Zindagi RN ff upd pg 8 note onpg 11 25.7.10 - Page 2

wow shona very nice up naina meets rohan that's nice aur reyan ke baato se yeh toh clear ho gaya haai ke jis patient ko usne baacchaya haai he is cpt rajveer i hope ab jaldi se naina mumbai chali jaaye taki naina rajveer se mil saake

Part-3

Next day naina yeh baat apne doston ko batati hai

Naina-hey guys maine tumhe reyan ke bare main bataya than a uski engagement ho rahi hai

Ali-yeh to bohut khushi ki baat hai lekin aa itni udaas kuon hai

Naina-nahi main udaas nahi hon main to yeh soch rahi hoon ke main kaise ja paongi bc chutti nahin dega

Huda- tu fikr na kar yeh jatt hai na apni phoolan ke liye vo patayega bc ko

Yudi-dude tum to aise keh rahe ho jaise tumhare paas bohut hi achcha plan ho

Huda-oye yudiye plan to hai aur dekhta jayio

Naina-thanks huda par main khud bc se baat karloongi tumhe kuch karne ki jaroorat nahi hai

Naina bc se milne chali jaati hai

Pooja-bas bc naina ko chutti dede to uska mood bhi kuch theek ho jayega

Aalekh-bilkul sahi kuch din academy se door rahegi to man badal jayega uska

Ali-haan issi wajah se shayad vo rajveer sir ko bhool paye

Aalekh-nahi ali rajveer sir ko vo kabhi bhi bhool nahi payegi aur shayad hum bhi nahi

Yudi-right bro chahe rajveer sir ab iss duniya main nahi hain lekin hum unki seekh ko hamesha apne andar jinda rakhenge

Naina bc se milne ja hi rahi thi ki achanak behosh hokar gir padti hai

Naina ko jab hosh aata hai to vo infirmary main hoti hai

Dr.shaliny-cadet tum behosh hogayi thi

Naina-oh pata hi nahi chala

Dr.shaliny-naina ek baat kahon

Naina-offcourse mam aapko kabse poochne ki jaroorat padne lagi kahiye na jo kehna hai

Dr.shaliny-naina please tumhe apna khayal rakhna hoga agar ase hi chalta raha to tum bohut zayada bimar pad jayogi mujhe pata hai tum meri di hui medicines skip kar rahi ho haina

Naina-……….

Dr.shaliny-tum kuch kaho na kaho humse lekin main jaanti hun naina ke captain rajveer tumhare liye kya the vo vahan upper hain lekin tumhe dekhkar khush nahi honge please unke liye hi apna khayal rakho taaki tum unka adhora mission poora kar sakko vaada karo mujhse ke abse tum apna poora dhayan rakhogi

Naina-shayad aap bilkul theek keh rahi hain unke liye mujhe apna khayal rakhna hoga aur main aapse vaada karti hoon ke mainab bilkul bhi aasoo nahi bahaongi

Dr.shaliny-that's like my cadet aura b tum theek ho tum ja sakti ho vaise kyat um bc se milne jarahi thi main kuch madad karun kya

Naina-aapko kaise pata ke main bc se milne ja rahi thi aur mujhe madad ki jaroorat hai

Dr.shaliny-tum nahi jaanti mere jahan bohut saare jasos hain

Naina- kya

Dr.shaliny-jokes apart cadet yudi ne mujhe bataetumahare dost aur tumhari problem ke bare main

Naina-oh yudi mujhe samaj jaana chahiye tha ke aur kaun ho sakta hai kyuon mam

Dr.shaliny-bilkul sahi tumhe chutti chahiye main tume medical ke basis par leave dilva dongi aur mujhe pata hai bc mana nahi karenge to tum befikar ho kar packing karo apne dost ki khushi main shamil hone ke liye

Naina-thanks mam

Naina ke jaane ke baad dr. shaliny bc ko naina ki medical report dikhati hai aur unse request karti hai ke kuch dino ke liye naina ko ghar jaane ki permission dede aur aisa hi hota hai bc naina ko 15 din ki leave de dete hain kahin na kahin vo bhi jaante hai ke naina ko isski jaroorat hai

