina-your most welcome

Rajveer naina mujhe tumse ek important baat karni hai

Naina-kahiye

Rajveer-naina aaj iss sagai main media hoga kya

Naina samjh jaati hai ki rajveer ne uss se yeh sawaal kyon poocha hai

Naina-nahi sir aur aap chinta mat kijiye mujhe pata hai ki media ko bulaane ka risk hum nahi le sakte bhale hi reyan famous hai lekin usse pata hai isse aap ko khatara ho sakta hai iss liye usne isse ek private function hi rakha hai jisme kuch jaroori log doctors aur rishtedaar hi honge sirf

Rajveer-oh thanks a lot naina jot um aur reyan mere liye kar rahe ho vo main………..

Naina-aap fires shuru ho gaye apne thanku ke bhajan ko alapna

Rajveer- sorry abse nahi kahoonga

Naina-better

Rajveer-naina-ek aur baat poochon

Naina-aapko mujhse ijaajat lene ki jaroorat nahi hai sir

Rajveer-tumhare maa baba bhi aayenge lekin main unke saamne kaise mera matlab….

Naina-…………………………..

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Posted: 15 years ago
#56
Hi dear😊
im new here read ur fic i lyk it 😊
its beautiful n lovely⭐️
raj is alive n with naina's friend👏
naina n raj mil hi gaye 😊n naina ne raj par order chalane bhi shuru kar diye😆
jas observe naina's behavior towards raj n she also notice the chemistry between them😉
raj ab naina ki family k saath reh raha hai 😎
naina instructed everybody to take extra care of him aur woh raj ko daant bhi lagati hai aaram nakarne par😆
ab naina reyan k parents ko mom-dad kyun bula rahi hai😕
do cont soon😊
plz add me in ur pm list😊

Loves
Naina😊


Edited by Kool_Naina - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
#57
Hi dear😊
lovely update 👏
on engagement day jas aur reyan ki fight ho gayi aur jas rote huye room se chali gayi
😭
naina gets angry on reyan coz usne uski behan ko rulaya hai😡
ab reyan jas ko manane gaya hai😆
lyk raj n naina convo👍🏼
raj hesitates feel kar raha hai naina se button lagwane main😆n starts talking to himself in his mind😆
reyan aur naina ne media ko nahi bulaya coz of raj security😊
naina is ryt raj ko kabse naina se permission leni pad gayi koi ques karne k liye😆
raj n naina k parents main koi problem hai kya😕
do cont soon
plz pm me next tym

Loves
Naina😊

Edited by Kool_Naina - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
#58
bohot bohot sweet up likha haai tune 😊
reyan aur jass ke sagai ho rahe haai😊 par yeh jass aur reyan kitna larte haai bilkul sahi kaha raj aur naina baccho ke tara 😆😆😆😆😆😆😆
raj ke shirt ka button tut jaata haai 😛😉😉😉aur naina raj ka button laaga dete haai 😉😉wow very nice😊
ab plz jaldi se up kar and do pm me
Edited by ronojoy_ria - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
#59
hey dear...i didn't know about ur fic...but i'll read all the parts and comment sooon.. 😊😊😊😊
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Posted: 15 years ago
#60
Nice update
Naina and Raj try to convince Reyan aur Jass not to fight on the day of their engagement.
the scene between Raj and naina was very nice. Naina ko apni shirt pe button lagata dekh Raj kho jata hai...this it like his dream come true. A dream to have naina in his life close by.
He is worried about how Naina's parents will react on seeing him
Please continue soon

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