Agle din naina sabko bye bolkar delhi ke liye nikal jaati hai aur wahan se vo Mumbai jaa rahi hai(ambala main airport nahi hai)

Navin's voice

Meri behen naina ne zindagi main bohut kuch dekha kuch aisi baatein jo uska past haijisse vo kabhi nahi bhool sakti hai jisse uske dost aur rajveer bhi nahi jaanta tha aur yun kahun ke kuch baton ka to mujhe bhi nahi pata tha par aaj vo apni zindagi k eek kadam aur nazdeek ja rahi hai shayad yeh baat vo nahi jaanti thi

Kuch der baad naina Mumbai puhanch jaati hai usne ghar pe kisi ko nahi bataya hota ke vo ka baa rahi hai vo sabko surprise dena chahti hai jehi sochte sochte naina taxi karke ghar pohunchti hai pehle to naina ghar ko bahar se achchi tarah se dekhti hai kyonki vo takriban 1 ya 1.5 saal baad yahan Mumbai ke ghar mein aayi hai aur itni der ke baad aaj vo apne mom dad,mummy papa aur apne bhai aur behen se milne waali hai aaj naina bohut kush hai

Naina ghar ke door pe khadi yehi soch rahi hoti hai ke koi darwaza khol deta hai aur naina ko dekh ke bas usse dekhe hi jaa raha hota hai aur us insaan ki aakhon se aansoon beh rahe hote hain

Naina-hey mom pehchaana yaan phir aap apni iss beti ko bhool gayi hai

To yeh naina ki mom hain matlab naina ki badi ma jisse vo mom bulati hai yeh naina ke baba sushant singh aluwalia ke bade bhai harsh singh aluwalia ki biwi sushma singh aluwalia hai

Sushma-emotionally naina….

Naina-yes mom main hi hoon kya bas aakhon se mote mote aasoon hi bahati rahengi yaan phir apni beti naina ko gale bhi lagayengi

Sushma-tu to meri jaan hai tujhe gale nahin lagaongi to kisse lagaongi bhala aur sushma aur naina gale milte hain

Sushma-chal andar chal sab tujhe dekh kar bohut khush honge

Naina-hona bhi chahiye kyuon mom

Sushma-bilkul

Sab log hall main brthe huye hote hain ki jab jass naina ki behen sushma ki beti apni di ko dekhti hai

Jass-chilla kar naina di…. Oh god aap hi ho ya main sapna dekh rahi hoon

Naina-bas bas pehle shant hoja aur tu koi sapna nahin dekh rahi main hi hoon teri naina di

Jass naina ko hug karti hai aur kehti hai mujhe laga tha ki aap nahi aaoge

Naina-bhala aisa ho sakta hai teri zindagi ka itni khushi ka din ho aur main na aaun kyon Jessica

Jass-di its jass not Jessica

Naina-ok ok sorry jass

Jass better

Phir naina baaki gharwalon se milti hai sirf uska bhai shlok singh aluwalia nahi tha vokissi kaam se abhi bhi newyork main hi ruka hua tha aur shayad jass ki engagement ke liye bhi naa aa paye naina ke dad ne naina ko bataya

Naina-oh koi baat nahi meri usse phone pe baat hoti rehti hai lekin yeh dr.reyan kahan hai

Jass-voh hospital gaye hain unke patient ko aaj hi hosh aaya hai bas usi se milne gaye hain

Naina-really yeh vahin patient hain nai jo pichle teen mahino se coma mein tha

Jass-haan di vahi hai reyan ne aaoko bataya hoga ke vo pehle bhi aapse milne ke liye ambala gaya tha lekin phir unhe yeh patient mil gaya phir kuch kaam ke liye baahar jaana pada aur phir kahin jaakar aapse vo mile hain

Naina-achcha haan bataya tha ke vo pehle bhi mujhse milne aaya tha par yah nahin bataya ke vo 3 mahino se India mein hai

Jass-vo shaam taka a jayenge

Naina-nahin jass jaise usne mujhe ambala mein aakar surprise diya hai main bhi usse surprise dungi aur phir mujhe bhi uss patient se milna hai

Sushant-lekin tum kyon uss patient se milna chahti ho

Naina-pata nahin dad par jabse uske bare mein maine reyan se suna hai kuch ajaab sa mehsoos ho raha hai aisa lagta hai shayad mein usse jaanti hoon bas isiliye socha mil lun mann ko tassali ho jayegi

Sushant-bilkul theek kaha tumne beta lekin pehle fresh ho jao aur phir saath mein lunch karte hai bohut arse ke baad tumhare saath bethkar khaana kayenge kyon

Naina-bilkul dad

Phir kuch der baad naina aur jass hospital pohunchte hain reyan se milne ke liye

Reyan-hey naina tumne mujhe bataya nahin ke tum itni jaldi aajaogi vahan par to bohut nakhre kar rahi thi kyon

Naina-kya karun mujhe bhi nahin pata tha vaise bhi tumhe aur jass ko tease karne ko mauka thodi na chorongi kyon sahi kaha na

Jass-tease karne ka matlab

Naina-matlab yeh hai meri behena ke tum dono to kehte the ki pehle di aur bhai ki shaadi ho jaaye phir hi hium apne bare mein sochenge mujhe lagta hai koi gadbad to nahi jot um don one achanak yeh faisla le liya kyuon reyan you know what I mean

Reyan-aisa kuch nahi hai moti hum bas sagai karma chahte the shaadi to teri shaadi ke baad karenge

Naina-fir to ho gayi shaadi tumhari

Jass-kyon aap shaadi nahi karengi

Naina-filhaal to koi iraada nahi hai mera

Naina,reyan,aur jass baatein kar rahe hote hain ki tabhi ek nurse reyan ko aake kehti hai ki room no 22 ka patient bohut violent ho raha hai

Reyan naina aur jass jaldi se room no 22 pohunchte reyan uss patient ko calm karne ki koshish karne lagta jab naina andar aati hai to vo dekhti hai uss patient ko aur uske muh se sirf halki si aawaz aati hai

Naina-rajveer sir………………

very good update dear.........toh aakhir vo patient Rajveer hi ha...........aur Naina ne usse dekh bhi liya..
ab aur intezaar nahi hotha.......jaldi continue karo yaar..................

yippieeeeeeeee !!!

Hi Dear

Hey

hey i just read your fic... nice concept.. update soon..

Part-4

Naina-rajveer sir……….
Reyan rajveer ko neend ka injection de dete hai lekin neend mein jaane se pehle rajveer ek dhundali si tasveer dikhti hai aur uske muh se halki si awaaz niklati hai naina…….
Reyan rajveer ke muh se naina ka naam sun kar hairaan ho jaata hai aur fir naina ki taraf dekhta hai
Reyan-naina kya tum veer ko janti ho
Naina-rajveer inka naam rajveer hai haan main inhe bohut achchi tarah se jaanti hoon
Reyan-rajveer matlab rajveer singh shekhawat jinki tum hamesha phone pe baat karti thi mujhse
Naina-haan bilkul yehi hai mere sir mentor rajveer sir
Reyan-lekin naina tumne to……….
Naina-baaki sab main tumhe baad mein bataongi kya tum mujhe kuch der ke liye inke saath akela chor sakte ho please
Reyan aur jass bina kuch aage kahe naina aur rajveer ko akela chor kar chale jaata hain
Naina dheere dheere rajveer ke pass ja kar wahan par padi ek chair par baith jaati hai aur fir rajveer ke haath ko apne haathon mein leti hai aur uski aakhon se aasoon bohut hi tez raftaar se behne lagte hain aur rote rote vo rajveer se kehti hai
Naina- aapko nahin pata sir ke main aapko sahi salamat dekhkar main kitni kush hoon aapke jaane ke baad to jaise meri har umeed hi toot gayi ho ab bas aap jaldi se theek ho jayiye fir hum milkar aapke aur bhayia ke gunegaaron ko unke kiye ki sazaa denge
Fir naina rajveer ke haath ko apne haath se nikal kar bed par rakh kar chali jaati hai
Naina reyan ke cabin mein jaati hai jo usse aate hi dekhkar apne sawaalon ki list shuru kar dete hai
Reyan-(ek hi saans mein)naina rajveer ki yeh haalat kaise huyi tumne mujhe iss bare mein kabhi kuch nahin bataya vaise to bohut baatein karti thi tum rajveer ki fir yeh sab kyon chupaya mujhse ab chup kyon khadi ho jawab do mujhe tum…….
Naina-tum bolne ka mauka doge tabhi bolongi na stupid
Reyan-oh sorry ab bolo
Naina fir rryan ko sab kuch batati hai ke kaise rajveer sir ko phasaya gaya col.shakti Chandra ke murder mein kaise unhe 14 saal ki sazaa huyi aur fir kaise unka accident karwaya gaya jeep mein bomb blast karwa kar
Reyan-lekin jab aakhiri baar hamari baat huyi thi tumne mujhr yeh sab kyon nahi bataya
Naina-sorry reyan lekin uss waqt main apne hi gham mein itni doobi huyi thi ke mujhe khud nahin pata tha ke main kya kar rahi hoon
Reyan-its ok naina hota hai kabhi kabhi zindagi mein aisa bhi
Naina-pata hai reyan rajveer sir ne hamesha mera saath diya hai bhale hi vo meri nafrat hi kyon na ho tumhe to bataya tha mene na ke kaise gusse mein aakar maine unpar goli chala di thi lekin phir bhi unhone kabhi mujhe galat nahin samjha unhone hamesha apne aapko ek sachcha mentor saabit kiya hai jo apni protge ki har ek galti ko maaf kar sakta hai
Naina apne rajveer sir ki baatein kiye ja rahi thi lekin usse nahin pata tha ke reyan usse bohut hi gaur se dekh raha hai aur soch raha hai
Reyan-rajveer ko zinda dekhkar kaise naina ki aakhon mein chamak aa gayi hai jo kuch der pehle mujhe uski aakhon mein dikhayai nahin de rahi thi yeh chamak to sirf uski aakhon mein ek insaan ko dekhjkar hi aati thii kya naina rajveer se pyaar….. agar jo main soch raha hoon sach ho jaya to mujhe bhagwan se aur kuch nahin chahiye hoga mujhe pata karma hoga is bare main lekin kaise
Naina-reyan reyan …….
Reyan-hun kya hua chilla kyon rahi ho
Naina-chillaon nahin to aur kya karon tum to apne khayalon mein doobe huye the aur main jahan paaglaon ki tarah tumse baatein kiye ja rahi hoon
Reyan-sorry vo kuch soch raha tha khair chodo yeh sab
Naina-ok lekin yeh jass kahan gayi
Reyan-vo ghar gayi hai mom ne bula liya that um mere saath chalna
Naina-nahin reyan abhi nahin pehle rajveer sir ko hosh aa jaye fir unse milkar hi jaongi vaise ab unki condition kaisi hai
Reyan-condition to normal hai lekin zakham bharne mein waqt lagega unke right arm par goli lagi huyi thi aur sar par bhi gehri chot hai abhi waise shaam tak unhe hosh aa jayaga
Naina-thanks reyan tumhe nahin pata tumne mere liye kya kiya hai rajveer sir ki jaan bachakar
Reyan-shut up moti kya ab tum mujhe bhi thanks kahogi
Naina-ok sorry baba nahin kahongi thanks tumse
Reyan-bas ab mujhe tumse baat nahin karni jao tum
Naina-kya hua reyan maine sorry bola to
Reyan-wahin to ab sorry bhi bolne laggi tum mujhse
Naina-theek hai theek hai ab nautanki band karo kuch nahin kahongi tumse main na hi thanks aur na hi sorry ok now
Reyan that's like my moti lekin naina abhi hum ghar chalet hain shaam ko mujhe rajveer ka chek up karnr aana hai fir mere saath aa jaana
Naina-lekin reyan
Reyan-common naina hum shaam ko waapis aa jayenge aur waise bhi shaam se pehle usse hosh nahin aayega
Naina-ok chalo
Phir reyan aur naina ghar pohunchte hain
Sushma-reyan tumhari maa ka phone aaya tha vo log kal aa rahe hain tumhara phone nahi lag raha tha isliye unhone ghar par phone kiya tha
Reyan-koi baat nahi mom main kal unhe receive kar loonga
Sushant-jass bata rahi thi ki tum reyan ke patient ko jaanti ho kya naam bataya tha haan rajveer
Naina-yes dad main jaanti hoon unhe
Fir naina sabko rajveer ke bare mein batati hai jisse sun kar sab ko bohut bura lagta hai
Naina-sorry jass main yahan tumhari khushi mein shamil hone aayi thi aur dekho tumhe hi waqt nahi de paa rahi hoon
Jass-koi baat nahi hai di kaam to sab ho hi gaye hain bas aap sahi time par tyaar hokar engagement mein pohunch jaana mere liye itna hi kaafi hai aur baaki time aap apne rajveer sir ka dhayan rakh sakti hain unhone aap ke liye job hi kiya hai uske saamne to yeh kuch bhi nahi hai kyon reyan
Reyan-jass bilkul theek keh rahi hai naina tum bilkul chinta mat karo humari
Naina-thank u so much guys
Shaam ko reyan aur naina hospital jaate hain reyan nurse se poochta hai ki kya rajveer ko hosh aa gaya hai to nurse kehti hai haan aur vo aapke bare main pooch rahe the
Naina aur reyan rajveer ke room mein jaane lagte hain jab naina ko jass ka call aa jaata hai aur vo baahir hi ruk jaati hai aur reyan andar chala jaata hai
Reyan-hey buddy kaise ho
Rajveer-theek hoon sorry doctor vo kal maine aapko……..
Reyan-koi baat nahi ho jaata hai aur please tum mujhe dr. mat bulao maine tumhe apna dost maana hai so please call me reyan
Rajveer-theek hai reyan ab khush
Reyan-bohut
Rajveer-reyan ek baat poochon
Reyan-haan pooch na
Rajveer-vo tumhare saath ek ladki thi na main achche se dekh nahin paaya lekin kya tum mujhe bata sakte ho vo kaun thi
Reyan samajh jaata hai ke rajveer ne naina ko dekh liya tha lekin need ke injection ki wajah se vo usse pehchaan nahin paaya hai
Reyan-ladki haan vo meri dost thi abhi bhi jahin hai milna chahte ho to milwa deta hoon lekin kyat um jaante ho usse
Rajveer-pata nahin klagta hai ke main usse jaanta hoon
Reyan-tum ruko main usse bhejta hoon abhi ok
Rajveer-mujhe aisa kyon lagta hai ki vo meri naina thi jaise usne mujhse baat ki ho
Rajveer reyan ke jaane ke baad bas door ki taraf hi dekhe jaaraha hota hai jab door khulta hai to usse apni kismet par yakeen nahin hota ke uski zindagi uska pyar uski naina uski aakhon ke saamne hoti hai
Rajveer-naina……..
Rajveer aur naina bas ek dusre ko hi dekhe ja rahe hain fir naina dheere dheere rajveer ke pass aakar baith jaati hai
Naina-rajveer sir
Rajveer naina ki cheek ko touch karta hai aur apni aankhen band karta hai aur uski aakhon se aansoo girne lagte hain jisse dekhkar naina ki aakhon mein bhi aansoo aa jaaate hain fir naina rajveer ke aansoo poanchti hai aur unhe na rone ke liye ishara karti hai jisse dekhkar rajveer naina ko ekdum se gale laga leta hai
Rajveer-(gale lage hue hi)naina mujhe maaf kardo main apna waada poora nahin kar paya am sorry naina
Naina-bas kijiye sir pehle aap rona band kijiye army waale rote huye achche nahin lagte hain
Fir naina rajveer se door hoti hai aur uske chehre ko apne haathon mein lekar kehti hai
Naina-nahin sir aapko maafi maangne ki koi jaroorat nahin hai mujhto issbaat ki hi khushi hai ki aap theek hai aur yahaan tak rahi vaade ki baat to hum milkar poora karenge usse aap please guilty feel mat kijiye
Rajveer-bilkul sahi kaha tumne naina hum milkar naveen ke gunegaaron ko saaja dilwayenge
Naina-bilkul sahi ab chaliye muskurayie
Rajveer smile kar deta hai lekin fir usse kuch yaad aata hai aur vo naina se poochta hai
Rajveer-naina tum yaahan kaise aur tumhe kaise pata ki main yahaan hoon Mumbai mein
Naina rajveer ko sab kuch batati hai ki kaise reyan ko vo mile aur vo unhe Mumbai le aaya aur jahaan vo apni behen ki sagai ke liye aayi thi
Rajveer-tumhari behen aur tumne kabhi reyan ke bare main bhi nahin bataya
Naina-aisa bohut kuch hai sir jo aap mere bare mein abhi nahin jaante aapne kabhi poocha hi nahin
Rajveer-haan maine kabhi nahin poocha na tumse tumhare baaki parivaar ke bare mein
Naina-koi baat nahin main jald hi aapko sab se milwaongi
Fir dono chup ho jaate hai ki naina ko yaad aata hai aur vo rajveer se poochti hai
Naina-rajveer sir aap bache kaise mera matlab aapki jeep mein blast hote maine apni aakhon se dekha tha
Rajveer-bilkul naina meri jeep mein blast huya tha lekin usse pehle hi main jeep se kood gaya tha aur behosh ho gaya tha jhariyan hone ki wajah se koi mujhe wahwn dekh nahin paaya aur jab hosh aaya to meri haalat bohut kharab thi lekin jaise taise karke main road par aaya to ekdum se mere saamne ek car aa gayi aur main fires behosh hi gaya uske baad mujhe kuch yaad nahin aur tumne abhi bataya ke kaise reyan ne mujhe bachaya hai
Naina-hoon hume laga tha ki shayad aap hum sabko chor kar chale gaye hain
Rajveer-kya tumhe lagta hai ki main kabhi bhi tum logon ko chor kar jaa sakta hoon bolo
Naina-nahin bilkul nahin agar gaye to fir main
Rajveer-to fir tum kya naina bolo
Naina………..
Rajveer……………
Naina aur rajveer ek doosre ko dekh rahe hote hain ki tabhi reyan wahan aa jaata hai
Reyan-so finally tum dono mil liye ek doosre se
Rajveer-tum mujhe jaante ho…. agar haan to kaise
Reyan-maine tumhe kabhi dekha nahin tha lekin tumhare bare mein suna jaroor tha all thanks to naina
Rajveer-oh anywaya thanks reyan tumne mujhe ek nayi zindagi di hai uske liye
Reyan-thanks ki koi jaroorat nahin hai yeh to mere farz tha
Naina-reyan main chaahti hoon ke hum inhe ghar shift kar dete hai tum kya kehte ho inka hospital mein rahna safe nahin hoga na
Rajveer-nahin nain main ghar kaise
Naina-aap chup rayihe aapse nahin poocha hai maine so please keep quite
Reyan-nahin rajveer naina bilkul theek keh rahi hai tum humare saath humare ghr par hi rahoge abse hum koi risk nahin le sakte aue ghar se jyaada safe jagah aur kaunsi hogi abhi
Naina-bilkul reyan aur fir aise aap reyan ki sagai bhi attend kar lenge kyon
Rajveer-tumhari baat to waise bhi main taal nahin sakta theek hai jaisa tum dono theek samjho
Reyan-yeh huyi na baat main tumhare discharge papers tyaar karwaata hoon naina do min ke liye please mere saath aana
Naina-haa kyun nahin waise bhi sir ko abhi aaram ki jaroorat hai
Lekin rajveer ka mann nahin tha naina ko apne aap se door karne ka lekin vo kuch nahin kehta aur naina chali jaati hai…………….